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IELTS Essay Writing -7 (Outdoor Activities)
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Deleted UserDecember 27, 2021 at 11:05 PMOutdoor activities are good for development of children body more than playing computer games. Maximum people believe that the out door activities are good for their children. .As we have to do more physical work and we interact more also with friends which make us more happier and help to improve the behavior of children.
Outdoor make our muscles stronger and children become more active .This happen due to proper circulation of blood when we do more physical activities .For example by running our heart has to do more work and it pumps more blood to the body and also improves the staminal also. Outdoor activities certainly improve the mental &physical health and make the children stress free and cheerful &on the other hand indoor activities make children complacent toward their health.
Outdoor activities are good for health but it depend upon the situation As per current scenario corona we can not send our children outside for playing games as it is not safe .Lot of other disease which are transferable easily is available in air ad children should take precautionary measures o avoid ours elf from this diseases. So best option for them is to play games inside of home and Video game are the best source of entrainment for them all to remain inside of home. Best example in corona times indoor games are most of the favorite choices for all parents and parents feel that their children is safe inside .
In my opinion ,the idea that outdoor games are good for the development of children’s health is true to maximum extent but sometimes it is abysmal in situation of corona & more susceptible to certain communicable diseases.
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Deleted UserDecember 27, 2021 at 11:13 PMWith the advent of technology, more and more kids are now attracted towards video games rather than indulging in physical activities. It is frequently argued that outdoor interaction has a crucial role in a child’s development. This essay will state the benefits of physical activity as well as the role of improving technology in a student’s overall maturity.
Physical activities are considered to be conducive for development of whole body. On one hand, It leads to strengthening of muscles and bones while on the other hand social interaction with individuals of same age group brings out cognitive enhancement. For example, more and more kids are now susceptible to obesity due to lack of play-ground games. Thus, involvement in some form of outdoor activity in vital in proper upbringing.
However, playing video games has its own benefits. Kids become technologically more advanced, moreover they learn to share their belongings and also, they are protected from ferocious outdoor games. For instance, when both the parents are working, elder sibling involve their younger ones in some indoor activities like video games or brain-storming sessions which not only increase their bonding but also malleates their young brain into sharp minds. In this way, playing computer games improves mental growth.
To conclude, this essay argued the pros and cons of play ground fun as well as virtual games in a child’s development. In my opinion physical activity develops a healthy body and video games can bring out a healthy mind when both are balanced with each other. Lack of one or the other hampers the overall development.
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Deleted UserDecember 27, 2021 at 11:21 PMMajority individuals believe that outdoor activities and sports do have a positive impact on children’s development than playing games on computer. This essay will illustrate both, the pros of outdoor activities and the impact of playing e-games on the child’s development followed by my personnel opinion.
Sports and physical activities drive a release of endorphins which helps in alleviating stress thus making an individual feel enchanted all during the day. These activities should be added in a daily schedule from early childhood and the same should be mentored by the teachers and parents so that the kid can cultivate it as a hobby. It has been observed that the students who indulge themselves regularly in sports are much more active and even score better in examinations than the ones who do not impart their time in outdoor activities.
This modern era of revolution, where technology has played a vital role, has impacted children to engage themselves in playing computer games thus falling in a trap of this addiction. Majority of these games are addictive and children spend most of their leisure time playing these games. This sitting job of playing games gets feed inside the subconscious mind and the child often tends to think the same each time which can further lead to neurological disorders. It has been reported that certain students of asian origin who have spent most of their time playing games have developed conditions like post dramatic stress syndrome, short term memory loss, etc.
To conclude, I strongly believe that children should engage themselves in outdoor activities where they can physically workout and remain fit and healthy. Moreover, children should spent least time playing games on computers as those games are really addictive and generally students can fall in this trap.
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Deleted UserDecember 27, 2021 at 11:53 PMSeveral communities believe playing outside improve their mental health , make new friends learn things about how friendship evolve , trust, happiness and society gives promo who life as picture will be however is astonishing part of few also make there point most of billionaire were not playing in garden backyard game of football over lunch and bear.They were glued to the seat working on algorithm to make Spotify or Facebook or YouTube or Various social networking site were generally made by awkward student whose work to sit in garage playing games and making millions while streaming it all over the world. Well, you can’t be James bond in everything although you create equilibrium of both the things as it is said you need water and scotch to make drink , without. other thing is tasteless and devastated for your liver.
People say playing outside improves overall body growth, makes then new friend also this may lead to their game of passion may be basketball, football, strongest man , pro wrestler and many other initiative they can take if put children in activities which may lead being “G.O.A.T”.Taking silver lining out of it 75% of athlete after retiring are homeless and social skills go for toss.
People who stayed in warehouse playing video games are multi millionaire . Yes, it does lead them to be narcissistic and living in another world of their own.Even on small scale they become YouTube with gaming channel and earning more than state head of a bank. Also they do become complacent with there health but they have money to take care of health if they fell sick. Situation is similar two boat floating in sea with equal load and passengers to prevent the board from drowning . Keep both sides (positive and negative equal).
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Deleted UserDecember 28, 2021 at 12:08 AMconclusion is missing – it got lost while pasting it . will add to this in reply .
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Outdoor activity is an important part of children’s health and success, both physically and mentally. Some people think that outdoor activities are more beneficial for children’s development than playing computer games. I strongly believe that Outdoor activities provide a conducive environment for maintaining overall good health
Children who constantly sit at one place playing computer games for hours can face several dangerous health issues. It can increase the chances of obesity, weaken the joints and muscles and make hands and fingers numb due to over exertion. Various studies suggest that it can also make the eyesight weak. Computer games are moreover addictive they may even skip their homework and assignment which can result in poor performance and also affect their emotional intelligence. Such children prefer being alone and interact digitally, this can limit their inter-personal skills in real life. The ferocity of modern games can negatively impact the moral development of the child.
On the other hand, outdoor play keeps the child active and boost their physical stamina and fitness. Exposure to outdoor play can also shape their personality and helps them develop essential social skills. They develop a problem solving attitude, get to explore nature, and acquire new information. Being in the fresh air and sunshine can naturally provide them with vitamin D. Also, outdoor play provides a great opportunity to channelize their energy in a meaningful way.
In conclusion, Physical outdoor activities helps children build strength, focus, self esteem and endurance. Children who play outdoors tend to develop a positive attitude towards life and have a calmer and happier disposition.
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Deleted UserMarch 15, 2022 at 11:29 PMIn modern days, with the advent of computers, activities for children is mainly considered as gaming consoles, watching television and using other sorts of entertainment devices and a lot of other toddlers are stuck with there parent’s mobile phones and the parents are also condoning it as they are busy with there busy schedule. But I believe there should be a limit on these kind of entertainment resources and parent should encourage there children to play outside and teach them how to socialize with other kids.
Firstly, this will help them to grow not only at physical aspects but also there mental abilities will get stronger. Children who do not have physical activities are extremely susceptible to obesity and playing a lot of computer games make them ferocious.
Furthermore, going outdoor everyday will provide them conducive circumstances which will gradually increase there socializing habits to improve the coordination which is a key to grow confidence and the performance in the school , college and likewise it will help them to build team spirit. Another important skill they will get is better decision making which will reduce there impulsive behavior.
To conclude, my opinion is to limit children’s indoor activities and should be motivated to participate in as much as outdoor activities so that they can turn down there complacent behavior and boost there character to become a better person in life.
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Let me start about this topic with a proverb” All work and no play makes jack a dull boy”. This is a very old saying and definitely this proverb is apt for this topic. The advent of technology era which lead to evolution of lots of gadgets like computer ,mobile phones etc had brought the culture of our children ime our future generation glued to it. The quality time spend by the children nowadays tend towards playing games ,chatting and being active on social media.
Nowadays most of the games are ferocity in nature. There was a popular news of a game called Blue whale which had actually misguides the children to become psychopath at the end of the game. The game used to provide a lot of chores of activities to be completed at the end of each game to move forward which lead the children doing them and a stage ending up doing suicide.Children are getting more malleable to the computer due to the present situation of COVID also which has lead to high usage time of these gadgets. In case both the parents are working condone on the children is a big problem and have control issues on the usage of this gadgets which the children.
All parents conducive with a plan to restrict the usage of these gadgets or alot a particular face time with these gadgets and cultivate or encourage the children to participate in social gathering which ends up into games and socialising would result into freshness of the brain activities of the children.More and more usage susceptible causes of mental distress and finally spoiling the health of the children like eyesight and even psychological affects on the children
To conclude the topic I would like to voice out that children should do more of outdoor activities rather than wasting their time on these gadgets.
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