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  • IELTS Essay Writing (children’s leisure activities)

    Posted by Admin on October 13, 2021 at 11:25 PM

    Q. Some people believe that children’s leisure activities must be educational, otherwise they are a complete waste of time.

    Do you agree or disagree?

    Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your experience.


    Use Cohesive Devices:

    • In addition, moreover

    • Further / furthermore

    • In conclusion

    • To summarise

    • As a result

    • As a consequence (of)

    • Therefore

    • Thus

    • Consequently

    • Hence

    • Due to

    • Undoubtedly

    • Indeed

    • Obviously

    • On the other hand

    • On the contrary

    • Generally

    • Admittedly

    • In fact

    • Particularly / in particular

    • Especially

    • Clearly

    • Importantly

    • However

    • Nevertheless

    • Nonetheless

    • Still

    Although / even though

    • Though

    • In contrast (to) / in comparison

    • While

    • Whereas

    Admin replied 2 years, 6 months ago 1 Member · 0 Replies
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