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  • IELTS General Training Task 1

    Posted by isha on December 8, 2021 at 1:36 PM

    IELTS writing task 1

    You would like to work in a different city to
    be closer to your family.
    Write a letter to your employer to request a transfer to another office.

    In
    the letter:

    – Explain why you would like to move

    – Request that your employer place you in a specific city

    – Request that it be completed by a certain date

    Kapil replied 1 month ago 6 Members · 8 Replies
  • 8 Replies
  • Silk

    Member
    December 8, 2021 at 2:12 PM
    100 Network Points
    Activity Points 640

    Dear Sam,

    I am writing this letter in context of moving to Cardiff.

    Currently i am working from Scotland but my hometown is in Cardiff, where my old parents are staying. As their health conditions are deteriorating day by day, and i need to be with them for their care. Moreover, commute to Cardiff from Scotland every week is very time consuming, tiring and pricy. Furthermore, we have a branch in Cardiff which will be 20 min drive from my home.

    Therefore, requesting you to move me from Scotland to Cardiff location effective from 1st Jan 2022.

    Regards

    Silk Somalin

    Emp id -156877

    • isha

      Administrator
      December 8, 2021 at 5:57 PM
      520 Network Points
      Activity Points 6040

      I am writing this letter in context of moving to Cardiff.

      Currently, I am working from Scotland but my hometown is in Cardiff, where my old parents are staying. As their health conditions are deteriorating day by day, I need to be with them for their care.

      Moreover, commuting to Cardiff from Scotland every week is very time consuming, tiring and expensive. Furthermore, we have a branch in Cardiff which will be 20 minutes drive from my home.

      Therefore, requesting you to move me from Scotland to Cardiff location effective from 1st Jan 2022.

      Feedback:

      Please check above given paragraphs for few grammatical errors. Word limit is less that 150,which can lower your score. Avoid silly grammatical mistakes.

  • Veena

    Member
    December 13, 2021 at 4:03 PM
    100 Network Points
    Activity Points 280

    Dear Sir,

    I am writing to request for a relocation to Kochi office.

    As you are already aware My father had an accident recently and mother is having a really difficult time taking care of everything at our home single handedly. So I would like to be with them to overcome this difficult situation and moving forward.
    I can either take any new assignments in Kochi or can continue with the current project itself, that said will be connecting remotely with all the team members from Chennai. I can assure you that I will be capable of completing all my tasks on time without any failure though I am collaborating with my team over video or audio calls. In addition to that, I would like to mention that I will be ready to come back and work in the current base location any time after 3 months and moreover if you want me to continue in Kochi for a certain period, I am glad to accept that as well.

    Therefore, I humbly request you to transfer me to Kochi office as early as possible. Expecting your prompt reply on this.

    Yours faithfully,

    Veena

    • isha

      Administrator
      December 13, 2021 at 7:28 PM
      520 Network Points
      Activity Points 6040

      Feedback:

      – ,my father…

      – to the Kochi office

      – move forward

      – that said I will be connecting

      Veena well tried, You can use some more synonyms here like ‘sensitive issue’ , ‘set back’ , ‘designated work’ etc.

      You need to mention the deadline or some timeline in last body paragraph as per the question.

      Band -2/3

  • Shinu

    Member
    December 15, 2021 at 12:13 PM
    100 Network Points
    Activity Points 430
    • Shinu

      Member
      December 16, 2021 at 2:04 PM
      100 Network Points
      Activity Points 430

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  • Mamta

    Member
    December 15, 2021 at 4:59 PM
    140 Network Points
    Activity Points 2700

    @falak , Ma’am please review it.

    Dear Sir,

    I am writing this letter regarding my transfer to the office of Bangalore city.

    I have been working in this organisation for 5 years and I have never requested for a relocation but now the situation is not in my favour. As you know, I am basically from Bangalore and my parents live there. My father has been facing some health problems since few months and it is my duty to look after him.

    I would like to request you please approve my transfer. So that, I can manage both my duties toward my job and my parents. It would be easier for me to work there as I can closely observe his health along with my project assignments.

    My father will go for an eye operation in the next month. Please approve my relocation by the end of this months. In such a way I can support him in his tough time.

    I look forward to hearing from you.

    Your sincerely,

    Mamta Gulia

  • Kapil

    Member
    May 31, 2022 at 11:45 PM
    120 Network Points
    Activity Points 2510

    Dear Sir,

    I am writing this letter to request you that allow me to transfer my work location to the Jeddah site which is nearby my hometown.

    I have been working with this organization for 15 years, and have presently taken charge of the Riyadh region as a sales manager. My family is living in Aziziya, and I have to stay alone in Riyadh for a long time, so now I would like to stay with my family.

    I would like to request to approve my transfer to the headquarter which is situated in Jeddah, that is around 50 kilometers far from my hometown, thereby I could do up and down from my home to the office.

    As I have to pay my accommodation rent annually which is going to finish at the end of this month, it is better if I can move before the first day of next month, so I don’t have to renew the contract.

    I look forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience.

    Yours faithfully,

    John Nick

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