[Ankit]

Dear John,

I hope you are enjoying your last few weeks of college and ready to start your professional career. Before you get busy with your new life, I would like to invite you to join a grand celebration of my promotion on coming Sunday.

I know you are familiar with my hometown local areas but this party is in outskirts so you have to follow instructions to reach the venue. I believe you will come by bus which is most convenient and pocket friendly for a student. Once you reach bus depot of my hometown, you have to go towards local bus terminal and take another interstate bus going towards Tilak Nagar, get down on Tilak Nagar bus stop and grab a shared cab, inform driver to drop you at red fort taxi stand. Now you are few meters away so take first left from taxi stand and the party hall will be at your right side. Venue name is Grand Inn which is written on top of the building in capital letters.

You don’t have to worry about accommodation, I have already booked a room for you which has the attached washroom and hotel will provide toiletries.

I hope to see you soon.

Best Regards

Ankit

[Admin]

Feedback: Very well executed & approached all three bullet points, Need to work on more complex sentences (Range).
Band: 1.5/3

[Jasmeet]

Dear Komal,

Hi there, I hope you are enjoying the new place after your marriage in Udaipur. I heard it has beautiful monuments, lakes and artistic works as you already are fond of them.

I have a good news to tell you that we just bought a beautiful house in Jaipur and my father has planned to organize a house-warming ceremony for all our relatives and close friends. You surely have to attend the ceremony.

After the rituals of house-warming in the morning, the party will be organized in the evening in the Hotel Ginger near our new residence and the address is enclosed with the letter for your convenience. You can directly hire a taxi or board the bus to reach the Jaipur. I will pick you up from the Jaipur bus stop and then we both will head to our home in our car. In case of any problem reaching here, do text me.

I really want you to be a part of this celebration. We’ll gonna have lot of fun. I would really appreciate if you could come prior to one day.

Well, let me finish here. I am eagerly waiting for your reply to this letter.

See you,

Jasmeet

[Admin]

Feedback: Approach is quite good, Found less use of Grammatical Range & also unnecessary Grammatical error –
We’ll gonna have lot of fun – Incorrect
We’ll have lot of fun-
Band: 1/3

[Prabh]

Hi Rapal,

Hope you are doing well.

I would like to invite you in 50th anniversary of my parents which is held on 20th of next month. As you know, this is a golden jubilee so I’m planning to organize a grand party on this occasion. moreover, inviting all the specials ones to make this moment more memorizing and stunning, therefore, your presence is most significant.

Also, I have booked the destination “Hills Farm House” in Himachal where party to be held and to make this trip more convenient I have arranged both side transport for everyone. So, you have to come directly at my home Janakpuri, Delhi and try to reach atleast two days before so that we can spend more quality time together.

In addition, you don’t need to worry about your accommodation because we have sufficient space in our house so, you may stay here as long as you wish and apart of, after reaching at party’s destination, I have already arranged hotel’s room for everyone to stay conveniently.

Thank you in advance!

Best wishes

Prabh

[Prabh]

Please ignore this.

[Prabh]

Hi Rapal,

Hope you are doing well.

I would like to invite you in 50th anniversary of my parents which is held on 20th of next month. As you know, this is a golden jubilee so I’m planning to organize a grand party on this occasion. moreover, inviting all the specials ones to make this moment more memorizing and stunning, therefore, your presence is most significant.

Also, I have booked the destination “Hills Farm House” in Himachal where party to be held and to make this trip more convenient I have arranged both side transport for everyone. So, you have to come directly at my home Janakpuri, Delhi and try to reach atleast two days before so that we can spend more quality time together.

In addition, you don’t need to worry about your accommodation because we have sufficient space in our house so, you may stay here as long as you wish and apart of, after reaching at party’s destination, I have already arranged hotel’s room for everyone to stay conveniently.

I would like you to join this event and thank you in advance!

Best wishes

Prabh

[Admin]

Feedback: Need to work on Introduction & required information as all thee bullet points were not approached accordingly.
Band: 1/3

[Rashmi]

Dear Jimmy

Hope this letter finds you in radiant health and spirit. I am doing much better, having successfully fought and overcome the Covid infection. I am writing to you for extending this warm invitation for joining me and my family for celebrating my 18th birthday on 31st of June this year.

Having been friends for over a decade, I know you truly understand how excited I am and how much this birthday means to me, as I attain majority and a right to have a driving license. My dad has already promised me my dream car, a pastel pink “Audi”, which has doubled my enthusiasm and am elated to say the least.

Since, we have shifted to our new villa at Central Hyderabad, I suggest you take the flight to the Rajiv Gandhi Airport and then take a pre-paid cab straight to the iconic, Life Style building as our Villa is bang opposite and is easily identifiable by its pink and green portico roof.

As for your accommodation, since our villa has 5 bedrooms, I have specifically requested my parents to spare the roof-top room for your stay, so that we both can enjoy together and re-live our golden memories, savouring home made cookies and tea in the balcony, which overlooks a enchanting small lake behind the villa.

I cannot wait to receive you and am eagerly looking forward to meeting you.

With lot of love,

Your friend forever

Jossie

[Admin]

Feedback: Content is sufficient but execution again got failed, Really need to work on Sentence formation – (me & my family ‘Should be” My family & I) & also need to understand the use of “Having” as it should not be used in any condition with “Gerund Form”.
Band: 1/3

[rahul]

Dear ABC,

I would like to invite you for the birthday party of my child at Taj Hotel in Mumbai on coming Saturday. As it will be his first birthday so we all family members are very excited to celebrate this with our relatives and close friends on large scale.

Further most of our guest were travelling from different city so for their convenience, we have an arrangement with a travel company which provide cabs facility outside the airport. These cabs can drop all the guest at the venue, but you must contact the travel company one day in advance for sharing the arrival time at the Mumbai airport so that driver can pick you on time. Please note the contact number of travel company is 1233444.

In addition, we have also booked few rooms in the hotels for the accommodation of the guest at night after the party as this will be the leisure time for all of us to stay together and have some fun after a long time.

Thank you in advance!!

Best Wishes

XYZ

[Admin]

Feedback: Really need to work on the requirement of bullet points & sentence formation along with grammatical errors: “so we all family members”, “most of our guest were travelling”, “a travel company which provide”

Band: 1/3

[Femmy]

Dear Jane ,

How are you? Every thing working well ? I can’t believe it’s been a month since we last met . Well now the wait is over as I am organizing the party at my home. Of course , you are invited and this time I am not listening any excuse . You have to come and see me

I am so excited to share the wonderful news that finally my brother has cracked the IAS exam. You know that these exams are not everyone’s cup of tea. Despite of failures, he never gave up and he finally cracked the exam .My parents are throwing a surprise party for him. Oh! Good news needs to be celebrated .

Also, I know you are extremely bad with the directions , so guiding you in advance how to reach the venue. As you will enter the Marina Street, take left and you will see In bold letters ‘PARK AVENUES’ . It won’t be a problem for you as it is very popular and by any chance you missed the direction, you can ask anybody .

Dearie, you need not to worry about the accommodation as we have made arrangements for that . Not only we have booked the hotel rooms but also you are most welcome to stay at my home. It’s totally your choice in either way you feel more comfortable.

With love,

Emma

[Admin]

Feedback: Really need to work on the requirement & the parameters as instead approaching bullet points irrelevant information was exaggerated till 229 words as it should be up to 280 max. Sentence formation is not up to the mark as found in introduction.

[Naheda]

Dear Neha,

How are you doing? I know I haven’t talk you to in a while as I was so busy with shifting to new house recently. Anyways I am writing to invite you to our new house warming party.

I am planning to organize a for a small party on next Sunday that is 20th June at my new residence. I would like you to come with your family. I am inviting all our class mate and it would be surely a great get together after a long time.

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[Shazia]

Dear Payal,

Hi there, I hope you are doing well .It’s been long time since we met. Moreover i have been busy from few days with my exam preparations. Anyways you will be glad to hear that my husband and all of our family members got PR for Canada and we are planning to shift there .so, we are inviting all our friends to bid a farewell party. You along with your family are invited to attend the party and be a part of our celebrations.

My family members ,some of our relatives, and few of our friends are expected to be present at the party .

I hope you haven’t forgotten my home address. But in case if you don’t remember my address just ping me.

l look forward to seeing you at the party.

See you ,

xyz.

[Shyam]

Dear Norman,

I hope everything is hunky-dory at your end. Since it is very long time we are connected in-person. As you aware I am completing 10 golden years of marriage anniversary. So on this occasion I have a get-together party in Milan hall which is near to my residence. And I have invited some bosom buddy. With this we all will meet and recall our past quality time we spend jointly.

If you are planning to reach there by public transport, I would suggest metro will be approachable, as this venue is clearly visible and very close to last metro station of blue line in north direction. And your personal vehicle will be more flexible and suitable as you can come to my home and I will guide you further.

And one another point do not worry about accommodation, the party hall is very spacious and we already booked guest room over there. As other our mate also staying for few days. As they planned for sight seen, water park and visit for zoo as well.

I am eagerly waiting for you.

See you soon.

[Dhaval]

Hi Asmita,

Hope you had a relaxing weekend last week after a long business trip. I want to give you an update about my promotions declared last week. I have decided to have a small party to celebrate this achievement on coming Sunday.

The venue for this party is at Hotel Welcome at Country Side. I know that it is very far from your home but you need not to worry about the transportation. You can take a city bus for the Khanderao Market stop. After crossing the street road towards the Main court, you will get a shared rickshaw for the reaching the Hotel as it won;t cost you much. I will also share the location link on your Whatsapp so you won’t find it difficult to reach to the Hotel.

Please don’t forget to bring you night clothes as I am afraid that party will last till late night & you won’t find the bus to return to your home. I have already booked some rooms at the same hotel so that you can stay back comfortably at night.

I am very excited to see you my friend & to celebrate this special occasion.

Best regards

Dhaval