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  • IELTS Letter Writing -3

    Posted by Chandan on June 8, 2021 at 8:33 PM

    You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

    A friend of yours recently gave you a nice birthday present.

    Write a letter to your friend. In your letter,

    – thank her for the present and say why you particularly like it
    – describe some other presents that you received
    – explain some of the things you did on your birthday.

    You should write at least 150 words.

    rahul replied 1 year ago 3 Members · 3 Replies
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  • Femmy

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    June 9, 2021 at 12:50 AM
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    Dear Emma,

    How are you ? I hope this letter finds you well . It’s been so long that we haven’t met each other. You are such a sweetheart , you never failed to surprise me.

    Thankyou for sending me such an amazing present . After opening the present ,I felt so special when I saw Series 6 I-Watch and that too in rose gold color. How do you know that I badly wanted this watch . Especially ,I liked the watch because of it’s packaging. Every time you think out-of-the box.

    Also, I am so excited to tell you about the other presents that I received on my birthday . Not only my brother made me a beautiful collage of our photos but also he gave me a greeting card . Besides that ,My grand mother gave me an antique necklace , I wore it on the same day .

    To be honest ,I was missing you badly on my special day as my parents arranged a surprise birthday party for me where all my relatives and close friends were invited. I also visited NGO to distribute clothes to the needy people. You know, I feel extremely satisfied after doing great cause.

    Take care and write back soon.

    Jane

    • Chandan

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      June 9, 2021 at 10:46 AM
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      Feedback: Kindly work on the approach & requirement of letter, didn’t seem as a letter format.

  • rahul

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    June 9, 2021 at 9:26 PM
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    Hi ABC,

    I am writing this letter to let you know about how much I like the birthday present sent by you and this was the best gift I have ever received on my birthday.

    First, I am very thankful to you for such a wonderful gift which is iPhone 12. I am quite impressive with this gift as from very long time I am planning to buy it and finally I received the same on my birthday. After the birthday party when I opened all my gifts, I was surprised to see such an expensive gift and there is no limit of my happiness. Even though all the features given in iPhone 12 is mind blowing but the one thing I attracted the most is camera quality.

    Furthermore, I received so many other gifts like photo frame from my brother, T-shirt from my father and chocolates from my office friends. I like all these gifts as these are not only presents but the expression of love from your closed ones.

    Lastly, I enjoyed the most at my birthday party as we did lot of fun activities, clicked picture as well as played games. Even the Italian food served at the party was very delicious. Apart from all these activities and gifts, no one can ever complete your absence at the party and hope to see you next year at my birthday.

    Missing you so much and Lots of love.

    Rahul

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