[Vaibhav]

Dearest John,

I hope this letter finds you well. I am Vaibhav Hajela, the guy who met an unfortunate accident last summer at times square and you were the one who helped me through my treatment and recovery procedure.

Mate, thank you so much for all the trouble you took to help me out during my tough days. As I was away from my family and friends while I met this accident, I was in dire need of someone who can take care of me and you truly acted as a close buddy there, you did not allow me to feel a single moment as if I am alone. The compassion you showed eased my physical pain and your humour boosted my psychological recovery. I am also impressed with your charming personality indeed, it is a rare talent certainly.

Next month, we are celebrating my successful recovery with close friends and family, I would like to take this opportunity to invite you and your loved ones over this warm dinner, kindly accept this invitation token as a token of appreciation for all the favours you did to me.Needless to say, my wife and kids are equally eager to meet you and your family in person, your presence will be awaited.

Thanks,

Vaibhav

[Abhinav]

Excellently written letter.

You could have written in line: “the address and the directions are attached with the letter, so that you don’t find it difficult to reach.”

Apart from that I do not have any other feedback.

Job well done.

Band Score: 2.5/3.0

[Vaibhav]

Feedback Noted, Thanks a lot Abhinav Sir.

[Praveen]

[Nilesh]

Dear John,

How are you and your family? I hope everything is fine at your end. Allow me to introduce myself. I am Nilesh, staying in Thane. May be you are not knowing me well but because of you only I am alive today in sound health condition. Hence, I am writing this letter to express my sincere gratitude towards you more saving my life during that horrified accident.

Remember! two weeks back, there was an accident between car & truck which was took place just in front of your Hotel. Unfortunately, I was in that car. I was traveling to Nashik from thane to meet my sister on the occasion of Rakshabandhan. That accident was happened due to the back hit by the truck. The truck had hit so hard which resulted into left wrist fracture & major bruises to me . I was absolutely petrified cause of that incident but suddenly you came from nowhere and took me out from that shattered car & without any hesitation and without wasting of any single moment you took me to the nearby hospital. That span was very crucial for getting immediate medical assistance for me & this was possible only because of you only. I got discharged from hospital after 2 days and that time, I took your contact details from hospital. I know, during that two days you have well taken care of me also you have informed my family about this incident. My wife and kids was in panic condition after hearing about me.

Now, I am perfectly alright. Hence, Me and my wife inviting rather insisting you and your family to visit our house during this weekend to spend few joyous moment with us. We will be very great-full if you accept our request. Upon your confirmation, I will send my driver to pick you up from your home.

Thank you once again for everything you did for me.

Take care.

Yours Faithfully,

Nilesh S