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  • Posted by isha on April 28, 2022 at 8:52 PM

    You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect.

    Write a letter to the editor of the magazine. In your letter:

    • correct the information in the article
    • explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information
    • suggest what the magazine should do about this situation

    Write at least 150 words.

    isha replied 1 month, 4 weeks ago 11 Members · 19 Replies
  • 19 Replies
  • Banumathy

    Member
    April 28, 2022 at 8:54 PM

    Dear Sir/Madam,

    I am writing this letter to inform you that an article about my hometown which has been published in your magazine recently has got some wrong information.

    Since the article was about my hometown, I found it quite interesting to go through it in detail. Though, most of the particulars were rightly mentioned but few details about the places in and around my town were mentioned wrongly. The places around my birth place are Chennai Central, Beach, Perambur and Villivakkam. But, in your article Tambaram is given which is very far from that spot.

    Wrong details will lead confusion among the readers and mislead them when they visit the place. Being a best sold magazine it is always better to publish the correct particulars after collecting the datas from reliable sources.

    Please take necessary action at the earliest to edit and reprint the write-up in your next week edition.

    Thanking you,

    Yours faithfully,

    Banumathy

    • isha

      Administrator
      April 29, 2022 at 7:20 PM

      Dear Sir/Madam,

      I am writing this letter to inform you that an article about my hometown which(that) has been published in your magazine recently has got some wrong information.

      Since the article was about my hometown, I found it quite interesting to go through it in detail. Most of the particulars were rightly mentioned, but few details about the places in and around my town were mentioned wrongly. The places around my birthplace are Chennai Central, Beach, Perambur and Villivakkam. But, in your article, Tambaram is given which is very far from that spot.

      Wrong details will lead(cause) confusion among the readers and mislead them when they visit the place. Being a best-selling magazine, it is always better to publish the correct particulars after collecting the datas(data) from reliable sources.

      Please take necessary action at the earliest to edit and reprint the write-up in your next week’s edition.

      Thanking you,

      Yours faithfully,

      Banumathy

      Feedback:

      Bhanumathy Ideas are coherent but clarity about (Incorrect information) is missing.

      You have to make it clear in the first para ,whats wrong in that article.

      In second para write about it more clearly.

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  • Sherry

    Member
    April 28, 2022 at 8:55 PM

    Dear Mr. James,

    I am Sherry from Maharashtra, writing this letter to inform you that there is a mistake noted about my town Nasik in an international magazine and I would like to bring to your notice.

    In Times Square Magazine, I found a mistake it was mentioned Nasik is a city of Tomatoes, rather it is a city of Grapes. Nasik is well known as Wine City because here on the farms we can see huge grapes cultivation and it has the best climatic conditions to grow grapes.

    International tourists often buy Times Square Magazine for their leisure purpose during their travel, to kill the time. So, it is very important to give the contents in the magazine with detailed research. Otherwise, this can mislead people and they tend to end up with wrong information about specific things.

    I would suggest all the copies which are published on 24<sup>th</sup> October 2021 should be not circulated as they contain wrong information. The publishers should always cross-verify before it is printed.

    Looking forward to seeing to this matter asap.

    Thanks,

    Yours Sincerely,

    Sherry

    • isha

      Administrator
      April 29, 2022 at 7:31 PM

      Dear Mr. James,

      I am Sherry from Maharashtra. I am writing this letter to inform you that there is a mistake noted about my town, Nasik, in an international magazine and I would like to bring it to your notice.

      I discovered an error in Times Square Magazine, which stated that Nasik is a city of tomatoes when, in fact, it is a city of grapes.Nasik is well known as “Wine City” because here on the farms we can see huge grapes cultivation and it has the best climatic conditions to grow grapes.

      International tourists often buy Times Square Magazine for their leisure purposes during their travels to kill time. So, it is very important to support the contents of the magazine with detailed research. Otherwise, this can mislead people and they tend to end up with the wrong information about specific things.

      I believe that all the copies published on October 24 should not be distributed because they contain incorrect information.The publishers should always cross-verify before it is printed.

      I am looking forward to seeing this matter resolved as soon as possible.

      Thanks,

      Yours sincerely,

      Feedback:

      Check out the words and sentences in bold for corrections.

      Be careful about grammatical errors and the right choice of words.

      Band score: 2/3

  • Aanchal

    Member
    April 29, 2022 at 7:36 PM

    Dear sir/madam,

    After having seen your article in your travel magazine last weekend which wrote about various places to visit in Kurali and entry fee. I saw some error in the provided information.

    You mentioned in the article about Rose garden that carnival is held twice a year and there is also entry fee for visiting that place. However, carnival is held once a year and entry is fee for all the visitors.

    Thus, I would request you rectify the mistakes as it will affect the tourists because it will disappoint them and they won’t able to see the carnival for which they have arrived. Also, money they spent on trip will be wasted. Above all these mistakes it will hamper the goodwill of our country and state.

    I would request to make up for the mistake which you have done. A fresh article should be published stating error committed and mention all the correct information. So that the trust of audience stays intact.

    If you require any information, feel free to contact me.

    Your sincerely

    Aanchal

    • isha

      Administrator
      May 4, 2022 at 3:23 PM

      Dear sir/madam,

      After having seen your article in your travel magazine last weekend, which talked about various places to visit in Kurali and the entry fee, I saw some errors in the provided information.

      You mentioned in the article the Rose Garden, where the carnival is held twice a year, and there is also an entry fee for visiting that place. However, the carnival is held once a year and entry is free for all visitors.

      Thus, I would request that you rectify the mistakes as it will affect the tourists because it will disappoint them and they won’t be able to see the carnival for which they have arrived. Also, the money they spent on the trip will be wasted. Above all these mistakes, they will hamper the goodwill of our country and state.

      A new article should be published stating the error committed and mentioning all the correct information so that the audience’s trust stays intact.

      If you require any information, feel free to contact me.

      Yours sincerely

      Feedback:

      Please go through the corrections. Some of them are grammatical errors and need to focus on right use of articles.

      • Probir

        Member
        May 25, 2022 at 2:01 AM

        Dear Sir/Madam,

        I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction about the wrong information published in your magazine’s latest edition about my city. I am a citizen of Kullu, Himachal Pradesh, India. I am working as a travel agent and a regular subscriber of your esteemed magazine.

        I am grateful that your magazine written about our town, and it will surely boost up the tourism. However, it contains some wrong information about the location of the town that leads tourist to different place. Our town is at the south west part of Himachal Pradesh, whereas in magazine it’s mentioned in the south east. I believe the readers of your magazine get misguided with this information, and this may results in decline in tourism and loss of business for local people.

        I believe that the best way to rectify this, is to republish the edition with the correct information, it will not only beneficial for people of our town but it also increase the trust of your readers about the authenticity of magazine’s content.

        I hope this matter will receive your immediate attention.

        Yours sincerely,
        Probir Chakraborty

        • isha

          Administrator
          May 26, 2022 at 4:43 PM

          Feedback:

          Words in bold are corrections.


          Grammatical errors are there.


          Ideas are well organized.

          I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction about the wrong information published in your magazine’s latest edition about my city. I am a citizen of Kullu, Himachal Pradesh, India. I am working as a travel agent and a regular subscriber of your esteemed magazine.

          I am grateful that your magazine has written about our town, and it will surely boost tourism. However, it contains some wrong information about the location of the town that leads tourists to different place. Our town is in the south west part of Himachal Pradesh, whereas in the magazine it’s mentioned in the south east. I believe the readers of your magazine get misguided with this information, and this may result in a decline in tourism and loss of business for local people.

          I believe that the best way to rectify this is to republish the edition with the correct information. It will not only be beneficial for the people of our town, but it will also increase the trust of your readers about the authenticity of the magazine’s content.

          I hope this matter will receive your immediate attention.

  • Diviya

    Member
    May 25, 2022 at 6:45 PM

    Dear Editor,

    I am writing this letter to inform and notify you on the false information posted about famous Meenakshi Temple in your last week magazine under article “Heritage”.

    In that article, it was mentioned that the Meenakshi Temple is located at the bank of the Cauvery river and it was built by Chozha Emperor. Actually, the temple is located at the bank of River Vaigai and it was built by Pandian Emperor.

    As a reader of your magazine, I initially astonished on seeing a false information published in a renowned magazine where many young readers are following the articles published in it . I believe that a magazine or a newspaper plays a major role in delivering the facts and truths to the people and especially renowned and reputed magazine like “Frontline” should pay more attention on the facts before publishing. So, I request you to repost the article in the next week publish of the magazine with the proper facts and truths.

    Thank you

    Yours faithfully,

    Diviya

    • isha

      Administrator
      May 26, 2022 at 4:49 PM

      Dear Editor,

      I am writing this letter to inform and notify you of the false information posted about the famous Meenakshi Temple in your last week’s magazine under the article “Heritage”.

      In that article, it was mentioned that the Meenakshi Temple is located on the bank of the Cauvery river and was built by Chozha Emperor. Actually, the temple is located on the bank of the Vaigai River and was built by the Pandian Emperor.

      As a reader of your magazine, I was initially astonished to see false information published in a renowned magazine where many young readers are following the articles published in it. I believe that a magazine or a newspaper plays a major role in delivering facts and truths to the people, especially renowned and reputed magazines like “Frontline,” which should pay more attention to the facts before publishing. So, I request that you repost the article in the next week’s publication of the magazine with the proper facts and truths.

      Thank you.

      Feedback:

      – Check corrections marked in bold.

      – Use right prepositions.

      – Well structured.

  • Nikita

    Member
    May 29, 2022 at 12:35 PM

    Dear Sir/Madam,

    I am writing this letter to bring to your notice that I came across an article in your esteemed magazine which stated an incorrect information regarding my hometown ‘New Delhi’.
    According to the article , it was mentioned that Qutub Minar was built by Shah Jahan which is false as it was constructed by Qutub al-Din-Aibak.
    Being a proud citizen of my country, it is my duty to correct this false information as it is reflects our country’s glorious history to millions of your readers. I suggest you to act upon this situation and correct this in your next issue.

    Thanks,
    Your’s sincerely,
    Nikita Nagpal.

  • Bhagyashri

    Member
    February 1, 2023 at 12:51 AM

    Dear sir,

    I am writing this letter to inform you about the error in the article of international travel magazine. Article is about the town Jalgaon which is my native place. Upon reading I gathered that information about the public transport is miss leaded. Article states that there is no Railway station in Jalgaon so one cannot travel by train to this town. On contrary not only Jalgaon has a railway station but it is a junction too. So, it is possible to travel to Jalgaon via train.

    It is very necessary for the magazine to correct this information as many people rely on this magazine for assistance in their travelling. Such type of false information can misguide travelers. Right information about public transportation is very crucial while traveling to an unknown destination.

    My suggestion is to publish a new Article on public transport in Jalgaon and inform your readers about this issue.

    I request you to please acknowledge this issue and resolve it as possible as soon.

    Thankyou,

    Yours sincerely,

    Bhagyashri Narkhede

    • isha

      Administrator
      February 2, 2023 at 8:19 PM

      Dear sir,

      I am writing this letter to inform you about the error in the article of international travel magazine.

      This article is about the town of Jalgaon, which is my native place. After reading, I concluded that the information about public transportation is deceptive. The article states that there is no railway station in Jalgaon so one cannot travel by train to this town. On the contrary, Jalgaon not only has a railway station, but it is also a junction.So, it is possible to travel to Jalgaon via train.

      It is very necessary for the magazine to correct this information, as many people rely on it for assistance in their travels. Such false information can misguide travelers. The right information about public transportation is very crucial while traveling to an unknown destination.

      My suggestion is to publish a new article on public transport in Jalgaon and inform your readers about this issue.

      I would appreciate it if you could please acknowledge this issue and resolve it as soon as possible.

      – Focus on the use of articles like’the’

      -Paragraphing should be right

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  • Rajesh

    Member
    February 1, 2023 at 5:00 AM

    Dear Sir,

    I want to highlight the recent mistake in one of the article which was published in the January edition of your magazine ‘The Quest’. The map of the state Maharashtra was depicted incorrectly, in which the entire district of my town was shown in neighboring state.

    It is important to show the correct geographical boundaries of province as people have emotions attached to it. Sometimes these small mistakes can take political flavors which does not create a conducive environment for peace, for which we all strive for. Also, your magazine is referred by many students who are preparing for various exams and if they consume the wrong information than that will cost them in exams.

    Please sure to take official references whenever you have to show any factual geographical information so that such mistakes can be avoided in future. Also, please make sure you highlight this mistake in your forthcoming edition so that your readers are aware of it.

    Your Sincerely,

    Rajesh

    • isha

      Administrator
      February 2, 2023 at 8:23 PM

      Dear Sir,

      I want to highlight a recent mistake in one of the articles that was published in the January edition of your magazine, ‘The Quest’. The map of the state of Maharashtra was depicted incorrectly, in which the entire district of my town was shown in a neighbouring state.

      It is important to show the correct geographical boundaries of a province as people have emotions attached to it. Sometimes these small mistakes can take on political flavors, which do not create a conducive environment for peace, which we all strive for. Furthermore, your magazine is referred to by many students who are preparing for various exams, and consuming incorrect information will cost them in exams.

      Please take official references whenever you are required to show any factual geographic information so that such errors are avoided in the future.Also, please make sure you highlight this mistake in your forthcoming edition so that your readers are aware of it.

      Your Sincerely,


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  • jyothi vadlamani

    Member
    May 30, 2023 at 12:26 PM

    Dear Sir/Madam,

    I am writing this letter in reference to the recent article about my hometown that was published in your magazine has few information which was incorrect.

    As the article was about my hometow Hyderabad I was very excited to read about it.Though most of the information was correctly mentioned,but few of the information is incorrect.

    In the Aroung the India attractions magazine its mentioned that Hyderabad is the “City of Diamonds” but infact Hyderabad is considered to be the ‘City of Pearls”. People aroung the world come to Hyderabad to purchase best quality pearls.Secondly, in the magazine it states taht “Necklace Road” is famous for parks but in contrary its famous for the largest “Buddha” statue which is constructed in the middle of the river.

    Wrong information will cause the confusion amongst the readers and travellers who are willing to plan a trip to Hyderabad.

    Please take necessary action at the earliest to edit and re-print in the next week’s edition.

    Thank you,

    Yours Faithfully,

    Jyothi

    • isha

      Administrator
      June 1, 2023 at 10:38 PM

      Dear Sir/Madam,

      I am writing this letter in reference to the recent article about my hometown that was published in your magazine, which contained some incorrect information.

      As the article was about my hometown, Hyderabad, I was very excited to read about it. Though most of the information was correctly mentioned,but few of the details are incorrect.

      In the “Around India Attractions” magazine, its mentioned that Hyderabad is the “City of Diamonds” but in fact Hyderabad is considered to be the ‘City of Pearls”. People around the world come to Hyderabad to purchase the best quality pearls. Secondly, in the magazine it states that “Necklace Road” is famous for parks, but on the contrary, it is famous for the largest “Buddha” statue, which is constructed in the middle of the river.

      Wrong information will cause confusion amongst readers and travellers who are willing to plan a trip to Hyderabad.

      Please take the necessary action at the earliest possible time to edit and re-print in the next week’s edition.

      Thank you,

      Yours Faithfully,

      Jyothi

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  • Kapil

    Member
    May 20, 2024 at 12:37 AM

    Dear Sir,

    I am Javed Akhtar, and I have been living in Jeddah since 1989. I read an article ‘Tower of Jeddah’ which was published by your organization in monthly travel magazine. I am writing this letter to inform you that whatever written in the article didn’t mention the right information so it is required to take necessary action.

    Our city is surrounded by many historical buildings, and ‘Tower of Jeddah’ is the most popular entity in the world. Despite the fact, the construction and idea to build of this tower did by a multiple religious of communities, but in your magazine, you mentioned it was built by the King which is not reality, therefore you should to correct it.

    It is essential to provide the correct detail as your magazine is one of the famous all over the world. Moreover, the community built it to commute the message to the world about the Unity, so the wrong information will impact negatively on present and future generation.

    You can republish the same article with the reality in which you can write with the reason of the technical glitches were occurred. In addition, you can mention that king had contributed amount during construction.

    Hoping to consider my request to make correction.

    Your sincerely,

    Javed

    • isha

      Administrator
      May 20, 2024 at 10:30 PM

      Dear Sir,

      I am Javed Akhtar, and I have been living in Jeddah since 1989. I read an article ‘Tower of Jeddah’ that was published by your organization in a monthly travel magazine. I am writing this letter to inform you that whatever is written in the article didn’t mention the right information, so it is necessary to take the action.

      Our city is surrounded by many historical buildings, and ‘Tower of Jeddah’ is the most popular entity in the world. Despite the fact, the construction and idea to build of this tower did by a multiple religious of communities, but in your magazine, you mentioned it was built by the King, which is not reality, therefore, you should correct it.

      It is essential to provide the correct detail, as your magazine is one of the most famous all over the world. Moreover, the community built it to communicate the message of unity to the world, so the wrong information will have a negative have a negative impact on the present and future generations.

      You can republish the same article with the reality in which you can write with the reason of the technical glitches were occurred. In addition, you can mention that king had contributed amount during construction.

      I suggest republishing the article with the correct information, and you can explain that the error was due to technical glitches. Additionally, you can mention that the King contributed financially to the construction.

      Hoping to consider my request to make correction.

      I hope you will consider my request to make the necessary corrections.

      Your sincerely,

      Javed

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