[deepti]

Dear Sir/Mam,

I am writing to enquire about the upcoming shopping center by XYZ developer on main street. I came across this big billboard on the main red light while driving home from office.

I got excited that our area will have its 1^st shopping center. Currently, people have to visit shopping center which is 4 km from this place. Having a place to shop which is just walking distance will make residents life much easier. People can visit the center any time and any day which was not the case earlier as they had to plan according to their schedule due to distance.

While I understand the construction will start from next month, I would like to know if there are any plans for traffic diversion as this street gets very busy during office hours. Also, if you could advise would the center also have a theater and play zone for kids. Nearest theater is around 7km away and one doesn’t always travel that far. Having a theater nearby along with kids zone will surely attract more crowds.

Looking forward for hear from you.

Yours faithfully,

Deepti

[Shahbaz]

Currently, people have to visit the shopping center which is 4 km from this place. Having a place to shop which is within walking distance will make residents life much easier. People can visit the center any time and any day which was not the case earlier as they had to plan according to their schedule due to distance.

While I understand the construction will start from next month, I would like to know if there are any plans for traffic diversion as this street gets very busy during office hours. Also, if you could advise would the center also have a theater and play zone for kids.

(“if you could advise would….” Is incorrect. Perhaps, you meant to ask ‘I would also like to know whether…. )

The nearest theater is around 7km away and one doesn’t always travel that far. Having a theater nearby along with a kids zone will surely attract more crowds.

Looking forward for hear from you.

Yours faithfully,