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     Anureet updated 1 month ago 11 Members · 28 Posts
  • Anureet

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    July 28, 2021 at 11:24 AM
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    Many people believe that social networking sites(such as Facebook) have a huge negative impact on both individuals and society.

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  • Upneet saini

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    July 28, 2021 at 12:59 PM

    Many people opine that social media websites like facebook, whatsapp have a detrimental effect on people and community.

    • Anureet

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      July 28, 2021 at 2:58 PM
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      opine- incorrect word choice

      start with According to many people

      facebook, whtasapp- Facebook and Whatsapp

      individual- people- collocation mistake- write individual only

  • jaidheesh

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    July 28, 2021 at 2:58 PM
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    A lot of people think that websites that encourage social networking like Facebook have a profound negative effect on both the person and the public.

    • Anureet

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      July 28, 2021 at 3:03 PM
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      websites that encourage social networking- social networking websites

      person and public- collocation mistake- it will be written as individual and society only because the public is not the same as society.

  • Shweta

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    August 1, 2021 at 2:07 AM
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    A large majority of people believe that there is a huge downside of social networking sites such as facebook, on both people as well as society.

    • Anureet

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      August 2, 2021 at 4:12 PM
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      A large majority- A majority

      Rest is correct. Keep Writing!

  • saravana

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    August 3, 2021 at 1:30 PM
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    Numerous humans have the thought in their mind that online community services such as Facebook, twitter, instagram, whattsapp have a massive demerits effect on every single person and the whole community as well.

    • Anureet

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      August 4, 2021 at 8:05 AM
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      humans- collocation mistake- people

      online community services- social networking sites or social media platforms

      have a massive demerits- have a detrimental effect

      on every single person- on the individual

      whattsapp- WhatsApp

  • Monika

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    August 16, 2021 at 1:31 PM
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    Many people think that both individuals as well as society are negatively impacted by the enhanced use of social networking platforms(such as Facebook, WhatsApp).

    • Anureet

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      August 16, 2021 at 1:59 PM
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      please post one response as it will be easier for me to evaluate

      • Monika

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        August 16, 2021 at 2:34 PM
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        Please consider the last one for evaluation.

  • Monika

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    August 16, 2021 at 1:44 PM
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    Many people think that enhanced usage of social networking platforms (such as Facebook) adversely impacts both individuals as well as society.

  • Monika

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    August 16, 2021 at 1:45 PM
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    Many people think that social networking platforms (such as Facebook) adversely impacts both individuals as well as society.

  • Monika

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    August 16, 2021 at 1:55 PM
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    Many people think that both individuals as well as society are getting adversely impacted by the use of social networking platforms like Facebook, WhatsApp, etc.

    • Anureet

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      August 17, 2021 at 9:19 AM
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      society are- society is

      Facebook, Whatsapp- Facebook and Whatsapp, etc.

  • Jyotiraditya Reddy

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    August 30, 2021 at 8:41 AM
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    Most of the people feel that, There is an adverse effect on individuals and society by the social media such as Facebook.

    • Anureet

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      August 31, 2021 at 9:35 AM
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      Rewrite it as it is grammatically inaccurate.

      • Jyotiraditya Reddy

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        September 1, 2021 at 9:31 AM
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        Most people feel that there is an adverse effect on individuals and society by social media such as Facebook.

        • Anureet

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          September 2, 2021 at 8:50 AM
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          by social media- rephrase- because of excessive usage of social media

  • rakhee

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    September 9, 2021 at 9:59 AM
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    Many people have an opinion that social networking sites(face book )will have an adverse effect on individual as well as society

    • Anureet

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      September 10, 2021 at 9:18 AM
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      facebook- Facebook- Proper Noun

  • Abhishek

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    September 9, 2021 at 10:45 AM
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    Many people believe that the impact of social networking sites (such as Facebook) on individuals as well as on society is detrimental.

    • Anureet

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      September 10, 2021 at 9:19 AM
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      paraphrased correctly

  • Sumit

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    September 9, 2021 at 5:14 PM
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    Bountiful individuals consider social networking platforms (like Facebook) to have a massive adverse influence on the two: Individuals and Society.

    • Anureet

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      September 10, 2021 at 9:20 AM
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      Bountiful individuals- Many people

      paraphrase clearly without complicating it

  • PRIYA

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    September 16, 2021 at 11:44 AM
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    According to many people’s point of view the social networking sites like Facebook and Instagram are leaving adverse effects not only on individuals but also on the society.

    • Anureet

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      September 21, 2021 at 9:16 AM
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      the social-social

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