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PARAPHRASING QUESTION 1:
Posted by Unknown Member on July 28, 2021 at 11:24 AMMany people believe that social networking sites(such as Facebook) have a huge negative impact on both individuals and society.
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Upneet saini
GuestJuly 28, 2021 at 12:59 PMMany people opine that social media websites like facebook, whatsapp have a detrimental effect on people and community.
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Unknown Member
Deleted UserJuly 28, 2021 at 2:58 PMopine- incorrect word choice
start with According to many people
facebook, whtasapp- Facebook and Whatsapp
individual- people- collocation mistake- write individual only
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Unknown Member
Deleted UserJuly 28, 2021 at 2:58 PMA lot of people think that websites that encourage social networking like Facebook have a profound negative effect on both the person and the public.
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Unknown Member
Deleted UserJuly 28, 2021 at 3:03 PMwebsites that encourage social networking- social networking websites
person and public- collocation mistake- it will be written as individual and society only because the public is not the same as society.
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Unknown Member
Deleted UserAugust 1, 2021 at 2:07 AMA large majority of people believe that there is a huge downside of social networking sites such as facebook, on both people as well as society.
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Unknown Member
Deleted UserAugust 2, 2021 at 4:12 PMA large majority- A majority
Rest is correct. Keep Writing!
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Unknown Member
Deleted UserAugust 3, 2021 at 1:30 PMNumerous humans have the thought in their mind that online community services such as Facebook, twitter, instagram, whattsapp have a massive demerits effect on every single person and the whole community as well.
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Unknown Member
Deleted UserAugust 4, 2021 at 8:05 AMhumans- collocation mistake- people
online community services- social networking sites or social media platforms
have a massive demerits- have a detrimental effect
on every single person- on the individual
whattsapp- WhatsApp
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Unknown Member
Deleted UserAugust 16, 2021 at 1:31 PMMany people think that both individuals as well as society are negatively impacted by the enhanced use of social networking platforms(such as Facebook, WhatsApp).
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Unknown Member
Deleted UserAugust 16, 2021 at 1:59 PMplease post one response as it will be easier for me to evaluate
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Unknown Member
Deleted UserAugust 16, 2021 at 2:34 PMPlease consider the last one for evaluation.
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Unknown Member
Deleted UserAugust 16, 2021 at 1:44 PMMany people think that enhanced usage of social networking platforms (such as Facebook) adversely impacts both individuals as well as society.
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Unknown Member
Deleted UserAugust 16, 2021 at 1:45 PMMany people think that social networking platforms (such as Facebook) adversely impacts both individuals as well as society.
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Unknown Member
Deleted UserAugust 16, 2021 at 1:55 PMMany people think that both individuals as well as society are getting adversely impacted by the use of social networking platforms like Facebook, WhatsApp, etc.
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Unknown Member
Deleted UserAugust 17, 2021 at 9:19 AMsociety are- society is
Facebook, Whatsapp- Facebook and Whatsapp, etc.
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Deleted UserAugust 30, 2021 at 8:41 AMMost of the people feel that, There is an adverse effect on individuals and society by the social media such as Facebook.
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Unknown Member
Deleted UserAugust 31, 2021 at 9:35 AMRewrite it as it is grammatically inaccurate.
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Unknown Member
Deleted UserSeptember 1, 2021 at 9:31 AMMost people feel that there is an adverse effect on individuals and society by social media such as Facebook.
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Unknown Member
Deleted UserSeptember 2, 2021 at 8:50 AMby social media- rephrase- because of excessive usage of social media
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Unknown Member
Deleted UserSeptember 9, 2021 at 9:59 AMMany people have an opinion that social networking sites(face book )will have an adverse effect on individual as well as society
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Unknown Member
Deleted UserSeptember 10, 2021 at 9:18 AMfacebook- Facebook- Proper Noun
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Unknown Member
Deleted UserSeptember 9, 2021 at 10:45 AMMany people believe that the impact of social networking sites (such as Facebook) on individuals as well as on society is detrimental.
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Unknown Member
Deleted UserSeptember 10, 2021 at 9:19 AMparaphrased correctly
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Deleted UserSeptember 9, 2021 at 5:14 PMBountiful individuals consider social networking platforms (like Facebook) to have a massive adverse influence on the two: Individuals and Society.
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Unknown Member
Deleted UserSeptember 10, 2021 at 9:20 AMBountiful individuals- Many people
paraphrase clearly without complicating it
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Unknown Member
Deleted UserSeptember 16, 2021 at 11:44 AMAccording to many people’s point of view the social networking sites like Facebook and Instagram are leaving adverse effects not only on individuals but also on the society.
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Deleted UserSeptember 21, 2021 at 9:16 AMthe social-social
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