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  • PARAPHRASING QUESTION 1:

    Posted by Unknown Member on July 28, 2021 at 11:24 AM

    Many people believe that social networking sites(such as Facebook) have a huge negative impact on both individuals and society.

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    Unknown Member replied 3 years ago 11 Members · 27 Replies
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  • Upneet saini

    Guest
    July 28, 2021 at 12:59 PM

    Many people opine that social media websites like facebook, whatsapp have a detrimental effect on people and community.

    • Unknown Member

      Deleted User
      July 28, 2021 at 2:58 PM

      opine- incorrect word choice

      start with According to many people

      facebook, whtasapp- Facebook and Whatsapp

      individual- people- collocation mistake- write individual only

  • Unknown Member

    Deleted User
    July 28, 2021 at 2:58 PM

    A lot of people think that websites that encourage social networking like Facebook have a profound negative effect on both the person and the public.

    • Unknown Member

      Deleted User
      July 28, 2021 at 3:03 PM

      websites that encourage social networking- social networking websites

      person and public- collocation mistake- it will be written as individual and society only because the public is not the same as society.

  • Unknown Member

    Deleted User
    August 1, 2021 at 2:07 AM

    A large majority of people believe that there is a huge downside of social networking sites such as facebook, on both people as well as society.

    • Unknown Member

      Deleted User
      August 2, 2021 at 4:12 PM

      A large majority- A majority

      Rest is correct. Keep Writing!

  • Unknown Member

    Deleted User
    August 3, 2021 at 1:30 PM

    Numerous humans have the thought in their mind that online community services such as Facebook, twitter, instagram, whattsapp have a massive demerits effect on every single person and the whole community as well.

    • Unknown Member

      Deleted User
      August 4, 2021 at 8:05 AM

      humans- collocation mistake- people

      online community services- social networking sites or social media platforms

      have a massive demerits- have a detrimental effect

      on every single person- on the individual

      whattsapp- WhatsApp

  • Unknown Member

    Deleted User
    August 16, 2021 at 1:31 PM

    Many people think that both individuals as well as society are negatively impacted by the enhanced use of social networking platforms(such as Facebook, WhatsApp).

    • Unknown Member

      Deleted User
      August 16, 2021 at 1:59 PM

      please post one response as it will be easier for me to evaluate

      • Unknown Member

        Deleted User
        August 16, 2021 at 2:34 PM

        Please consider the last one for evaluation.

  • Unknown Member

    Deleted User
    August 16, 2021 at 1:44 PM

    Many people think that enhanced usage of social networking platforms (such as Facebook) adversely impacts both individuals as well as society.

  • Unknown Member

    Deleted User
    August 16, 2021 at 1:45 PM

    Many people think that social networking platforms (such as Facebook) adversely impacts both individuals as well as society.

  • Unknown Member

    Deleted User
    August 16, 2021 at 1:55 PM

    Many people think that both individuals as well as society are getting adversely impacted by the use of social networking platforms like Facebook, WhatsApp, etc.

    • Unknown Member

      Deleted User
      August 17, 2021 at 9:19 AM

      society are- society is

      Facebook, Whatsapp- Facebook and Whatsapp, etc.

  • Unknown Member

    Deleted User
    August 30, 2021 at 8:41 AM

    Most of the people feel that, There is an adverse effect on individuals and society by the social media such as Facebook.

    • Unknown Member

      Deleted User
      August 31, 2021 at 9:35 AM

      Rewrite it as it is grammatically inaccurate.

      • Unknown Member

        Deleted User
        September 1, 2021 at 9:31 AM

        Most people feel that there is an adverse effect on individuals and society by social media such as Facebook.

        • Unknown Member

          Deleted User
          September 2, 2021 at 8:50 AM

          by social media- rephrase- because of excessive usage of social media

  • Unknown Member

    Deleted User
    September 9, 2021 at 9:59 AM

    Many people have an opinion that social networking sites(face book )will have an adverse effect on individual as well as society

    • Unknown Member

      Deleted User
      September 10, 2021 at 9:18 AM

      facebook- Facebook- Proper Noun

  • Unknown Member

    Deleted User
    September 9, 2021 at 10:45 AM

    Many people believe that the impact of social networking sites (such as Facebook) on individuals as well as on society is detrimental.

    • Unknown Member

      Deleted User
      September 10, 2021 at 9:19 AM

      paraphrased correctly

  • Unknown Member

    Deleted User
    September 9, 2021 at 5:14 PM

    Bountiful individuals consider social networking platforms (like Facebook) to have a massive adverse influence on the two: Individuals and Society.

    • Unknown Member

      Deleted User
      September 10, 2021 at 9:20 AM

      Bountiful individuals- Many people

      paraphrase clearly without complicating it

  • Unknown Member

    Deleted User
    September 16, 2021 at 11:44 AM

    According to many people’s point of view the social networking sites like Facebook and Instagram are leaving adverse effects not only on individuals but also on the society.

    • Unknown Member

      Deleted User
      September 21, 2021 at 9:16 AM

      the social-social

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