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PARAPHRASING QUESTION 1:
Many people believe that social networking sites(such as Facebook) have a huge negative impact on both individuals and society.
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Many people opine that social media websites like facebook, whatsapp have a detrimental effect on people and community.
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opine- incorrect word choice
start with According to many people
facebook, whtasapp- Facebook and Whatsapp
individual- people- collocation mistake- write individual only
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A lot of people think that websites that encourage social networking like Facebook have a profound negative effect on both the person and the public.
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websites that encourage social networking- social networking websites
person and public- collocation mistake- it will be written as individual and society only because the public is not the same as society.
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A large majority of people believe that there is a huge downside of social networking sites such as facebook, on both people as well as society.
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A large majority- A majority
Rest is correct. Keep Writing!
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Numerous humans have the thought in their mind that online community services such as Facebook, twitter, instagram, whattsapp have a massive demerits effect on every single person and the whole community as well.
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humans- collocation mistake- people
online community services- social networking sites or social media platforms
have a massive demerits- have a detrimental effect
on every single person- on the individual
whattsapp- WhatsApp
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Many people think that both individuals as well as society are negatively impacted by the enhanced use of social networking platforms(such as Facebook, WhatsApp).
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please post one response as it will be easier for me to evaluate
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Please consider the last one for evaluation.
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Many people think that enhanced usage of social networking platforms (such as Facebook) adversely impacts both individuals as well as society.
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Many people think that social networking platforms (such as Facebook) adversely impacts both individuals as well as society.
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Many people think that both individuals as well as society are getting adversely impacted by the use of social networking platforms like Facebook, WhatsApp, etc.
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society are- society is
Facebook, Whatsapp- Facebook and Whatsapp, etc.
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Most of the people feel that, There is an adverse effect on individuals and society by the social media such as Facebook.
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Rewrite it as it is grammatically inaccurate.
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Most people feel that there is an adverse effect on individuals and society by social media such as Facebook.
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by social media- rephrase- because of excessive usage of social media
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Many people have an opinion that social networking sites(face book )will have an adverse effect on individual as well as society
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facebook- Facebook- Proper Noun
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Many people believe that the impact of social networking sites (such as Facebook) on individuals as well as on society is detrimental.
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paraphrased correctly
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Bountiful individuals consider social networking platforms (like Facebook) to have a massive adverse influence on the two: Individuals and Society.
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Bountiful individuals- Many people
paraphrase clearly without complicating it
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According to many people’s point of view the social networking sites like Facebook and Instagram are leaving adverse effects not only on individuals but also on the society.
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the social-social
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