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  • PARAPHRASING QUESTION: 3

     Anureet updated 1 month, 1 week ago 7 Members · 15 Posts
  • Anureet

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    August 17, 2021 at 12:13 PM
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    In some countries, a few people earn extremely high salaries. Some people think that this is good for a country while others believe that the government should control salaries and limit the amount people can earn.

  • Monika

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    August 17, 2021 at 4:33 PM
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    In some nations, few people get exorbitant wages. Some people feel it is fine for a country to pay high whereas others believe that the authorities ought to place some guidelines for controlling salaries of citizens.

    • Anureet

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      August 18, 2021 at 10:17 AM
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      pay high- pay high salaries or wages- choose either

      Well written!

  • Jyotiraditya Reddy

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    In some countries, Paltry amount people earn high salaries. A section of people believe that, it is good for a country. Whereas the other section of people ought to control the salaries by the government.

    • Anureet

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      August 31, 2021 at 9:37 AM
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      Work on punctuation mistakes.

      • Jyotiraditya Reddy

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        In some countries, a Paltry number of people earn high salaries. A section of people believes that it is good for a country, Whereas the other section of people ought to control the salaries by the government.

        • Anureet

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          Paltry- paltry

          Work on punctuation and paraphrase the entire question statement. You have not paraphrased limit the amount people can earn.

  • rakhee

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    September 9, 2021 at 10:10 AM
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    In some countries , a few people have maximum salaries. Some people believe that this is beneficial for the country, while others have the opinion that government should control on their salaries , with this people can limit their earnings .

    • Anureet

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      September 10, 2021 at 9:37 AM
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      maximum- high

      should control- should have a control

      with this people can limit their earnings: with this earnings of people can be limited

  • Sumit

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    September 9, 2021 at 4:47 PM
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    In certain countries, a lean number of folks earn very high remunerations. While some people believe it to be beneficial for the state, but for others, authoritative control over salaries should be there to restrict people’s draw.

    • Anureet

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      September 10, 2021 at 9:39 AM
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      folks- people- folks is informal

  • saravana

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    September 11, 2021 at 1:49 PM
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    In some nations, hardly some persons are being highly paid. While many individuals have the thought in their mind that it is the welfare of the country, other group of people prefer that the Government should take necessary steps to limit the individuals’ wages who are getting high salary

    • Anureet

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      September 16, 2021 at 12:43 PM
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      individual wages- people

      work on your Grammar and Punctuation

  • PRIYA

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    September 16, 2021 at 11:35 AM
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    It has been noticed in few countries some people’s salary is exceptionally higher than others. Some found it is fine while some think it is incorrect, the earnings should be controlled by government and they should curb the amount for people to earn.

    • Anureet

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      September 16, 2021 at 12:44 PM
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      the amount for people to earn- rewrite more clearly

      some is redundant

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