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     Falak updated 1 week, 3 days ago 6 Members · 11 Posts
  • Falak

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    November 18, 2021 at 8:57 AM
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    The internet has transformed the way information is shared and consumed, but it has also created problems that did not exist before.

    What are the most serious problems associated with the internet ?

    what solutions can you suggest?

  • Jitendra

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    November 18, 2021 at 12:32 PM
    120 Network Points
    Activity Points 440

    The way information is disseminated and consumed has been revolutionized by the internet, but many problems are created because of that which were not sited earlier. This essay will discusses both problems associated with this and probable solutions.

    One of the first and foremost problem of internet is hacking of critical information like government security information and international airport passengers information. For example, in 2009, full control board of international airport of England was hacked, as result airport was closed for almost 5 hours and many passengers were suffered. Another major problem is breach of privacy of people through different social media. For instance, many news are published regarding the personal details are leaked through social media platform and that leads to mental disorders to many people. Therefore, careful actions should be taken to control these problems.

    In my opinion, the best solution of these solutions are, firstly government should make stringent cyber security regulations and it should be implemented and monitored very carefully. For instance, after implementing such law in United Arab Emirates in 2014, they found that there is greater improvement in security system. Secondly, every individual should be very careful while posting any information especially on social media at the same time they should make a habit of checking privacy setting which definitely help not to disclose any sensitive informations.

    In conclusion, however there are many problems associated with internet thesedays, these can be overcome by implementing strict cyber security policy by government and by checking privacy setting before posting any information to social media by individual.

    • Falak

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      November 21, 2021 at 10:57 PM
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      but many problems are created because of that which were not sited earlier (but many problems are created which were not sited (cited) earlier)

      One of the first and foremost problem (The first and foremost problem)

      platform and that leads to mental disorders (distress) to many people

      the best solution of these solutions (problems) are,

      before posting any information to (on) social media

      Take care of minor details as mentioned . However, usage of wide range of sentence structures would be appreciated Keep writing!!

      Band : 3.5/6

      • This reply was modified 2 weeks ago by  Falak.
  • Rekha

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    November 19, 2021 at 7:49 AM
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    Activity Points 740

    Due to modernization and technological development in the world, the availability of the internet has made it extremely easy the way data is being exchanged and utilized. Whereas, along with the benefits it came up with significant risks. The below paragraphs provide evidence of the problems and solutions associated with information sharing over the internet.

    First of all, due to the vast amount of data that are available in the internet, it is increasing the hacking numbers per day and cyber threats. For example, a few months ago there was a major cyber-attack on the government website that exposed all the military information of the country. Not only the government official websites but also many other commercial and technological companies are encountering this issue. Along with that, due to too much availability of information over internet causes the risk where a child can access potential harmful sites. One of the examples of such harmful sites would be porn websites where children can easily register and acknowledge their age. This would definitely affect their thoughts, development, future, and eventually to society.

    There are some solutions to the problems discussed in the above paragraph by taking necessary precautionary measures. Government and organizations need to have a strong IT security system that could review the architecture and protect their internal data such as by using strong passwords, encrypting data. In addition, the government needs to pass necessary cyber security rules and regulations that would tighten these cyber-criminal attacks. Furthermore, it is important for parents to ensure that kids are not accessing porn sites and track their usage and the websites being used.

    To conclude, as there are both pros and cons for every development that’s happening in the modern world, it is an individual’s responsibility to use it ethically. However, by following the right guidelines and appropriate actions it would be a powerful tool for everyone to use.

    @falak – please review

    • Falak

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      November 19, 2021 at 9:30 AM
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      Whereas, along with the benefits (,) it came up with significant risks.

      Thesis statement could be more effective (could mention problem or solution)

      data that are available in (on) the internet,

      In body paragraph 1, topic sentence is missing

      it is increasing the hacking numbers per day and cyber threats. ( It is increasing the rate of hacking numbers and cyber threats per day)

      Along with that, due to too much availability of information over internet causes the risk where a child can (just give a check , the issue is not about availability of too much information but how readily it is available)

      potential (potentially) harmful sites

      acknowledge their age. (deny their age)

      eventually to society. ( to is not required)

      as there are both pros and cons for every development that’s happening in the modern world, (I suggest not to project essay as “advantages and disadvantages essay” ; rather it is a problem solution one)

      Band : 3/6

  • Gayathri

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    November 19, 2021 at 5:07 PM
    120 Network Points
    Activity Points 730

    Contemporary world is witnessing drastic changes in the ways of communication after the advent of internet. Owing to this, a lot of problems are being created and there should be appropriate methods to tackle such emerging issues. This essay will through light upon such problems and the possible solutions to each.

    First of all problems, there is an absolute breach in the privacy of an individual in any platforms of the internet since the applications are using and selling individual data to third parties. Why? because, any media which is available in the internet asks a person’s personal details and location upon signing up in that application, which they share with a lot of other platforms. For example, an incident was reported in 2019, when facebook shared information of its more than 500 million subscribers to another party. Moving further to another issue which is, hacking and fraudulent activities over the internet which has emerged recently. That is, with the use of personal credentials, any application can loot an individual’s money or other valuables as these days even banking is possible online.

    With regards to remedies, at the individual level, people can go through the privacy settings and terms and conditions while using any sites. Moreover, governments should take necessary actions and amend laws regarding cyber crimes along with strengthening of existing cyber police wing. Then, more laws and stringent punishments should be implemented to prevent poeple commiting crimes using the internet. To cite an instance, in Kerala, the southern state of India, in 2019, there was massive looting of money from different individuals which was tracked by the cyber cell and the criminal was penalised appropriately.

    To conclude, as there are novel problems due to widespread use of internet, there should be more laws and also existing laws can be reinforced. People should be warned of fraudulent websites and should be asked to abstain from such sites on the internet.

    • Falak

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      November 22, 2021 at 3:59 PM
      280 Network Points
      Activity Points 6970

      Contemporary world is witnessing drastic changes in the ways of communication (and the way information is being shared ), after the advent of internet

      This essay will through (throw)

      privacy of an individual in (on) any platforms of the internet

      using and selling individual(‘s) data

      Why? because, any media which is available in the internet asks a person’s personal details and location upon signing up in that application, which they share with a lot of other platforms. ( a contradiction has been observed , either write how? instead of Why? or explain Why they do say in elaborated way

      With regards to remedies, (regard)


      Band : 3.5/6

  • Annie

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    November 21, 2021 at 3:20 AM
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    • Falak

      Administrator
      November 25, 2021 at 10:56 AM
      280 Network Points
      Activity Points 6970

      has creating (is creating/has created)

      a (not required) distinct problems

      transforming (transferring) the data

      Secondly(,)

      into (on) internet

      has been solved by the government (should be solved; as these are the suggestions)

      work on sentence structure, avoid using same words repeatedly rather write synonyms. No example found

      Band : 2.5/6

  • Mamta

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    November 23, 2021 at 6:36 PM
    140 Network Points
    Activity Points 2250

    With the use of the internet, the way of sharing the information has changed and some problems that were not present in the past have been created by this development. This essay will discuss some problems related to the internet followed by some solutions to tackle them.

    To begin with, one of the serious problems is online fraud and hacking. Many personal data and information related to a person are available on the internet that lead to serious fraud and crimes. For example, hackers steal some private data of people and blackmail them on the basis of that information. Another major problem is easy access to any information on any site, which is sometimes dangerous for children. They can access some adult content like pornography by just providing some false details related to their age, which might affect their minds and they get diverted from studies.

    Some solutions are provided to overcome these problems. The government should pass a law to protect the personal data and secure the privacy along with some cyber security. Additionally, some strict IT securities should be there to verify the details of users using strong passwords. Some awareness programs should be run by the government and IT firms regarding the sharing of personal information on the internet. Parents should also keep an eye on the activity of their children and educate them about the right uses of the internet.

    To conclude, the Internet has made the individual’s life easy along with some serious problems. However, some actions such as data privacy and cyber security taken by the government are provided a good solutions to these problems.

    • Falak

      Administrator
      November 24, 2021 at 2:47 PM
      280 Network Points
      Activity Points 6970

      Feedback : well- written and nicely developed however, an example in body paragraph2, would be appreciated.

      There is room for improvement in Lexical resources and sentence structure

      Band : 4/6

      • This reply was modified 1 week, 4 days ago by  Falak.
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