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  • Task 1 Letter on school science trip.

    Posted by isha on May 31, 2022 at 4:05 PM

    Your children go to a local school that requires volunteers to accompany school science trips

    Write a letter to the school to apply to be a volunteer. In the letter:

    – Introduce yourself and give details of your children who attend the school
    – Explain why you are interested in the position
    – Talk about any relevant experience that you have with children

    isha replied 6 months ago 8 Members · 12 Replies
  • 12 Replies
  • Probir

    Member
    May 31, 2022 at 8:47 PM

    Dear Sir/Madam,

    I am writing this letter to express my interest for volunteering in school science excursion. I am father of Avinash, who is a student of class 6th in your esteemed school.

    First of all, I am grateful to you, for providing such a wonderful opportunity for the parents. I am super excited to have this position and see my child enjoy learning. By profession, I am a teacher myself, so it would be easy for me to keep an eye on my son as well as other children. On top of that, as I am teaching chemistry, I believe, my presence will really help students to learn a lot of things from me in the trip.

    Furthermore, I really enjoy to spend time with kids and I am ready to meet new kids and add some value to their knowledge. I look forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience.

    Yours sincerely,

    Probir Chakraborty

    • isha

      Administrator
      June 5, 2022 at 5:22 PM

      -I am writing this letter to express my interest in volunteering for a school science excursion. I am the father of Avinash, who is a student of class 6th in your esteemed school.

      -On top of that, as I am teaching chemistry, I believe my presence will really help students to learn a lot of things from me on the trip.

      -Furthermore, I really enjoy spending time with kids, and I am ready to meet new kids and add some value to their knowledge.

      Feedback:

      Connectors are used in all the right places. All the points are covered.

      Few errors in prepositions and use of gerund.

      Band Score- 2.5/3

  • Nikita

    Member
    May 31, 2022 at 8:58 PM

    Dear Sir/ Madam,

    I am Nikita Nagpal, mother of Alisha Nagpal (class 6A) and Shubham Nagpal (class 3-A) of your school. I am interested to volunteer the science trip organised to Science City, by your school, next month.

    I have done my masters in botany and I have 4 years of teaching experience so I think I would be a good guide and tutor to the students. I am also a local resident of the place where the science tour would be organised and have visited the place several times, so I have a lot of information regarding the place. During my teaching period I have taught students from classes 3rd to 6th and I was quite fine when it came to handling many students at a time.

    I would be thankful if you consider my application and let me volunteer for the same.

    I look forward to hearing from you at the earliest.

    Thank you,

    Yours sincerely

    Nikita Nagpal.

  • Ankur

    Member
    June 1, 2022 at 8:15 PM

    Dear Sir/Ma’am,

    I am writing this letter regarding the school science trip and ‘I am keenly interested to be a part of this activity as a volunteer.

    My name is Ankur Chaudhary and I am working in a medical School, My son Aayush is studying in 5th standard in your school. Primarily he wants me to participate in this event and I should share my science knowledge with kids as I used to teach him science in a fun and easy way.

    Secondary I personally want to a be part of such event to teach a different aspect of science and some interesting facts about important discoveries of science and their application in the modern world in a scientific and fun manner. I also want to understand the children’s curiosity and thoughts about Science.

    Furthermore, I love to sphere some good time with children in this knowledge and fun activity and I am looking forward to hearing from you for the same.

    Yours faithfully

    Ankur Chaudhary

    • isha

      Administrator
      June 5, 2022 at 5:49 PM

      I am writing this letter regarding the school science trip because I am keenly interested in being a part of this activity as a volunteer.

      My name is Ankur Chaudhary, and I work in a medical school; my son Aayush attends your school and is in the fifth grade. He wants me to participate in this event and says I should share my science knowledge with kids, just as I used to teach him science in a fun and easy way.

      Secondary I personally want to be part of such an event to teach a different aspect of science and some interesting facts about important discoveries in science and their application in the modern world in a scientific and fun manner. I also want to understand the children’s curiosity and thoughts about science.

      Furthermore, I love to spend some good time with children in this educational and fun activity, and I am looking forward to hearing from you for the same.

      – Pay attention to grammatical errors.

      Bands- 2/3

  • vigneshwar

    Member
    June 2, 2022 at 12:57 AM

    Dear Sir/Madam,

    I am writing to express my interest in applying for volunteer position to accompany school science trips.

    I am vigneshwar, father of student Gautam who is in class 7th in your school.

    I am interested in this position since i have the habit of dedicating my time for Corporate Social Responsibility and contributing to society by spending quality time on orphanages and schools to provide their basic needs. So, I would like to volunteer in this science trip to guide and motivate students to sparkle curiosity on science related experiments and activities.

    I have the experience in educating children on their moral & good habits. Because of philanthropic nature, I volunteered in multiple school programs to provide basic classes for children in kindling their interest in mathematics and science. I am eloquent in taking classes for students.

    I would deeply appreciate if you could consider me for the volunteer position.

    Yours faithfully

    Vigneshwar Srinivasan

    • isha

      Administrator
      June 5, 2022 at 5:41 PM

      I am writing to express my interest in applying for a volunteer position to accompany school science trips.I am Vigneshwar, the father of Gautam, a student in your school’s 7th grade.

      I am interested in this position since I have the habit of dedicating my time to corporate social responsibility and contributing to society by spending quality time in orphanages and schools to provide for their basic needs. So, I would like to volunteer for this science trip to guide and motivate students to spark curiosity in science related experiments and activities.

      I have experience in educating children about their morals and good habits. Because of my philanthropic nature, I volunteered in multiple school programs to provide basic classes for children to kindle their interest in mathematics and science. I am eloquent in taking classes for students.

      I would deeply appreciate it if you could consider me for the volunteer position.

      Feedback:

      Corrections are in Bold. Your intro and reason for writing a letter can go in same paragraph.

      Grammatical errors. Use Cohesive devices/connectors like..Moreover, however etc.

      Bands: 1.5/3

  • Ansar

    Member
    January 3, 2023 at 3:28 PM

    Dear Sir/Madam,

    I am writing this with regards convey my intent to be part of volunteering service i can offer as part of your science trip organized by school.My daughter shahla studying in 5th standards in your prominent school had informed me about the volunteering job.I felt overwhelmed when my daughter told aboout the volunteering job.I am well versed and have good experience in feild of volunteering.


    From last 10 years i am involved in different kind of voluntary jobs for example i have effectively served as hospital volunteer. on weekends i work at animal shelters like walking pets etc. By volunteering i felt self-esteem, happiness and satisfaction in my life.

    I believe that my experice would benifit kids as i am very affectionate and interactive person who can gel up with kids easily.

    Furthermore, I really enjoy spending time with kids and would be elated to meet new kids. I believe my presence will have valuable impact on kids knowledge.


    I am looking forward for this oppurtunity and expecting a postive response from you at earliest.

    Yours sincerely,

    Ansar Ali

    • isha

      Administrator
      January 4, 2023 at 7:17 PM

      Dear Sir/Madam,

      I’m writing to express my desire to participate in the volunteer service I can provide as part of your school’s science trip.My daughter Shahla, who is in fifth grade at your prestigious school, informed me about the volunteer opportunity.I felt overwhelmed when my daughter told me about the volunteer job. I am well versed and have good experience in the field of volunteering.

      I’ve been involved in various types of volunteer work over the last ten years, including serving as a hospital volunteer.On weekends, i work at animal shelters, like walking pets, etc. I feel content, happy, and satisfied in my life because I volunteer. I believe that my experience would benefit kids, as i am a very affectionate and interactive person who can gel with kids easily.

      Furthermore, I really enjoy spending time with kids and would be delighted to meet new kids. I believe my presence will have a valuable impact on the kids knowledge.

      I am looking forward to this opportunity and expect a positive response from you at the earliest.


      – spelling mistakes.

      -Grammatical errors.


      Bands – 1.5/3

  • Vikas

    Member
    January 8, 2023 at 4:14 AM

    Dear Sir/Madam,

    I am writing this letter to express my interest to the volunteers required for the school science trips scheduled next month.

    My name is Vikas Garg, I am an alumnus of this prestigious institute and currently both of my children are studying here. While one of my kids is in grade 3, the other one is in grade 5.

    Although, I am a doctor now but since my childhood, I was always fascinated by these science educational tours and learned how things work and further, it would be my honour to take this journey along with my children for my own school.

    In addition to this, I have extensive experience in dealing with children as I was a teacher myself few years ago and assisted children during school educational outings.

    I would be grateful if you please consider me for this effort, looking forward to hearing from you soon.

    Yours sincerely,

    Vikas Garg

  • Kanisha

    Member
    October 12, 2023 at 3:28 AM

    Dear Sir/Mam,

    I am Kanisha Patel, I am mother of Mann Patel, who is a student of grade 5<sup>th</sup> in your school. I am very much interested in volunteering for school science trips.

    Thank you so for taking such initiative for the benefits of the students. It would be a wonderful opportunity for us as a parent to see our children in school environment trying to learn new things.

    I do believe I could be of huge helping hand to provide students with good and educative learning experience on the tour because I work as support assistance at Child Day Care, and I am used to being around kids of all the prime age and looking after them on daily basis. I also have a flexible schedule at work and open to contribute any number of hours required.

    Please let me know if you require any more details. I look forward to hearing from you.

    Yours Sincerely,

    Kanisha Patel

    • isha

      Administrator
      October 17, 2023 at 4:27 PM

      Dear Sir/Mam,

      I am Kanisha Patel, I am mother of Mann Patel, who is a student of grade 5<sup>th</sup> in your school. I am very interested in volunteering for school science trips.

      Thank you for taking such initiative for the benefit of the students. It would be a wonderful opportunity for us as parents to see our children in a school environment trying to learn new things.

      I do believe I could be of a huge helping hand to provide students with a good and educative learning experience on the tour because I work as support assistance at Child Day Care, and I am used to being around kids of all ages and looking after them on a daily basis. I also have a flexible schedule at work and am open to contribute any number of hours required.

      Please let me know if you require any more details. I look forward to hearing from you.

      Yours Sincerely,

      Kanisha Patel

      Nice attempt. When explaining your experience, give specific examples of tasks you perform at the Child Day Care center.This will provide a clearer picture of your skills and capabilities.Proofread the letter to eliminate grammatical errors.

      Bands -2/3

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