Task 1 (Letter writing) : Cookery schoolPosted by Falak on December 27, 2021 at 8:59 AM
You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course.
Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school.
In your letter,
describe what you enjoyed about the course
say how much cooking you’ve done since the course
suggest another cookery course you’d like the school to offer
Write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear Sir or Madam,
MemberDecember 27, 2021 at 9:24 AM100 Network PointsActivity Points 550
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to provide my feedback about the short cookery course recently undertaken at your centre.
I thoroughly enjoyed learning the intrecacies of baking Christmas cookies and varieties of cake.The master chef who was conducting classes was quoting good examples and also provided tips to master the skill of baking.
I never enjoyed baking until I attended your course.I tried my hands in baking christmas plum cake during last weekend for this christmas and the outcome was amazing!My friends and family liked the taste and softness of the cake.Now,I am looking forward to bake cookies in the coming weekend.
I would suggest you to introduce Chinese dishes course at your cookery classes.My friends and I are looking forward to learn Chinese dishes as kids are more interested in eating noodles these days.
Overall,the course was outstanding and I would definitely recommned this course to my friends and family.
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AdministratorDecember 28, 2021 at 12:17 AM720 Network PointsActivity Points 31700
Yours Sincereley (faithfully)
Chinese dishes course (certificate course in Chinese food)
Answer is well- written. Though usage of punctuation at certain places would be appreciated to avoid confusion
Sentence structure needs to be varied
MemberDecember 27, 2021 at 1:32 PM120 Network PointsActivity Points 760
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am one of the attendees of the cookery course that was conducted on 25th February 2021. As required, I would like to provide some valuable feedback on the same.
I would like highlight that it was one the better organised events that I have been a part of. The course structure is sufficiently comprehensive, ensuring that novice chefs like myself are kept engaged. I personally enjoyed the diverse cuisines that were included as a part of the course, ensuring that all the participants get a wholesome idea of how culinary skills work. I have even tried to experiment with the food preferences as suggested by our Course Co-ordinators and has gained me a lot of applaud , from friends and family.
A couple of things that I felt could be improved upon were including a more wider range of desert recipes and adding healthier alternatives options to the current cuisines. Also, It would be very helpful if the course can introduce an e-book for the food preparation details.
I hope this feedback is useful in designing and improving the program.
AdministratorDecember 28, 2021 at 12:26 AM720 Network PointsActivity Points 31700
like myself (me)
desert (dessert) recipes
I would like (to) highlight that it was one (of) the better (best) organised events
Explain all the bullet points in distinct paragraphs , as it will be a positive feature for higher band score
MemberDecember 27, 2021 at 3:15 PM140 Network PointsActivity Points 1560
AdministratorDecember 28, 2021 at 12:23 PM720 Network PointsActivity Points 31700
All the criteria (credit)
There has been an improvement for sure , areas like sentence structure and punctuation need more attention.
MemberMarch 11, 2022 at 9:42 AM320 Network PointsActivity Points 840
I’m writing this letter in response to your request for my feedback on the cookery course and I’m happy to provide my thoughts on it.
I attended summer cookery class from 1st to 10th April and the course was well planned for beginners. The best part was of using knife in perfect manner it really attracted me more on cutting and decoration part of the food.
I’m happy to say that I really enjoyed the course and it really encouraged me a lot. The chef who taught us was really gentle and he helped everyone to improve their skills. Currently, I’m applying the techniques to cook at home and I’m glad to say that everyday I’m receiving compliments from family and friends.
I cannot thank you enough. I will definitely recommend to few friends of mine and I would be really interested to learn more on cooking maybe you can offer another course to enhance cooking skills.
AdministratorMarch 15, 2022 at 8:41 AM720 Network PointsActivity Points 31700
Hello Sir, (Dear Sir or…)- already mentioned in the letter
The task is under length. Therefore, the reasons and development of bullet points has been compromised.
Lexical resources need to be considered, avoid the repeating same common words.
MemberMarch 11, 2022 at 9:47 AM150 Network PointsActivity Points 1380
I’m writing this letter with regard to the feedback of one of cookery course that I have taken in your school. I had a great experience learning in your school, I’m completely satisfied with your teaching sessions and I would like to rate the course 10 out of 10.
I have enjoyed the course thoroughly as it contains cooking sessions for all cuisines including practical sessions at the end of the course. The best part of the course is practical sessions where in we can prepare the food under the supervision of the teachers and can serve to the fellow students to get the feedback.
After the course, I have adopted cooking as a hobby, so I’m preparing my everyday meals. The course also provided me the part time job in VegLEAF restaurant, where I’m preparing mostly Indian cuisines.
I think we are missing one of the indian famous dish called palak panner in our courses ,so i suggest to introduce a cookery course on this.
I would be grateful if you add the suggested course. I look forward to hearing from you.
AdministratorMarch 15, 2022 at 8:47 AM720 Network PointsActivity Points 31700
one of cookery course (courses)
I think we are missing one of the indian (Indian) famous dish (dishes) – proper noun
so i (I) suggest
writing could be more effective with the usage of cohesive devices. It will enhance the cohesion among sentences.
MemberMarch 11, 2022 at 10:30 AM20 Network PointsActivity Points 2070
I am one of the person who attended your cookery course that was conducted on 3rd March 2022. As you have asked me to share my feedback after cookery course. Therefore, I am writting this letter to share my feedback .
I thoroughly enjoyed and spellbound on baking Christmas cookies and varieties of cake. The course structure is sufficiently comprehensive and with multi cuisines. Main highlights of couse is that chef gave me a chance to be a volunteer . As per Instructions , guidelines provided by Master chef, I personally engaged with all items and have stirred all the necessary ingredients with butter and sugar . I learnt intrecacies behind baking a cake . At last, he made a wonder! with me , a tasty cake. Being, a youtuber I listed each and every thing in description of video to my viewers and also I am able to resolve their doubts. Interns like me used have so many myths behind procedures of baking a cake but all were nullified with tips of master chef.
I would strongly recommend you to introduce Japanese dishes course at your cookery classes. People of my community are looking forward to learn Japanese dishes as their children are most likely to have noodles .
Overall, this course is really helpfull to interns like me and I would definitely recommend this course to my viewers and subscribers.
AdministratorMarch 15, 2022 at 8:54 AM720 Network PointsActivity Points 31700
I am one of the person (persons)
I learnt intrecacies (intricacies)
Yours Sincerely, (faithfully)
Letter is well-written . usage of lexical resources is appreciated. There has been clear overall progress throughout. Be careful with the minor slips as mentioned above.
MemberMarch 15, 2022 at 12:51 PM120 Network PointsActivity Points 1240
I am writing this letter to express my pleasure in the culinary class in which I enrolled at your institute a month ago, and for your considerations for my feedback about it.
Although the course was only a month-long, I learned many skills of cooking some exquisite Mexican dishes. The instructor- Jocelyn, taught the class with great passion whilst making the learning process fun, which made the whole experience very enjoyable. Furthermore, with this course, I learned some new delicious recipes that I have never tried before, which was wonderful.
Inspired by the course and the instructor, I made my favourite dish I learnt from the classes for a small party I hosted, in addition to cooking a few other recipes for my family every weekend since the end of the class. Everyone was very amazed at how savoury and palatable the food was.
It would be great if the institute provided baking classes, specifically done with chocolate and people will enroll in this course if you include it.
I am thankful to you providing me with some great culinary skills.
AdministratorMarch 21, 2022 at 6:04 PM720 Network PointsActivity Points 31700
I am writing this letter to express my pleasure in the (about the) culinary class in which I (was) enrolled at your institute (about) a month ago, and for your considerations for my (share my) feedback about it.
in addition to (this, these days I usually try other recipes for my family every weekend) evercooking a few other recipes for my family every weekend since the end of the class
It would be great if the institute (starts providing )provided baking classes (too), specifically done with chocolate and people will (surely) enroll in this course( if you include it.- not required)
I am thankful to you (for) providing me
work on sentence formation.
MemberMarch 23, 2022 at 3:02 PM110 Network PointsActivity Points 370
Iam writting this letter to give my feed back on the cooking courses that i took a month ago in your institution, to enhance my culinary art skills.
As the course was for a month but i felt time had passed very qucikly as i enjoyed the course so much. I took bakery sessions and learned the diiferent techniques and proceduces in baking cakes and decorating it. Besides that, i enjoyed various tricks used in decoration part.
After my course was finished, i used this skills to prepare cakes and some other delicious dessserts for the birthday parties of my near and dear one. Everyone has even praised me after enjoying the cake meals.
I would love to learn about chinese food, so i request you to introduce a short course at yours respected institute. Chinese food is in trends right now, many other students will also be intrested in the course. Please take this idea into consideration.
Thanking you in anticipation.
AdministratorMarch 29, 2022 at 1:41 PM720 Network PointsActivity Points 31700
that i (I) took a month ago
As (Even though) the course was for a month (,) but (avoid “but” here) i felt time had passed very qucikly (quickly) as i enjoyed the course so much
baking cakes and decorating it (them)
, i used this (these) skills to prepare cakes
(Infact/ even) Everyone has even (” even” is not suitable here) praised me after enjoying the cake
yours (your) respected institute.
Take the points/ suggestions mentioned above. Proof -read is must to avoid silly errors.