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  • Task 2 (advantages and disadvantages) : Parents send their children abroad

    Posted by Falak on December 21, 2021 at 9:08 AM

    Many parents send their children abroad to study.

    Discuss the advantages and disadvantages about the phenomenon.

    Falak replied 22 hours, 52 minutes ago 23 Members · 42 Replies
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  • Shinu

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    December 23, 2021 at 1:59 PM
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    It is indeed a fact that many parents send their wards for higher education in foreign countries for better future. Overall personality development and better job opportunities are the main advantages, whereas children disconnect from their own culture and may indulge in illegal activities due to no supervision.

    Exposure to different culture and high salary jobs are the main advantages of studying in foreign land for young people. In various reputed institutions, children come from different cultures and countries and as they interact with each other they get to know about different people which overall improves their personality. Another advantage is that many big institutions help children get placement in big companies with good salaries which will overall improve their standard of living. I also did my masters from reputed college and got a job with reputed organisation.

    The main disadvantages associated with studying abroad are no connection with their own culture and children may exploit the freedom given by parents and can push them to involve in wrong activities. Often the duration of the courses are of two or three years and children do not get to visit their own country and as a result, they do not feel closer to their own culture and may adopt the traditions and festivals of the foreign country. Another disadvantage is minimal or no supervision in case of unavailability of local guardian, students may get involved in illegal cases like drugs. A very bright friend of mine was not able to handle the academic pressure in US and was succumbed to drugs due to no proper guidance and help.

    In conclusion, sending kids abroad for studying brings the benefits to them like personality development and high paying jobs, must be weighed against the drawbacks, like forgetting their own culture and adopting activities which may land them into trouble.

    • Falak

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      . Overall personality development and better job opportunities are the main advantages, whereas (certain drawbacks are also associated with this like) children (can get ) disconnect from their own culture and may indulge in illegal activities due to no supervision.- lack of cohesion

      Use of cohesive devices will add more clarity

      children may exploit the freedom given by parents and can push them (themselves) to involve in wrong activities

      was succumbed to drugs due to no proper (lack of) guidance and help.

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  • kartik

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    In the last decade or so , we have seen an immense increase in the number of pupils being sent abroad for education. Numerous student exchange programs have become popular amongst children, who wish to gain an international exposure in their years of growth.

    There are several advantages that are related to an experience abroad. Firstly, A stint abroad exposes children to a different culture, often pushing them out of their comfort zones. This is proven to aid in their overall personality development. For instance, whilst completing my masters in the UK, I came across people from various cultures, speaking different languages, leading to drastic change in my pre-conceived notions, about living with family for the rest of our lives.
    A major impact that students especially from conservative thought process experience, is the immense independence that they witness. Students who have never indulged in part-time jobs often face a lot of issues to embrace the newer environment.

    Since education abroad can be highly expensive, it can often put parents and children in huge financial burdens. Moreover, the uncertainty surrounding the immigration rules , could have a long-term impact on students and parents making this choice. Their is also a high possibility of children being sidetracked after witnessing a more open and accepting culture. We have seen numerous examples of immigrants who disassociate themselves from their country of origin and forgetting their roots.

    To conclude, I thoroughly believe that parents should encourage children to immerse in different environments, whether it is through an education abroad or a student exchange program. But it is also important to set the correct expectations, before embarking on this journey.

    • Falak

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      Introduction is not reflecting the question requirement (advantages and disadvantages)

      , we have seen (there has been ) an immense increase in the number

      Their (there) is also

      Well-written. Keep writing!!

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  • Elena

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    Nowadays , it is becoming more and more popular for families to send their youngsters overseas for educational purposes. This trend could create benefits such as, exploring new destination and better future prospects , however, this could also cause some drawbacks like emotional distress and spending huge amount of money for a living .

    To begin with , there are a lot of advantages to studying abroad . Firstly , it is an ideal period when children could meet with new peoples and get to know their traditions and cultures , by doing that it will grow communication skills . For example , many articles has shown that people who learn a new language can learn it faster thanks to communication with natives. and also, it makes them more independent and confident. Secondly, students who has degree from any reputed international university may get a good job opportunity .

    On the other hand , education overseas is becoming more expensive every year . Because of that majority of parents forced to take a loan to pay educational fees . Moreover , youngsters who feel themselves homesick could face the cultural difference such as adapting to a new food or weather conditions . For instance , people who are from tropical countries like Malaysia or Thailand travelling to cold regions find some difficulties to adapt .

    In conclusion , the idea of sending kids abroad for better education has some disadvantages , such us the high educational cost and the impact of cultural changes , but despite that ,getting far from home will help younger generation to mature and explore new things .

    • Falak

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      , however, this could also (carry some drawbacks along with) cause some drawbacks

      with new peoples (people)

      by doing that (Their communication skills will be enhanced) it will grow communication skills (and offers great opportunities to learn new languages)

      many articles has (have) shown

      that people who (want) learn a new language can learn it faster(,) thanks to communication with natives

      students who has (have) degree from any reputed international

      ,getting far from home will help younger generation to (get) mature

      Feedback : Grammatical accuracy is the area that needs to be considered as minor slips have been observed. “Subject-verb” agreement requires attention

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    • Falak

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      most of the student (students) has (have)

      they discussing about (they are discussing/they discuss)

      distance learning will not be a suitable term here

      For instunce (instance)

      parents supervising (supervision) is essential

      At times , I can’t differentiate between letter “a” and “u” . write carefully

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  • Ashley

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    Nowadays foreign education has become very popular.Many parents are willingly happy to send their children to foreign countries to experience international culture and their nature.

    Still there are several positive facts after studying abroad,multiple employment opportunities are open depending upon their educational backgrounds.In addition people from all over the world come to the respected universities as they get to know about each other cultures, languages and they interact with each other.Another advantage is that many big universities offer certain cultural groups so that other people can learn about that so they can feel good.Moreover some universities call their alumni to share their experience about their study life so the upcoming future graduates will get some ideas.

    On the other hand,some children might be facing problems because of discrimination especially at their workplaces where they do part time jobs.Another disadvantage is the higher cost of living in some cities because some people cant afford it.Some of the children often felt homesick because of staying away from their families and this causes to worry the parents about their children whether they’re taking care or not.

    To summarize,it is very important for parents to research about the particular country before sending their children and to make a backup plan if certain issues are going to happen in near future.

    • Falak

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      .In addition (to it), people from

      respected universities as (and) they get to know about each other cultures,

      Moreover(,) some universities

      Moreover some universities call their alumni to share their experience about their study life so the upcoming future graduates will get some ideas. (too general statement, try to establish cohesion by mentioning ideas on pros of foreign education)

      Feedback : Sentence structure needs to be improved. No example found, explanations could be better. Word count is 216 , the response in under length, thus limited use of grammar and explanation has been observed.

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  • kunsoth

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    At present days, study in abroad has become a trend. Because, parents are highly encouraged to send their children to higher study to any reputed institute by which they gain international exposure and confidence. But the disadvantage of this fact is that such trips are very expensive and also can cause of a security threat.

    Going abroad for educational purpose has lots of advantages. By doing this the young generation can meet with new peoples and new culture. they can learn to survive in such kind of difficult situation where things are not available now and then. It enhances their confidence. Meeting new people, they can get more friends and know new people as well as it grows their communication skills. when someone is about to fall in any danger or any critical situation they learn to handle this. This makes them to become an innovator. Also student who has a degree from any reputed international university can get a good job easily. That is the main reason that encourage students along with their parents to pursue higher study in foreign countries.

    on the other hand , study in abroad sometimes is very expensive to bear for any parents. many parents forced to take a loan for going their children to any university in overseas. In other word, some student cannot handle the foreign issues.

    Sometimes an overseas school trip for children is often causing a security threat. The student often got engaged with the crime. The important thing is, many students are highly encouraged to stay over there forever and never come back to their homeland. For example, in Bangladesh , every year there are many university’s students who go to abroad for higher study and never come back. This is a global lose for any country.

    To conclude, I will say that there are lost of advantages to study abroad, but after completing study students should have to come back to their own country and apply all methodologies these they learn from abroad to grow their own country’s status.

    • Falak

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      Because,( comma is not required here) parents are highly encouraged to send their children to higher study to any reputed institute (,) (by which they gain international exposure and confidence. – the sentence is not justifying the usage of “because”)

      Because parents want their children to gain international exposure and confidence, they are highly encouraged to send them to o any reputed universities across the globe) – suggested structure.

      new peoples (people)

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      university’s students (university student)

      continuous use of short sentences particularly in B.P 1 and B.P 2., proof- reading is must to avoid silly errors. Work on sentence range.

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  • Sudhakar

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    Studying abroad has been a trend in recent days, many parents wish to send their youngsters to foreign countries; even though, it has numerous benefits, it also carries obstacles. In this essay I will discuss both positives and negatives of this movement.

    To begin with, studying in foreign countries opens plethora of opportunities to work in abroad otherwise which would be very difficult. In addition to that, it helps in exploring the different cultures, languages, traditions consequently assist in building the strong network. For instance, my friend who used to be shy now after moving to abroad for studies has broaden his horizons and now, he boasts about his prominent knowledge, variety of cultures and myriad of friend circle from across the countries.

    However, sending children to foreign countries for their education has certain drawbacks as well. Firstly, it can make some of the youngsters as home sick due to the fact that they have to miss their parents to be independent, and do all house hold chores which is an ordeal task. Secondly, parents have to go through lot of mental trauma while no one takes care of their children. As an example, my uncle who sent his daughter to China for her Post graduation in medical course, is always be in stress about her wellbeing.

    To summarize, sending offspring to abroad has a great benefits of better job opportunities and acquiring more knowledge about numerous cultures; However, parents should be well aware of the fact that they have to be emotionally strong, and encourage their children to be tenacious to complete their education.

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  • Nihar

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    In last decade or so we have seen many students are going to foreign countries to pursue their higher studies like master’s with support of their parents. In this essay we will discuss both benefits and drawbacks of this trend.

    On one hand, many people think that going to a foreign country require a lot of capital investment due to which many parents have to burden themselves with bank loan. In addition to this many student after completing their studies are not able to find jobs which in fact degrades both mental and physical well being. For example, In some countries like Germany most of the course are available in German language and the local population only speaks German so it becomes difficult to communicate with the local population.

    On the other hand, the standard of living of students increases as they have access to good quality education , excellent health facilities for them as well as for their parents. For example in countries like Australia if both children have Permanent Residency than their Parents automatically get Citizenships without any hassle which secure future of their parents as they don’t have to live far away from their kids. Other then this many students who are not able to fund their studies are given scholarships from the government and the Universities. In addition to all these student are given accommodation, groceries are at lower rates. There are many student unions and organization within the University that helps them to find jobs or fight against any type of exploitation.

    To sum up, although their are some drawbacks such as expensive price, they are perhaps outweighed by the material advantages like job opportunities, Student will have a better future if they study overseas.

    • Falak

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      like master’s (masters)

      most of the course(s) are available

      In addition to this(,) many student

      example quoted in B.P 1 , is not supporting the reasons mentioned. I would advise to include language barriers as one of the drawbacks and then mention this example.

      Permanent Residency than (then) their Parents automatically

      . Other then (than) this (,) many students

      In addition to all these (,)

      although their (there)

      A little more cohesion is expected in B.P 2, as health facilities and ultimately parents living with them requires some binding explanation

      Be careful with punctuation and use of ” Then and than” , ” their and there”

      keep writing!!

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  • prashanth

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    Most parents are enforcing their children to purse higher education abroad this might be due to world class education and exposure to latest technology; however, it has certain drawbacks. In this essay I will discuss both the advantages and disadvantages of studying abroad.

    Firstly, most renowned universities offer significant courses which are crucial for present and future industrial needs, while these universities focus on practical knowledge rather than theoretical aspects, these learnings can enable a doorway into tech giant companies and bag some lucrative offers. On contrary, in recent years firms like Google, Twitter are recruiting skilled people from IIT’s besides, offering them with high salaries. To illustrate, Twitter announced their new CEO from Indian origin university hence, capabilities matters then studying in overseas.

    On the other hand, sending students for higher education has its own drawbacks. Since, monitoring of children is not possible, so they can misuse freedom and do unnecessary things which will have legal complications and tarnish their carrier. Although education is better when compared to native colleges, parents must spend their entire life savings to pay college fees, not only this can create extra burden, but also land them into indebt. Unfortunately, only few colleges offer scholar ships for international students which is not appreciating, in regard of innumerable students enrolling for higher education.

    To conclude, there are fair and share advantages and disadvantages, although studying in foreign country have benefits like better education and high salaried jobs, it is certainly important to protect them from wrong doings.

  • Krithiga

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    Nowadays, pursuing education overseas is becoming increasingly popular. Parents are highly encouraged to send their wards for higher studies to any reputed institute by which they would gain international exposure and confidence. This trend would create certain benefits, however there are some drawbacks to be considered.

    On the one hand, there are myriad advantages to studying abroad. To begin with, students get high quality of education and as a result, they end up getting highly paid jobs and live a standard life. For instance, in many developing regions such as Africa parents sacrifice their facilities of life and send their offspring to overseas to pursue higher education. Thus, the percentage of individuals who give priority to attain foreign degrees for their young ones is rising day by day. Secondly, besides attaining degrees students also come across many different languages which are very beneficial for their future career. For example, many people studying abroad learn fluent English which is an international language. Owing to this, a person’s confidence level increases and feels more independent.

    On the other hand, spending time studying overseas also has a number of disadvantages. Firstly, most youngsters feel upset when they are living far from their families and are suffering from homesickness ,therefore, they cannot concentrate on their studies. One clear example is that majority of students after immigration for their studies can not study and work, as a result, they get very poor grades and ultimately waste their time as well as money. Secondly, parents have to pay a huge amount of money for their course fees as well as for the cost of living. Furthermore, even if their children win a scholarship, the cost is still unaffordable because of the disparity in currency values between countries. For instance, one year of Post Graduate course study in Canada which includes accommodation and tuition fees, costs over 3 thousand CAD per year approximately.

    In conclusion it can be inferred that besides advantages of going to foreign countries, there are some disadvantages as well. However parents should groom their children wisely from the beginning and not spoon-fed them, so that they can enjoy the benefits of studying in other countries as well.

    • Falak

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      a person’s confidence level increases and (he) feels more independent.

      immigration for their studies can not ( cannot focus on both )study and work, a

      In conclusion(,) it can be inferred

      Feedback : Answer is well-developed , range of sentence structures has been observed. It is fine to refer model answers before writing , but try to write ideas in your own words , ultimately it give you more confidence to attempt any sort of essay in exam.

      keep writing!!

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  • AMANDEEP SHAH

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    There is no doubt that today numerous parents are sending their children to another country for getting higher education and it is becoming more and more common nowadays. while overseas education has some benefits and drawbacks. In this essay I shall analyse both perspectives.

    the two main advantages of foreign education are overseas experience which helps them in getting a good job and it helps students to be self-dependent. firstly, many employers consider international exposure a positive aspect and therefore they believe person who has qualified from good university in a developed country is capable of working in diverse work space. Secondly, being alone in a country makes a student self-reliant in terms of making important decisions. For example, in a foreign country, they have to manage all the tasks like cooking, laundry and cleaning their own. thus, it makes them more flexibility to adapt the change.

    however, overseas education has some disadvantages. firstly, it can affect students psychologically, as studying alone in unfamiliar culture can lead to homesickness or even depression. apart from this, it creates financial burden over parents and students. although overseas education is good but it is expensive at the same time. For instance, some students take heavy educational loans for such opportunities and after the end of their education, they have to re pay the loan amount.

    To summarise, every coin has two sides, both opportunities and limitations. Studying abroad has also both benefits and drawbacks. It is upon the individual who needs to check their options and make a prudent decision

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    • Falak

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      while overseas education has some benefits and ( , there are some) drawbacks (too)

      it makes them more flexibility (flexible) to adapt the change.

      however, overseas education has some disadvantages. (as well)

      although (Although) overseas education is good (,) but (“but” is not required) it ( costs a fortune at the same time))is expensive at the same time

      Make sure the first letter of the word after period is capital.

      keep writing!!

  • Sherry

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    It is certainly true that studying foreign educational establishments is getting popular nowadays. However not all the effects of this phenomenon have been positive although there are certainly some disadvantages.

    So here I, begin with the advantages parents are free-minded and let their off-springs migrate abroad and think this can expand better education and future prospectus. Due to this, it can develop a good bond with the foreign culture and western standard of living. Although there are many Universities in Europe, parents spend their earnings on their kids to develop their better education. Migrating to European countries is a good choice as this can progress in earning high-paid jobs with good working, language, and software skills.

    For example, Children who get graduated from Stanford University get selection by International Companies, this is an advantage of studying at international universities.

    On the other hand, few parents are often worried if their kids will feel homesick when they are away from them. When they get detached from them and migrate to other countries for their higher education. Few of them are worried if their kids get addicted to bad habits like smoking, drinking, and intake of drugs. Parents are anxious about the social discrimination faced in society. Furthermore, sending kids, especially females can be considered an unsafe act in conservative land like Saudi Arabia.

    Hence, there are advantages and disadvantages to the given phenomena. Allowing their kids to abroad is completely dependent upon the parent’s mentality.

    • Falak

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      paraphrasing should have all the elements mentioned in question

      future prospectus (prospects)

      it (they) can develop (explore/understand foreign culture…. ) a good bond

      . Although there are many Universities in Europe, parents spend their earnings on their kids to develop their better education. (the usage of “although” is not justified)

      European universities could be covered under example

      cohesion is missing somehow, conclusion is not effective.

      sentence structure should be improved.

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  • anagha

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    In recent times children are being sent to overseas by their guardians to get higher quality of education. However, they can get distracted by electronic gadgets, which could derail them from focusing on their studies, if not properly directed. In this essay will discuses both benefits and drawbacks of this trend.

    On the one hand, children who are sent to the foreign countries for higher education have benefited immensely, one of each way that they get good quality of education. while studying in abroad they can meet up new people and also get chance to explore with different culture and traditions. moreover, these students get better tutoring since the institutions has standardized teaching curriculum. so they are able to counterparts anywhere in the world and even labor market. for an example, my cousin who studied Automobile Engineering in Canada. This has helped him in getting a multinational job there. Importantly, they become an independent person.

    On the other hand, there are some disadvantages. one of the main drawback is parents need to set aside loads of money to fulfill their offspring needs, which costs them arm and leg. Even though children get distracted by electronic gadgets and also social media like Facebook, Instagram, which could derail them from studying and focusing on their grades. In fact they also get addicted to bad habits. This cause them adverse effect on their lives.

    To conclude, sending children to study abroad has its a upside and downside.

  • Manveen

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    The advancement in transportation has led to the migration of people to different countries either for learning or earning. A plethora of individuals prefer sending their kin to alien lands for advanced studies, this essay shall delve deep into the pros and cons of this movement.

    First and foremost, many parents choose a foreign study for their children in order to attain better opportunities and to have a settled career. To add on, the students emigrate due to lack of chances in terms of future aspects, also to have a green pasture. For example, a student abroad has to work while balancing his studies which provides him enough exposure that helps him in taking his career to new heights. Hence it is intro-controvertible that the abroad study provides many benefits.

    On the other hand, this relocation also leads to brain drain as well as many health issues. To put in other words, numerous students have moved out of their places for the first time for which they have to be out of their comfort zones as a result their health suffers. Also, the resettlement of a young generation is a loss to the country which could further lack professionals in coming times. For an instance, many learners have been seen in depression due to homesickness. Therefore it is fair to claim that studying in a non-native place has some un-ignorable deficits.

    To conclude, after agglomerating the aforementioned writing, it is right to state that the dispersion of students for higher studies can provide secured careers and ample opportunities but on the other hand can be a cause of ill-health as well as loss to the nation.

    • Falak

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      Hence (,) it is intro-controvertible that the abroad study provides many benefits.

      Therefore (,) it is fair to claim

      Response is justified on cohesion and coherence ; however, there is definite room for improvement in grammatical range . Be careful with the usage of punctuation

      keep writing!!

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  • Kapil

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    In this modern era, technology and science have grown rapidly, so it makes easy for human beings to transit in any country of the world, and many the parents looking forward to this option for their children to get abroad education, which gives opportunities to explore on the international level and learn a new culture, but sometimes due to lack of proper monitoring children chooses the wrong way. This essay will examine the merits and demerits of the abroad study and provide a logical conclusion.

    The two main advantages of studying in foreign are getting a global platform and living a high standard lifestyle. Firstly, while studying outside of the home country person get knowledge of the various cultures because it becomes possible to have face-to-face interaction with a number of people from a different continent. In addition, they can learn new languages, up-to-date knowledge of the field, and earn an international college/university degree which helps to open the door in the worldwide market. For instance, as per the evidence of the survey by the BBC in 2022, multination company hire the employees whose has degree from the outside. Secondly, individuals can earn a good salary, so they can live with a high level of living and be able to use expensive things.

    However, it has also some disadvantages as many children leave their parents forever and forget the ethics of family and society. Firstly, while studying alone outside, there are many challenges to face, so they have to make friends which sometimes leads to the wrong way such as if adults get some bad company, they had to adopt the culture due to peer pressure and many times they became addicted of drugs, thereby they break the relationship with their family to enjoy their own life. For example, in the United States 50% expat population is addicted to drugs and robbery who could not go back to their home country. Secondly, if people live far from society, they lose to take interest in the festivals and culture, so they forget the morality of the community.

    To conclude, although foreign education has certain disadvantages like children leaving the home forever and lack of knowledge of their own society, it has an extremely positive impact on the possibility to get explore on a global platform and live a premium quality lifestyle.

    • Falak

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      many the parents (many parents are looking)

      children chooses (choose) the wrong way – subject-verb agreement

      from a different continent.(s)

      individuals can earn a good salary, so (hence) they can live with a high level of living and be able to use expensive things.

      to get explore (exposure) on a global platform

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    Latest trend shows, majority of the parents prefer their youngster’s education in foreign countries which not only gives international exposure but also opens the door of getting jobs in their core field. However, brain drain and educational expenses are the major drawbacks. In this essay, I will discuss both advantages and disadvantages in upcoming paragraphs.

    Firstly, by enrolling for higher education in guest countries, the meritorious students get an ample amount of exposure for their research & development work which requires highly sophisticated laboratories and very supportive as well as qualified research fellows. The faculty of those universities are par-excellence and consequently, it affects the student’s result. Secondly, getting the job in core mechanical or electrical subject has become a nightmare. Moreover, those who
    somehow manage to grab the opportunity still face the pain of low package which
    companies offer.
    Indeed, International universities give global arena to nurture the innovative minds and thus, results in highly qualified jobs with handsome salary. For instance, western education promotes in-depth analysis of artificial Intelligence and other niche technologies.

    But pursuing education far away from the native country has some major disadvantages like impoverishment of scholars, intellectuals, professionals, and technical resources. It brings a potential economic decline to the nation. The burden of re-payment of educational loan as well as extra levy for sustaining expensive life also jeopardize economic condition of the middle-class family. Particularly India being a developing country, needs better government hospitals, if migration continues to a foreign land, we will see huge scarcity of trained doctors and nurses.

    To conclude, although
    immigration can have negative effects such as shortage of talents in the country
    and overburden of wealth for a family, it has an incredible positive impact on
    the professional as well as economical growth on an individual’s life.

    • Falak

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      The faculty of those universities are (is)par-excellence – faculty is a collective noun

      Secondly, getting the job in core mechanical or electrical subject has become a nightmare.(in developing countries)

      example in first Body paragraph should have been placed after explaining first reason to maintain cohesion

      Very-well written.

      Keep writing!!

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    • Falak

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      repetitive usage of word “living, furthermore)

      resposible (responsible)

      we have a (avoid “a”) certain drawbacks

      moreover (it) is increasing

      while writing be careful with “t, n, r and so on

      keep writing!!

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  • vigneshwar

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    Nowadays, It is the common practice among the parents to coax their children in pursuing higher education abroad for various reasons. This essay discuss about the advantages and disadvantages of moving to foreign countries to study in some of the renowned universities. Finally I will provide a logical solution to it.

    The main advantages of pursuing the higher education abroad are the global exposure and high quality education which students can get when compare to their homeland. Firstly, Since these are renowned universities, students from all over the world would join there. So it provides worldwide exposure to them, moreover learners can experience different culture & customs of the foreign nations. Secondly, they will get high quality of education due to the high standard curriculum curated by universities and it will be taught by the skilled professors. Therefore, It helps them to acquire knowledge and stay ahead in the race.

    In contrast to that, studying abroad has some drawbacks as well. The major cons are home sickness facing by students since they miss their families and friends and their involvement in illicit activities due to the less attention by parents. Pupils can feel loneliness if they are not able to adapt to new environment and they can potentially become distressed if they miss the presence of their family. Apart from that, Parents are not getting much visibility about the activities which their children are getting engaged on daily basis. It gives the liberty for the teenagers to do wrongdoings by getting addicted to drugs and other activities. As a result, this kind of misconduct can be avoided only if they stay close to parents.

    In my opinion, There are lot of benefits that parents can witness in persuading their kids to pursue higher education overseas because students can easily overcome the other negative factors like home sickness if they can socialize and make new friends quickly. Moreover, parents can nurture them with right moral values and virtues during their childhood, So that they will not be addicted to any wrong habits. In conclusion, Parents should act as impetus for kids to get international exposure by pursuing high standard education in renowned universities abroad.

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    • vigneshwar

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      Hi @fal ,kindly evaluate my essay

    • Falak

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      Finally I will provide a logical solution (conclusion) to it.

      culture & customs (don’t write any symbols)

      repetitive usage of words like exposure, activities

      Firstly, question doesn’t demand your opinion so that is redundant

      if you want to suggest a solution , it can be mentioned in conclusion paragraph only. (In conclusion,….)

      Keep writing!!

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    In modern world, guardians prefer to send their children to the developed nation to study. There are lots of pros like international exposure, better job opportunity along with cons brain-drain, financial burden to parents and many more associated with this norm which I will discuss further.

    The two main advantages of migrating adolescent to abroad for educational pursuits give them vital exposure to the culture of people from different background furthermore, they learn to cope with the difficulties themselves. Firstly, when teenagers travel to western countries alone then they get to face peculiar situation, however they act according to their experience and solve conflicts. Moreover it boosts their confidence to live in any circumstances which make them independent. Secondly, youngsters in academy get exposure to multicultural society which is beneficial for their future success. For example, students has to learn English for their studies which is an international language which helps them to work in multinational companies and get adapt to their environment better.

    But going for study to abroad have its drawbacks too. On one hand, it creates scarcity of skilled student which result talent crunch in their own mother land. The development of the nation depends upon the youngsters. In addition to this, it became trend for parents to send kids for their higher education to abroad which creates enormous society pressure on others. Parents have to pay a huge amount of money for study fees and the cost of living which end up financially burden to them. Even if their children win a scholarship, the cost is still unaffordable because of the disparity among countries.

    To conclude, sending children overseas for better education puts them ahead of those studying in the local area moreover, they can mature by getting far from the care of their guardians. However, the high cost and impact of cultural changes should be foregoing concerns.

    • Falak

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      of migrating adolescent(s)

      culture of people from different background (,) furthermore, they learn to cope with the difficulties themselves.

      Moreover (,) it boosts their confidence to live in any circumstances

      students has to (have to) learn English

      it creates scarcity of skilled student(s) which result(s) talent crunch in their own mother land.

      . On one hand, it creates scarcity of skilled student which result talent crunch in their own mother land. The development of the nation depends upon the youngsters. – these two ideas lack cohesion , perhaps one connector is required to complete or link them properly.

      Be careful with punctuations.

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  • Dhawal

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    In this modern era, quality education is vital for everyone. More parents are sending their children to foreign country to learn new culture and improve their world view. Studying abroad gives them prestige in their home land and give pleasure and excitement for the students when they are studying in the new place.However, staying in different culture and nation has its pros and cons

    On the one hand, there are tremendous advantages to studying abroad. One evident strength is that continuing study in a foreign country broadens childrens’ horizons. When parents send their children on trips abroad for educational purposes, it is not only an ideal period to meet people from other backgrounds but also time to immerse in different jobs. In other words, teenagers can learn how to cope with their own troubles themselves by experiencing the school of hard knocks. Furthermore, if students obtain an international degree, their career prospects will be improved. It seems to be obvious that qualifications from a prestigious university hold employers’ attention.

    On the other hand, spending time studying overseas also has a number of disadvantages. Firstly, students almost have to learn everything from scratch. Not to mention the language barrier, they may find it challenging to overcome cultural shocks as well as to adapt with a new environment. A great deal of overseas students have been witnessed to be upset or even depressed after actually knowing that living in a abroad country is not such plain sailing. Besides, parents have to pay a huge amount of money for study fees and the cost of living. Even if their children win a scholarship, the cost is still unaffordable because of the disparity among countries.

    To conclude, the idea of sending children overseas for better education puts them ahead of those studying in the local area; moreover, they can mature by getting far from the care of their guardians. However, the high cost and impact of cultural changes should be prior concerns.

    • Falak

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      give(s) pleasure

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      Keep writing!!

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    • bhanu

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      @fal mam kindly review my writing task

    • Falak

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      Introduction is missing

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      students gets (get) a chance

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      which effects (affects)

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      in canada (Canada) there was a (an) incidence

      Band: 3/6

      keep writing!!

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