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  • Task 2 : (discuss both views- Art )

     Falak updated 1 month ago 2 Members · 3 Posts
  • Falak

    September 14, 2021 at 12:20 AM
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    Some people think that art is an essential subject for children at school while others think it is a waste of time.

    Discuss both views and give your opinion.

  • Arjun

    September 15, 2021 at 10:14 PM
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    • Falak

      September 21, 2021 at 2:57 PM
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      in the forthcoming paragraph(s)

      extra-academic subjects is (are)

      and reach to saturation level ( become unreceptive to new learnings)

      foster ( incorrect usage) ; foster means to encourage

      they can foster ( grasp)

      from studying majors/specializations (choose either )

      To elaborate, (this means that (redundant))

      salary packages and abroad opportunities, since the success rate is comparatively low in creative skills

      Feedback : be careful with ” subject-verb” agreement

      Band : 3.5/6

      keep writing!

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