[Kapil]

In this modern era, the tourism sector has grown rapidly, because it has huge demands from the range of tourists and scientists, thereby a lot of travel destinations are open for them especially remote habitats. This essay will examine the merits and demerits of this progress and provide a logical conclusion.

The two main advantages of access to the natural landscape are getting exposure to individual life and research becomes possible in some areas. Firstly, nowadays people get frustrated with visiting the same places so they always try to find out some interesting places to explore by themselves, and such places help to get the opportunity to learn a new culture, communicate with the locals, and enjoy the amenities which are far from them. For instance, Kutch is one of the small districts, nobody had heard about the name a decade ago but the government developed that site, and presently, around 100.000 tourists visit every year to enjoy the climate and ecological system. Secondly, it is the greatest fortune for scientists to investigate those areas which are still not been introduced to the world, and it also helps the nation to boost the economy. i.e., recently scientists from Sweden got success to find copper in the hill station, so the authority will get benefits from these regions.

However, the open door of the natural environment also has some disadvantages like disturbing the ecosystem and security threats for tourists. Firstly, due to the location being far from the cities all the utilities do not possible to provide at that place so when the person visits these spots they face lots of security, accommodation, and travel issues. For example, the Amazon forest was not permitted the stay to the common public, but recently they introduced a project through which anyone can stay between the flora and fauna, in a month around 6 persons found the death due to the attack by the tiger. Secondly, when humans tamper with nature they also create problems for the animals and plants, therefore it affects the natural system.

To conclude, although there have certain disadvantages like the safety of folks and freighting in climate, it has an extremely positive impact on the character of humans and the scope of the investigation. I reckon that these benefits outweigh its drawbacks.

[Falak]

enjoy the amenities which are far from them. – ?

areas which are (have) still not been introduced to the world,

utilities do not (cannot be provided) possible to provide

in a month around 6 persons (were found dead) found the death due to the attack by the tiger.

there have (are) certain disadvantages

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[Abhay]

There are some pristine places that still exist on Earth and these days backpackers and researchers are given access to these areas. While there are some pros to this, such as enhancement of knowledge and Exciting travel experience, I believe the cons, like life threatening conditions and destruction of the ecology, outweighs the pros and this will be discussed in this essay.

To start with, there are two main advantages. Firstly, accessing the remote areas will allow people, especially scientists, to explore the ecosystem, which will add to the knowledge base for the enlightenment of the humankind. For example, there are technologists that are conducting researches on north pole, one of the least accessible areas on earth, to study the environmental conditions and the inhabitants of that area. Secondly, for avid travelers, it will provide an exciting travel opportunity to visit unexplored areas of this planet.

Regardless of how adventurous these areas can be, there are some disadvantages that cannot be overlooked. First of all, even though traveling can provide an electrifying experience, it can be hazardous, if people are unprepared. For instance, many scientists and travelers tried visiting Amazon forests, a scarcely inspected area, without knowing the environment have lost their lives or had a near death experience during their exploration adventure. Moreover, due to access to these unspoiled areas, infrastructure development will be inevitable, and this will pose a threat to the flora and fauna of that area.

To summarize, though the advantage of increase of environmental knowledge and thrilling tourism are present, travel to remote areas is not only fatal to the ecosphere, but also to human life and I believe, the disadvantages predominate the advantages.

[Falak]

inspected area, without knowing the environment (and) have lost their lives

increase of (enhancing) environmental knowledge

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[Krithiga]

In this contemporary era, visitors and researchers are being permitted to explore remote natural places. This essay will primarily focus on exploring new places and linguistic cultures as the main advantage followed by an investigation of the lack of infrastructure and security threats for performing thesis and research as disadvantages. However, in my view, without discoveries, we cannot achieve new inventions in order to have a well-established ecological space in future.

To begin with, exploring distinct and new places may seem to be exciting and adventurous. Visiting unknown places may give you a different experience with everlasting memories compared to the exposure which you gain by visiting common places. Moreover, traversing the distinct and remote areas would pave the ways to unwrap new cultures from people of diverse communities. Secondly, scientists get to know many unknown things, which helps in developing new theories, products, and so on. To cite an example, an empirical study conducted by Oxford University reveals that 90% of boffins get new ideas when they travel to remote environments. Thus, travel to remote areas may bring numerous advantages.

On the contrary, travelling to underdeveloped and far areas is too risky for humans, resulting in unexpected deaths. The main reason is due to lack of proper communication facilities, poor infrastructure, extreme weather conditions etc. Thus, if individuals had to lose their lives because of enjoyment, this type of travelling should not be encouraged. Also, researchers should enquire about the visiting places well in advance as it might involve security risks such as terrorist attacks, robbery etc. Furthermore, there are chances of boffins getting kidnapped from such places if they are performing confidential research pertaining to the country’s futuristic growth plan and its economic trade deals. For instance, in a recent article, a scientist from China who submitted his research papers on providing a permanent solution for COVID-19 had been kidnapped and his traces are yet unknown.

In conclusion, no gain is without costs. Similarly, the advantages of travel to remote areas come at a price. However, when delved into both pros and cons, the benefits to humanity to be attained are too great when compared to the risks involved.

[Falak]

, scientists get to know many unknown things, which helps (help) in developing – subject -verb agreement

Feedback : A concession statement in B.P 2 , would present your idea and support even better. Words like places, visiting, boffins, travelling were quite repetitive throughout the essay, try to use other synonyms.

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[Falak]

The natural landscape is allowed the …( Access to natural landscape …)

benifits (benefits)

problem might they is destruction of natural resources ( problem they might face) ; people are not going to face depletion rather these places will get destroy in terms of their resources.

organism(s) of bio diversity

The endangered animals would be happening ( certain species will become endangered)

I would suggest to highlight the opinion in one of the body paragraphs too.

Work on sentence formation as mostly there is confusion in subject and object , hence the usage of verb is also inappropriate.

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