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  • TASK 2[DIRECT QUESTION/2 PART TYPE] ONLINE SHOPPING

    Posted by Manprit on April 14, 2022 at 7:23 PM

    Online shopping is significantly increasing. What effect does this have people, what are the demerits and what are the job opportunities?

    Manprit replied 2 months, 2 weeks ago 3 Members · 4 Replies
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  • Divya Bharathi

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    April 15, 2022 at 7:49 PM
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    Over the past two decades, internet has taken a wide spread across for all the shopping needs and other necessities. Most of the tasks, which usually consume time or energy, are now replaced with simple online applications, but it also comes it threats like phishing, spam and worm attacks. In the following paragraphs, the reasons with explanation will be given why shopping via internet is the most hassle free job.

    To begin with, most importantly now days most of the people are working and all the important tasks such as booking tickets and transferring money are done via online itself. Working women’s can buy groceries and other domestic appliances in shopping sites rather than spending time in shops physically. In addition to it, most of the high paid jobs are commonly seen in IT field. For example, previously people need to travel to libraries or bookstores to get books, now it is simply replaced by e-book, which is more cost effective and eco-friendly.

    Even though, they are huge benefits from the online shopping, on the flip side, there are numbers of fraudulent cases are getting registered due to inputting our credentials in many websites. However, the mistakes that happen in a paper work can be corrected with witnesses, whereas the same cannot be expected with the online services. Meanwhile, they are huge hindrances involved with internet shopping, such as security issues, duplications and hacking despite the heavy security layers.

    To conclude, there are many ways that our information can be misused when we use online services, but with proper usage and security, internet shopping is one of easiest and most effective way to do our day to day tasks.

    • Manprit

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      April 19, 2022 at 12:58 PM
      120 Network Points
      Activity Points 1380

      avoid a comma before usage of ‘but’

      error: women

      use the term -purchase/e-books

      error :there are several benefits

      NOTE:Well tried/work on minor grammatical error

  • DEVENDIRAN

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    April 15, 2022 at 9:10 PM
    100 Network Points
    Activity Points 380

    In recent times, people prefer shopping over online platform more than buying items from wholesale or retail stores. This shift in consumer behaviour has huge impact on the income of In-store shopping, especially on small and mid level stores.On the other hand it provides tremendous job opportunities and helps the nation by contributing to unemployment.In the follow paragraphs, shall discuss on the impact of the online shopping as well the demerits and job opportunities it provides.

    To begin with, Increasing in number of consumers towards purchasing commodities through online applications and websites has heavily impacted minor and midlevel offline stores business.Most People’s especially in urban areas prefer online shopping, since this reduce and saves their time on day to day basis.It also easy for everyone to check on all the different kind of products available on the market by surfing over the internet and it also help them in finding the right product based on customer reviews. For example, when a new products gets launched in the market, it’s really easy for any customer to know about the drawbacks and advantage of the product by reading through the customer reviews on online shopping apps.

    However, their are some drawback associated with online shopping like, many unreliable sites cheat the customers with fake products or delivering products that are totally different from the original products which they promise to deliver.But these shopping apps provides good amount of job opening for people in different sectors like logistics, software development and so on. For example, shopping apps like Amazon and FlipKart are having huge employee base and also increasing the employees in order to provide delivery, maintain their huge warehouse and also enhance the software.

    To Summaries, these new trend in shopping has influenced people to buy products virtually and also opens a wide job opportunities for peoples in and around the glob with the drawback of impacting

    the business of in store shopping

  • Manprit

    Member
    April 19, 2022 at 12:57 PM
    120 Network Points
    Activity Points 1380

    avoid a comma before usage of ‘but’

    error: women

    use the term -purchase/e-books

    error :there are several benefits

    NOTE:Well tried/work on minor grammatical errors

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