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  • Task1 (Bar graph)

    Posted by Falak on February 1, 2022 at 10:42 PM

    The Bar graph below shows the Expenditure in Million Pounds on fast food items by income groups in the UK.

    Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.

    » You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
    » You should write at least 150 words.

    Falak replied 2 weeks, 1 day ago 14 Members · 22 Replies
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  • sriranjini

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    February 2, 2022 at 8:27 PM
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    The bar graph illustrates the amount of expense by the earning community of the country United kingdom on prepacked and processed food items mainly focusing on Hamburger, pizza ,fish and chips.

    Overall, High consumption of hamburgers is to be noticed at 47% with the High incomed families compared to Average earning people who considerably eat Fish and chips a lot than the former.

    For instance, people who earn medium salaries consume hamburger thirty-three percent more than low income groups who contribute only 14%. Alternatively, Low income groups eat fish and chips at 17% ,equal to people who earn relatively highest.

    On the other hand, People who get paid low salaries, have pizza much less at just 7% when compared to the medium salaried at 12% and high salaried at 18%. Hamburgers are consumed higher in Average and high salaried families or individuals as such whereas pizza is devoured less in all the three incomed groups.

    No of words- 155

    • Falak

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      February 3, 2022 at 8:50 AM
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      The bar graph illustrates the amount of expense by the earning community of the country United kingdom on prepacked and processed food items mainly focusing on Hamburger, pizza ,fish and chips (units of measurement are missing , year is missing , I would suggest not to replace fast food items with packaged food)

      Overall, High consumption of hamburgers is to be noticed at 47% with the High incomed families compared to Average earning people who considerably eat Fish and chips a lot than the former. (Overall should talk about trend, then why it is presented data and figures . There is no reference of low income group, include that too).

      Bar graph is about the expenditure not the consumption , whole answer is moving around consuming fast food items. Be careful in analyzing the question

  • Vimy

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    February 2, 2022 at 10:46 PM
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    The bar graph illustrates the proportionate expenditures in million pounds on junk food items consumed by the three main income groups, high, average and low in the UK.

    Overall, the expenditure incurred on hamburgers and pizza was mostly high among high and average earning families while fish and chips were mostly consumed by families earning less.

    Families earning high income spends more on Hamburger than any other fast food item at 47%, because of price, population of average and low income earners spends less amount which is around 33% and 14% respectively. However, Fish and Chips were more popular between poor and middles class as compared to rich people who only spends 16% of their income.

    On the other hand, spending’s on pizza was quite high among rich income class at 19% in comparison to families with average income at 11% whereas the least among low earners at around just 7%.

    • Falak

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      February 3, 2022 at 8:56 AM
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      The bar graph illustrates the proportionate expenditures in million pounds on junk food items consumed by the three main income groups, high, average and low in the UK. (in 1990)

      Overall, the expenditure incurred on hamburgers and pizza was mostly high among high and average earning families while fish and chips were mostly consumed by families earning less. ( expenditure on pizza was not high in average group)

      because of price, ( bar graph is nowhere talking about the reason of preference)

      Fish and Chips were more popular between (among) poor and middles class (low income group)

      spending’s (spending)

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  • BHUSHAN

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    February 3, 2022 at 7:27 PM
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    • Falak

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      February 9, 2022 at 9:38 AM
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      do mention year 1990 in introduction.

      grouping and comparison of data has been observed and well appreciated.

      Monotonous sentence structure has been used , try to work on that

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  • Swathi

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    February 4, 2022 at 8:44 PM
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  • Tina

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    February 5, 2022 at 3:04 PM
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    The bar graph depicts the proportion of expenditures in million pounds on junk food items consumed by the three main income groups, high, average and low in the UK (in 1990).

    Overall, the expenses on hamburgers and pizzas were high among the high and average earning families. However, fish and chips were preferred by families that earned less.

    Increased consumption of hamburgers is observed in the high- and average-income earning families with 45% and 32%, respectively. For the families that earned a low income, the percentile that favored hamburgers was only 14%. Across the average income and low-income earning groups, pizza least opted with 11% and 7%, respectively.

    On the other hand, pizza was the least preferred among the low-income earning people which was around 7% and in the average earning population it was slightly higher with 12%. Fish and chips consumption among the high-income groups was 16%, comparatively less than that of those who choose hamburgers and pizza.

    WORD COUNT – 159

    • Falak

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      February 9, 2022 at 9:31 AM
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      pizzas were high among the high and average earning families. (according to graph, pizzas are not higher in average income group)

      Increased consumption (highest amount has been spent on) of hamburgers is observed – graph is not about consumption, but expenditure)

      with 45% and 32% – (unit of measurement is not percentage, but million pounds)

      On the other hand, pizza was the least preferred among the low-income earning people which was around 7% ( repeated usage)

      fish and chips were preferred by families that earned less. (this trend is mentioned in overview, but is not discussed in any of the feature paragraph)

      Be careful with units and graph title

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  • Ohmkar

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    February 6, 2022 at 6:23 PM
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    The bar graph depicts that there is a investment of capital on snacks by various economic groups which Are distributed at remarkable portions in the graph. these items are mainly consumed by the high, low, Average income groups in the uk.

    There is a exponential growth of consumption of hamburger among high and average income groups Which stood at first in the chart. later the consumption of fish and chips stood second position among Average and low income groups. then the consumption of pizza took third position among high and Average income groups.

    All around the consumption of hamburger is at 47% with the High income groups is at high when Compared to average income people, low income people and people with medium salaries eats fish and Chips more which is quite high among others.

    While average economic groups consume hamburger 33% more than low economic groups who Contribute only 14%. There is almost equal contribution with high paid and low paid people in Consumption of fish and chips.

    however, people who get low salaries have pizza least at 7% when compared to average income people At 12% and high income people at 18%.

    Hamburgers are more prior to high income and average income people while pizza is a least option for all the three economic groups.

  • Dhiraj

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    April 8, 2022 at 9:31 AM
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    The Bar chart above is illustrating the amount spent in Millions of Ponds on the Fast food consumption in the United Kingdom, there has been data provided for three income groups that is High Income, Average Income and Lower Income; the fast food items which are taken for comparison are Hamburger, Fish and Chips and Lastly Pizza.

    Overall, the hamburger consumption is much higher for the High Income group compare to the Average and Lower Income group; High Income group spend almost triple of the amount they spend on Fish and Chips or Pizza.

    With regards to the fish and chips the consumption of it is more in the average income group compare to the other two income class, the consumption is average income group is 25%, whereas, Higher and Lower income groups are contributing there 16% and 17% of their spending on the fish and chips.

    However, Pizza is not having that much importance in the lower and average income group compare to the other two junk foods; as we can see the that lower class spends only 7% of their total expenditure where as higher income group spend nearly three times at 19% on the Pizzas.

  • anagha

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    April 27, 2022 at 4:18 PM
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    The bar chart represents the spending on fast foods, hamburger, fish & chips and pizza by three groups : high , average and low income groups in millions.

    Overall, the hamburger was very popular to high and average income groups. people who have low income prefer to have fish and chips for their meals.

    Hamburger consumed mostly by the high and average income earners was 46 and 33 millions respectively. later on hamburger consumption was reduced 3/4 by lower income groups around 15 millions. pizza came as second in expenditure of high income groups was 19 millions, which was about two times more than average income group. fish and chips were more attractive to the average income group rather than high income group. it stood 25 in the consumption of average income but only 16 to the high income group.

    lower income earners loved fish & chips more than any other fast food meals. the spending on this food reached 16 million was the same as the consumption of by upper class. However, the lower income group spent lessor amount on hamburger and pizza was 14 and 5 severally.

    • Falak

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      May 2, 2022 at 12:42 PM
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      spending on fast foods, (such as) hamburger, fish & chips and pizza

      millions (million pounds)

      Hamburger (was) consumed mostly by the high and average income earners (which) was 46 and 33 millions respectively.

      later on (While) hamburger consumption was reduced 3/4 by lower income groups – It is static graph , so “later on” may not be justified.

      it stood (at the expenditure of) 25 (million pounds) in the consumption of average income but only 16 (million pounds) to the high income group.

      spent lessor (lesser) amount

      Feedback : Be careful while writing the units of measurements. Comparison and grouping of data has been done nicely.

      Band: 2/3

  • Bhargav

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    April 28, 2022 at 11:19 AM
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    The above graph illustrates the overview of uk’s expenditure in million pounds on package food items like Hamburg , fish&chips and pizza by various income groups

    Overall, High consumption of Hamburgers is observed at 47% , the high and average income people like eating hamburger most. While the lower income people prefer to consume fish & pizza.

    As may be seen from the bar graph, rich people spend the highest money on hamburger, approximately 47 million pounds and they pay around between 17 and 19 million Pounds for fish & chips and pizza respectively , on the other hand. Average income people spend the maximum amount of cash for fish & chips in comparative to other two groups with 25 million pounds, and just over 10 million Pounds on Pizza and moreover spent mammoth amount on hamburgers at 35 million pounds which tops their list.

    Low-income class people spent a considerably fewer amount on fast food and their most preferred item was fish & chips for which they spent around 17 million Pounds. Their spending on hamburgers was less than 15 million while they spent the least amount on pizza, which amounted to nearly 7 million Pounds.

    • Falak

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      May 2, 2022 at 12:33 PM
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      uk (UK)

      hamburger (the) most

      highest (amount of) money (from their budget)

      respectively ,(.) on the other hand. (,) Average income people

      Average income people spend the maximum amount of cash for fish & chips in comparative (Fish & chips are mostly consumed by the people with average income as compared to other two food categories)

      Feedback: The response is oscillating between “spend” and “spent”, Be careful with tense. I would advise to mention just the trends not figures in “overall”.

      Keep writing!!

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  • Pranav

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    May 19, 2022 at 8:02 PM
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    @fal

    The given bar graph illustrates the amount spent in million pounds on junk food items such as Hamburger, Fish & Chips and Pizza by various income groups in the UK.

    Overall, it is observed that people who earned more spent more on the Hamburger whereas the Pizza was least consumed by the poor. Average Income group spent more on Fish & Chips in comparison with the other two groups.

    The wealthy spent almost the same amount on Hamburger; 47 Million Pounds, which was spent by Average and Low groups combined. Fish & Chips were consumed equally by the wealthy and the poor whereas Average Income group consumed it more; 24 Million Pounds. Pizza was least favorite amongst all, high income group being the only exception where the expenditure was just 13% more than Fish & Chips.

    People with less earnings spent the least on the fast foods, their combined expenditure of 38 million pounds didn’t even match high income group’s hamburger expenses. Fish & Chips were enjoyed the most by group with average earnings. Their expenditure was nearly 53% higher than the rich and poor.

  • bhargav

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    June 14, 2022 at 9:54 AM
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    This graph illustrates about expenditure of fast foods in millions by three income groups. X-axis shows the food item type and y-axis show amount of expenditure spent by respective income group.

    Three income group are categorised as high income, low income and average income. Food items sold are hamburger, fish & chips, pizza.

    Income of selling the food items by high income group, average income group and low income groups are 83 million tonnes, 70 million tonnes and 38 million tonnes respectively.

    Hamburgers, pizza are sold maximum by high income group followed by average income group and followed by low income group. Fish & chips are sold maximum by average income group followed by low income group followed by high income group.

    Income earned by selling hamburger, fish & chips, pizza respectively are 94 million tonnes, 59 million tonnes and 38 million tonnes respectively.

    We can conclude as hamburger sale is maximum and pizza sale is minimum.

    • Falak

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      June 15, 2022 at 8:38 PM
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      about expenditure of (on) fast foods in millions (pounds) by three income groups

      I would advise to follow the structure as discussed in the class. There is need to write overview and no conclusion is required.

      No cohesive devices have been used to establish cohesion

      comparison of data is required and sentence structure needs to be improved.

      No Band score as candidate needs to work on all possible parameters.

  • Ankkush

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    June 15, 2022 at 9:03 AM
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    The bar graph illustrates the amount of expenses and the consumption rate of certain among the three main earning groups in the UK in 1990.

    It can be said that the high income and average income group have spent the most on hamburger. However, fish & chips were favored by low-income family.

    If we compare the bar graph, we can see the consumption of hamburger in high- & average-income family is 47% and 33% respectively. Even though in high income group the consumption of pizza is higher than average and low-income group with 19%,13% and 7% respectively.

    Meanwhile fish & chips are least preferred by the high group with 16% consumption rate whereas it is high among low-income group with 17% consumption rate. The consumption rate of fish and chips among average income group was 25%. The average consumption of hamburger is comparatively lower than the other two income groups with 19%.

    • Falak

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      June 15, 2022 at 8:47 PM
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      Do mention the units of measurement in introduction itself.

      )Overall,) It can be said that the high income and average income group have spent the most on hamburger. However, fish & chips were favored by low-income family

      Try to avoid repetitive usage of words, use synonyms or try to mend structure.

      Keep writing!!

      Band: 2/3

  • Sonam

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    June 16, 2022 at 1:55 PM
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    The above diagram depicts the Expenditure done by different income groups in UK on fast food items. The units will be measured in million pounds.

    Overall, it can be seen hamburger is preferred by masses in UK and people spent generously on it in contrast to other edible items (Fish& chips and pizza).

    As you will see from this graph, high yield group and average yield group contributed almost 45 million pounds and 33 million pounds towards the purchase of Hamburger. Despite occasional fluctuations an upward trend was also seen in pickup of pizza by High earning class in comparison to another category. Whereas a slight increase in the sales of Fish & chips was spotted among the Average income batch by 10 million pound in distinction to other earning category.

    Glaringly, a downturn was there in buying of pizza by 7 million pounds and 12 million pounds amid average earning category and low earning category in estimation with high earning category. On the other hand, same level of purchase of fish & chips was noticed between High pay group and low-pay group. @fal

    • This reply was modified 2 weeks, 5 days ago by  Sonam.
    • Falak

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      June 20, 2022 at 12:20 PM
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      As you will see from this graph, (as it can be observed)

      high yield group and average yield group contributed almost 45 million pounds and 33 million pounds towards the purchase of Hamburger. (respectively)

      in comparison to another category (categories)

      Keep writing!!

      band : 2/3


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