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Blood sports have become a hot topic for debate in recent years. As society develops it is increasingly seen as an uncivilized activity and cruel to the helpless animals that are killed. All blood sports should be banned.
Discuss the main arguments for this statement and give your own opinion
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people raise objections about banning about the blood sports as it is a brutal game ( people agree to the idea of prohibiting such brutal activities)
an inappropriate way of earning ( attaining) the entertainment
This means ( to elaborate)
the engagement of (animals in ) such sports is somehow( clearly projects inhumanity prevailing in the society) level of inhumanity
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AdministratorNovember 14, 2021 at 11:04 PM280 Network PointsActivity Points 6970
Feedback : This (these) are the few reasons
Capital letters should only be used for the first word at the beginning of the sentence or if word is a proper noun.
Punctuation marks should be used carefully especially use of comma after connectors.
Subject – Verb agreement is also a concern
Lexical resources need to be improved.
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