WRITING TASK 2Posted by Anureet on August 3, 2021 at 12:41 PM
Some people say it is important to keep your home and your workplace tidy, with everything organised and in the correct place.
What is your opinion about this?
Write at least 250 words.Anureet replied 1 year, 7 months ago 11 Members · 18 Replies
Akshay KumarMemberAugust 3, 2021 at 1:32 PM
AnureetMemberAugust 4, 2021 at 4:05 PM
Introduction- by some maintaining- by some that maintaining
As well as- and at office
BP1: excelling it- excelling in it
and has- and it has
BP2: youth are: youth constitutes working
degrading- decrease in
Conclusion- manner have- manner can have
Band Score: 4.5/6 Well Written!
SarabjeetMemberAugust 3, 2021 at 3:43 PM
AnureetMemberAugust 4, 2021 at 11:23 AM
Introduction- paraphrase clearly
Introduction- grap- grab
They easily- they can easily
As we must have seen- As we have observed
reading materials are- reading material is
develope discipline- inculcates discipline
definately reflect- definitely is reflected
BP 2: responsibilities- responsibilities will be
habbit of determination- fosters determination
person able- person is able
the home- his home
easily able to face- can easily work under pressure of
working scenario- at the workplace
the houses- their house
As, it- as it- write this sentence with the previous one
Conclusion- give- gives
Clean it- clean
Band Score: 3/6 Keep Writing!
jaidheeshMemberAugust 3, 2021 at 6:04 PM
Some people believe that it is imperative to keep both your homes and workplace clean by neatly organizing your belongings. I also agree with them that a person is more systematic and disciplined when he does this by keeping his surroundings clean and in an orderly fashion.
A more organized individual keeps his home very clean and tidy. From my perspective, by keeping his home clean he can feel more relaxed than someone who makes a mess and keeps his home untidy. If the person has a structured routine lifestyle, he is bound to keep his home neatly organized. Like for instance, an organized person will find his clothes for work all pressed in his wardrobe and ingredients for his morning breakfast all stored in his fridge. He will wash his utensils and keep his dishes organized so that he can use them the next day. He would clean the carpets, scrub the floors and take out the trash to keep his home spot on for him to be more relaxed and comfortable at his home.
This goes the same in his workplace environment also. A person who keeps his desk clean and systematically sorts his work files in cabinets according to daily priorities performs better at work. He is more efficient, and he does not waste his time unwantedly searching for misplaced files. A person who organizes and cleans his desk tells the character of the person. His colleagues and superiors will have a lasting impression of his personality and will appreciate his methodological work style.
To recapitulate, keeping our homes and workstations clean says a lot about a person’s character and personality. He can perform better at work by being organized and relax better at his home by keeping it tidy.
AnureetMemberAugust 4, 2021 at 11:39 AM
Introduction- homes- home
them- the statement
BP1: the person- a person
BP2: this goes the same- He follows the same approach for his workplace too
Tells the character- speaks volumes about his character
Band Score: 4/6 Keep Writing!
VigneshMemberAugust 3, 2021 at 9:35 PM
It is often argued that having a tidy and organized home and workspace is really essential. I completely agree with this view as it could positively affect someone’s life and performance.
It is a well-established fact that clean surroundings prevent the spread of various diseases. Many infectious diseases like dengue, malaria are spreading mainly because of unhygienic living conditions. For Instance, In India, the primary source for most dengue infections is the breeding of mosquitoes in the stagnant water in our Air coolers and kitchenwares. Moreover, with the world experiencing a grave pandemic like COVID-19, many health experts are advising people to keep themselves and their surroundings neat and tidy, not only to stay away from the disease but also to stay healthy.
Secondly, having an organized workplace and home would reduce the stress levels and provide peace of mind. A common opinion is that the state of your study or work table would reflect your current state of mind and in order to have a stable mindset one should always keeping his things in an organized manner. For example, I always keep my passport and other original documents in the same place, in order to devoid myself of the stress of searching for them at the last minute. Moreover, I believe that a cluttered workspace would often bring upon distractions and mismanagement at work and leading to major issues.
In conclusion, even though, in this contemporary era, it is quite difficult to clean and organise things all the time, it is very important to consider the benefits of an organised space and a positive environment.
AnureetMemberAugust 4, 2021 at 12:16 PM
BP1: Don’t mention the name of any country in your example
BP2: Don’t write personal examples
Moreover, I believe- write your opinion in the thesis statement of your introduction
BAND SCORE: 4/6 Good. Keep Writing!
JasmeetMemberAugust 3, 2021 at 10:58 PM
A lot of people consider cleanliness at home or workplace an important task along with other household chores and professional work. A place where you reside or work for couple of hours needs to be neat and tidy in my opinion. Fresh and clear ideas come to our mind and the task get easily completed when the place not stuffed with useless things.
Cleanliness at home or office is an important aspect to get the things done in quick and efficient manner. It reveals a lot about the person about his personality and character. When the things would be at their place, it would become easy for the other person to locate the things and task can be done in no time.
It also inculcates a habit of neatness in children as they grasp and learn things quiet easily by watching the adults. This way they also learn to keep their toys in an arranged manner. Having clean surroundings also ensure less diseases as most of them outbreaks in dirty places.
These days as lot of people are either working from home or using online platform, the scattered things at one’s desk or backyard may distract others which may not result into being a better professional. Places having mess around them doesn’t allow a person to think of some fresh ideas to put into their profession as they may distract them. So, more the cleanliness, higher the chances of efficient work.
To conclude, there are several benefits one can avail while keeping their house and workplace clean and tidy. If each one of us adapt to this habit, the chances of accomplishing task on time and better evaluation would increase.
Chippy SusanMemberAugust 3, 2021 at 11:29 PM
There is wide popularity among people towards organizing the places where one live and work so that an orientation follows in almost every endeavor encountered in daily life. I stoutly believe in the aforesaid opinion as this habit can definitely bring productivity and sophistication to the routine.
First of all, the well-oriented structuring of a place-whether it is a living or work-can help in finding essentials in a fast manner as it is always intimidating to search for something in the blue. In addition, even the sight of arrangement of utilities, clothing, and their entire attire can calm one’s mind along with shaping the personality of a person as well since the disorientation might create discomforts thereby affecting the emotional wellbeing. For instance, it is noticed that people who lack systematic order in life tend to be lazier and chaotic which damages their communication with others.
Moreover, the organization of things and places requires categorization that aids in their prioritization; this classifies what’s important and what isn’t which has a valuable nature when it comes to innumerable events that surround us in the commonplace. This can be exemplified by the fact that workers who are organized tend to be more productive than those who are clumsy and sluggish. Also, keeping places neat and tidy reduces contagious diseases like malaria, typhoid, and dengue; these have the potential to destruct the life of a person even fatally.
To conclude, it is important to follow a lifestyle that involves cleanliness, orientation, and sophistication rather than distort and jumble since the former can definitely bring out the best in a person, both in etiquette and personality.
AnureetMemberAugust 4, 2021 at 1:08 PM
Introduction- paraphrase the question statement more clearly
BP1: place-whether: place whether
a living- a house
or work- can- or work can
in the blue- in the blues
their entire- the entire
since the- since,
BP 2: places- different places
This can be exemplified- Take for example, – While stating examples uss example linkers
Conclusion: distort and jumble- distortion and clumsiness
summarise your main points
Remarks: Clarity in thoughts
Band Score:4/6 Keep Writing!
SurajMemberAugust 4, 2021 at 2:59 PM
Most of us do not spare time to clean our dwellings regularly. However, many argue that it is essential to keep the places where we spend most of our time in, such as our homes and workspaces neat and tidy. I completely agree with this argument as untidy surroundings lead to several health issues whereas well ordered habitat improve efficiency and mood.
Firstly, to maintain a proper personal hygiene it is necessary to tidy your personal spaces. With proper hygiene one can avoid several diseases such as dengue, typhoid, diarrhea, flu and other allergies which result from untidy surroundings. For example, people living in apartment buildings and societies with regular cleaning are less susceptible to common cold and other flu.
Secondly, one’s efficiency of work, comfort level and mental health improve when his/her habitat is well kept while same person gets more irritable and depressed when it is cluttered. People are able to concentrate and get more work done in a shorter span of time when their work-desk is organized and they have sufficient place to sit comfortably. Many psychologists suggest patients suffering from depression or anxiety to live in a cleaner atmosphere. For instance, a local therapist said that more than 50 percent of her patients’ condition improved when they started cleaning up. Although people complain saying they do not have time for cleaning, it takes little time when regularly done and is a worthwhile sacrifice to make for a healthier and happier living.
To conclude, while regular clean up of the places you frequent will take up some time it will bring an overall improvement to your lifestyle as it protects you from common diseases, increases your work efficiency and maintains your mental health.
AnureetMemberAugust 5, 2021 at 11:07 AM
INTRODUCTION: paraphrase your question statement clearly
time in,- time
BP1: a proper- proper
with regular cleaning- where cleanliness and sanitation is maintained
BP2: habitat- place
while same- whereas the same
CONCLUSION: you frequent- you frequently visit
summarise your main points of the BPs
BAND SCORE: 4/6 Keep Writing!
shresthaMemberAugust 4, 2021 at 3:21 PM
AnureetMemberAugust 4, 2021 at 3:40 PM
right position- correct position
I also agree- I agree
BP1: perspective- perspective
have a- has a
will be maintained- can be maintained
than- as compared to
can able- can be able
in being- in him being responsible towards his belongings
it can be used- they can be used
BP2: well planned- well organised
its priority- on a priority basis
Have- has a
worksite as a result: then
his all essential- all his essential
Conclusion- workplace- workplace clean
one of the most- one of the key features
Band Score: 3.5/6 Keep Writing!
SakshiMemberAugust 6, 2021 at 10:40 AM
A few individuals opine that, it is pivotal that one should keep their working area and the house spic and span, with getting everything managed and in the right corner. Sorting out things in the correct site reflects one personality. I strongly agree with the above stated argument and this essay will discuss the same with some relevant examples.
To begin with, keeping things well-presented is taught to us in childhood. It reflects the mannerism inculcated in an individual to showcase its inner self. Further, putting the objects in right position makes it easy to find them and saves a lot of time when they are needed again. For instance, if things are not arranged systematically and cluttered everywhere will present a negative image of the house owner to a person coming from outside. Evidently, if the apartment is not tidy it give back a wrong presentation of the person and can pave the way for more infections.
To elucidate further, the offices should be kept organized and files should be handled in sorted way. So that, if a client is coming to meet you always take a positive image for a well-organized workplace. And one should always maintain their office to flourish and to attract more clients.
conclusion, there are many benefits on maintain our homes and offices in immaculate conditions. I believe any
citizen that adopts the habit of being organized will increase their likelihood
of accomplishing tasks and their chances of being better evaluated by their employers.
AnureetMemberAugust 9, 2021 at 12:21 PM
INTRODUCTION: Paraphrase clearly and don’t add any extra information
write main points in your thesis statement
BP1: its- his
give back- leaves a wrong impression
of the person- on the person
sorted way- a sorted way
Conclusion: summarise the main points
BAND SCORE: 3.5/6 Keep Writing!
SumitaMemberAugust 8, 2021 at 12:00 PM
Generally people believe that keeping our work station and house clean and arranged is very essential. I also agree that opinion that having a neat and organized living and working space is very important as it reflects a lot about personality of an individual. In this essay, we will discuss about importance of cleanliness and organizing things.
Clean working environment makes people work faster and in efficient manner. Though one can work from anywhere but if your work desk is well ordered then it is easier to find required stuff thus making us work faster, also it gives good vibes throughout the day and encourages one to work efficiently. Its importance has especially increased during this covid pandemic times when mostly people are working from home and keeping things neat and aligned creates a sense of separation between your work area and home.
Apart from that having clean house has following benefits such as, it is less stressful to work, aesthetically pleasing, prevents allergies, maintains hygiene etc. Normal house activities like cooking, gardening, washing clothes etc. can be done in stress free way in an organized house as all required material to do these chores can be found at a defined place, with no time being wasted in finding things. Also clean house looks appealing to everyone and additionally, it maintains good health and hygiene which in turn prevents our family from any kind of dust and pest allergies.
In conclusion, keeping areas around us neat and well ordered is very crucial as it keeps us stress free, efficient throughout our day. Also it helps us raise a young generation which is well versed with importance of cleanliness.