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  • Writing Task 2: Discuss both views (climate change)

    Posted by Falak on August 21, 2021 at 7:39 PM

    Some people think climate change has a negative impact on business, while others think that it provides more business options. Discuss both view and give your own opinion.

    Falak replied 10 months, 1 week ago 2 Members · 2 Replies
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  • Arjun

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      Body Paragraph 1 : To elaborate (more), more is redundant here.

      Climate can be drastically impacted if there will be a flood (Agricultural sector can be impacted adversely with intensive climatic changes)

      poor harvesting makes farmers (peasantry) more ( comparative form of poor is poorer ; not more poorer) poorer (helpless) and less demand in products (great loss in crop yields)

      In short (apparently) , such things is (are) not under control

      Body paragraph 2 : Not convinced with content related to MNC

      Conclusion : Try to state the argument completely , followed by your opinion

      Feedback : Need to work on sentence structure.

      band : 3/6

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