Writing task 2 (English language becoming most prominent)Posted by Dipinder on August 2, 2021 at 5:04 PM
The development of tourism contributed to English becoming the most prominent language in the world. Some people think this will lead to English becoming the only language to be spoken globally.
What are the advantages and disadvantages to having one language in the world
Vasanth reddyGuestAugust 2, 2021 at 5:56 PM
Thrive in tourism had contributed a lot and lead english language to be the most important across the globe . This rises to a new thought that english will be the only language to be used as a tool of communication . There are many pros and cons of these consequences , as , it destroys the native languages which is deep rooted in hearts of the native speakers and also effects culture and tradition which is linked with language , however , it creates a borderless world which promotes peace and harmony as it gives the sense of one family moreover we never never find any chaos in communication between organizations where there is a difference in the language and also exchange of science and technology and knowledge can be accomplished which creates a world of oppourtunity
Different parts of the world has various languages for communication and each and every language has its immense prominence . As we are exposed to our mother tongue when we were as infants and there is huge predominance of language over the customs and traditions many of the conservatives may feel it effects the heritage and identity of their own traditions where it creates riots over language and we experience gradual ravaging of native languages where there may be dominance of native english people all over the globe which may lead to huge turbulence in society .
One of the main advantages of english being spoken across the world is exchange of culture and tradition and knowledge and science and technology ,nothing but , globalization can be achieved very easily . if there is no contrast in languages used students and research scholars can understand and can have a profound knowledge on research in various fields of science , technology and medicine . Ease of communication between two nations will be no more a problem as it fills the gap of communication as a bridge which leads to exchange of ideas , thoughts and whole world can achieve and surmount great heights together .
Using one tool of communication can achieve great things but it should not have ill effects on the local languages as they have been part of native public for centuries as it is deep rooted and serves as a bridge to understand the great literature written by their ancestors , therefore , learn various languages but have a deep knowledge on your native language .
AdministratorAugust 2, 2021 at 8:22 PM20 Network PointsActivity Points 1230
essay is way too long, there is minimum requirement of 250 words only, any word over that is waste of precious time. Intro is very long and not well structured, there is no clear thesis. remember excessive no of words will exhaust your lexical resource, the more you write, the less words you have as synonyms.
work on sentence formation/structure and appropriate usage of words. thrive in tourism isn’t the right collocation. instead, thriving tourism/boost in tourism could’ve been written.
there is no mention of central idea in BP1, which makes it difficult to figure that which side are you mentioning of having English as a global language
do not write advantages and disadvantages on same points/ideas, it is contradicting. In simple words, just come up with 2 advantages and 2 disadvanteges based on diffesent ideas.
“in your conclusion” u look digressed, it sounds off topic. and conslusion has to begin with phrase or word that expresses clearly that conslusion has begun. for instance: to conclude, finally, in conclusion, etc.
MemberAugust 9, 2021 at 5:46 PM0 Network PointsActivity Points 100
Soaring importance of English language is contributed by tourism a lot . Few people think that this may lead the English language to be as a global language . English language as a global language creates opportunities to exchange science and new inventions where as English as a global language has vicious effect on native languages and customs .
One of the main advantages of English language as a global language allows to interchange the ideas of new technology and inventions which plays an important role to promote industrialization . Sharing of new technology can be done in an easier way as before where communication will be no more a barrier which allows everyone one on this planet can enjoy the benefits of new inventions . English as a global language creates huge employment opportunities where we can observe surge in economical status of states.
One of the disadvantages of English as a global language is : it shows dangerous effect on native languages which leads to the extinction of native languages . As the culture of the nation is directly linked with language we may also can observe the disappearance of various customs across the globe . This vanishing of native languages gradually due to the dominance of English language for various reasons effects the heritage and we cannot able to understand great literatures which were composed in native languages .
English as the only language as tool of communication helps in surmounting great summits in various fields together where as it has many ill effects on native customs and traditions as it leads to the extinction of native languages .
AdministratorAugust 10, 2021 at 3:19 AM20 Network PointsActivity Points 1230
Your sentence structure needs to be worked upon.
You have not displayed your lexical resource, pls refrain from using one word twice. “English language”, “global language”, “native language” are repeating a lot. Try using synonyms.
Few sentences are not making sense such as – “Sharing of new technology can be done in an easier way as before where communication will be no more a barrier” this means opposite to what you actually want to express.
“which allows everyone one on this planet can enjoy the benefits of new inventions”
“and we cannot able to understand great literatures”
“English as the only language as tool of communication”
“helps in surmounting great summits in various fields together where as it has many ill effects on native customs and traditions as it leads to the extinction of native languages .” THIS PART IS PARTICULARLY VERY WELL WRITTEN.
Content to justify ideas is not balanced, particularly in BP1, try to give equal amount of justification or explanation for each of your ideas.
You could have used better ideas in your BP2, what you have written are not very distinct from each other.
I have tried writing with same points as yours to give you an idea about balancing the content of ideas and using connectors and synonyms.
Many a person Postulates that surge/jump in importance of English language, which is majorly contributed by/attributed to tourism, will eventually make it the only global language. This will prove to be meritorious for allowing free flow of ideas among countries but with down side of overshadowing the cultures.
One of the significant bright sides of English becoming lingua franca of the world, is that it will facilitate the smooth exchange of ideas. In other words, with ease in sharing of technologies, discoveries and inventions due to single common tool of communication, learning and advancement will be promoted in the whole world and not only in a particular region. Secondly, English becoming the only spoken language will aid in economic growth. Which is to say that, it will assist in generating immense employment avenues by breaking the language barriers which prominently exist in present world, ultimately boosting the economies.
On the other hand, there are several disadvantages of English being the only dominant language. Such as, disappearance of native languages and cultures. To expound, regional language is the essence of any region, with its culture depending on it and overpowering of English as a language on vernacular languages, could result in obsolescence of the latter and tenets in the vicinity. Lastly, English becoming only means of communication will result in waning of historical importance of a place. Which means that, gradually spoken language of a place will dissipate to a state of becoming dead, finally leading to inability among the natives of reading scriptures written in their own language.
To conclude, While the society can reap benefits of economic growth and development by having English as the only means of communication. This will also came at the detriment of cultural disappearance.