WRITING TASK 2: TWO DIRECT QUESTION ESSAY: ARTPosted by Anureet on September 21, 2021 at 8:10 AM
Art is considered an essential part of all cultures throughout the world. However, these days fewer and fewer people appreciate art and turn their focus to science, technology, and business.
Why do you think that is?
What could be done to encourage more people to take interest in the arts?Sheeba replied 1 year, 5 months ago 9 Members · 11 Replies
jaidheeshMemberSeptember 21, 2021 at 9:11 AM
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AnureetMemberSeptember 23, 2021 at 9:04 AM
Introduction- are seen to enjoy- rephrase
BP 1: From the childhood- Since childhood
since and technology and business- science, technology and business
Band Score: 4.5/6 Keep Writing!
SumitMemberSeptember 21, 2021 at 7:33 PM
Cultures across the countries often consider the art as the essential part of their societies. With changing times, importance of art in people perspective, has reduced significantly whereas those of prevailing segments such as science, technology and business, have increased considerably. In my opinion, art has been an integral part of our culture since ages because cultural advancement without its role is not possible. In order to attract more people towards this extinguishing trade, we need to adapt modern techniques while preserving its core competency.
On one hand, since ages, journey of mankind has been described by art, carved beautifully by our ancestors, which has resulted in passing up of information across generations, about crucial phases of our evolution since ages. For instance, we have seen discovery of carving on walls across all continents, beautifully describing how early man used to live their life, done during Stone Age. Although, science and business has attracted the attention of our younger generation more rapidly, art continues to be a medium for expressing our thoughts in a more presentable manner. The more we ignore the art, the harder it will be for us to express.
On other hand, in order to arrest the fall of interest among youth, we need to appreciate even the smallest effort being put in this field. Giving due recognition to artists and rewarding their work will certainly pull more number of people towards this profession, resulting in more commercially viable projects for art enthusiastic. Incorporating modern and scientific techniques for creating artworks, sponsoring exhibitions, and exploring commercial aspect of art, will provide a much needed boost to it. The more we promote the art, the merrier will be the result for art industry.
In conclusion, the art is a beautiful way of expressing not only our thoughts, but also our journey along various phases of life, and it need to be preserved at all cost. Furthermore, all required steps should be taken by appropriate authorities in order to highlight and reward the efforts of an artist, who are often ignored. Art not only gives us the glimpse of our past, but it also helps us in shaping our future.
AnureetMemberSeptember 23, 2021 at 9:07 AM
Introduction- the art- art
people perspective- people’s perspective
BP2: since ages- redundant
Conclusion- need- needs
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AbhishekMemberSeptember 23, 2021 at 2:47 AM
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AnureetMemberSeptember 23, 2021 at 9:14 AM
BP 1: way: ways
erratic- the erratic
large chunk- a large chunk
BP2: diversity, this – diversity. This
Conclusion- artistic- artists
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MohitMemberSeptember 23, 2021 at 7:39 AM
The world is a group of Culture and the cultures, in its nucleus , are having ‘Art’ so the development of world is basically the development of ‘Art’. Needless to mention that at present, contracting the ‘Art’ amongst the wide population has now become a subject which require pondering.
<font face=”inherit” style=”font-family: inherit; font-size: inherit;”>There would be no exaggerate , if we say that the ‘Art’ is the mother of the culture. It not only carve the culture but also nurture it. All the cultures are nothing else but a </font>developed<font face=”inherit” style=”font-family: inherit; font-size: inherit;”> shape of ‘Art’ only. For Example , </font>Indian<font face=”inherit” style=”font-family: inherit; font-size: inherit;”> culture is totally a bunch of various ‘Arts’ like , how to live , how to rule, how to marry , how to judge, and so on. By observing the </font>Indian<font face=”inherit” style=”font-family: inherit; font-size: inherit;”> culture we can easily say that the culture is a evolved phase of ‘Art’ only.</font>
But as the ‘Art’ has been evolved into a culture therefore the main stream of population do not consider it as a part of their life style. In a hasty life, if the ‘Art’ can be made a part of livelihood , then it would be more captivated. For example ‘Chanting of Mantra’ is an ‘Art’ and is an essential part of various occasions, which, in return, generate the money to the enchanter, and hence this Art is famous amongst the people . So adding the art with the livelihood can make them as popular as other things like Science and Sports .
In conclusion , the Art is an inevitable part of the culture , this is the Art who played an important role in our evolution and has made us a disciplined society and I strongly recommend the penetration of the Art into peoples’ livelihood . By adopting this method, we may resurrect the Art .
siddhuMemberSeptember 23, 2021 at 7:58 PM
Art is consider as one of the imperative aspect among one’s country cultural heritage. However, in this evolving world, conferring art has become difficult and propensity towards other fields like technology and business has become more prominent. There can be many reasons which can be attributed to. This essay will discuss further on this context and also suggest some potential strategies to make the situation better.
To embark on, Firstly, Art in an externalization of individual skill. This is one of the most renowned skill and was given utmost importance in the past. This can be considered as one of the most reliable lucrative sources for bolstering countries economy. In other words, this encourages to enhance tourism, which can be used as a catalyst for industrialization. For instance, generally, tourists show interest in exploring cultural heritage domains and throng in huge numbers if it is well established, this helps in employment opportunities which is a paucity in developing countries. Additionally, this will be helpful in boosting local Arti crafts as well.
On the downside of the topic, Art is tending towards decline phase from generation to generation . Although, most of the students are passionate towards art yet, they prefer in imbibing knowledge towards technology or other business, this is due to the less wages paid compared to other domains and moreover, constraint in exhibiting their internal thoughts to full extent is also one of the primary reason to forsake this skill. However, these can be surmount by some potential initiatives by legislative bodies to establish back to its status. For example, Increasing the pays for the individuals in this domain, giving freedom to the artist in his depiction. However, Autonomy needs to be monitored as this might lead some adverse effects due to the controversial art works and encouraging public to go to art exhibitions to make them aware of the importance toward this intriguing skill is the need to the day.
From the aforesaid statements, In my opinion Art is unique asset which every country owns and this has lost its place in present day society due to numerous challenges, however, with possible potential strategies, government should take immediate action to save our arts and artists otherwise this would go in oblivion.
JananiMemberSeptember 24, 2021 at 7:42 PM
Inevitably, art is considered as an imperative part of all cultures around the world. However, People’s propensity has changed towards these lucrative fields like technology, business and science. Only very few desperate persons are focusing on arts. In this essay, I will discuss one of the very important reasons behind this condition, and also with recommendation on how to grow individual’s interest in arts.
The first and foremost reason is because to the sluggish growth in an artistry profession. Its widely believed that, success is measured by a person’s salary, job title and reputations. Thus, this has inculcated one’s mind between accepting arts as a hobby and profession. Majority of the parents don’t permit their children’s to pursue their career in fine arts like native martial arts, painting and dance. For example, one of my friends Geetha was very passionate about making artificial jewelry, but she was neither encouraged nor allowed, due to its low income.
Rather than being ambiguous on this issue, government should bring some awareness programs among the youngsters to increase the interest. For instance, if people are rewarded with high salary, they will eventually gain recognition in this society. As a result, this will increase the chances of increasing people’s attention to arts.
To conclude, although art is considered as an essential part of our cultures, yet the inclination towards business and giant sectors are more in terms of career and salary. Therefore, my suggestion is to provide more job opportunities for people in fine arts.
hariMemberSeptember 28, 2021 at 7:36 PM
Art is heart and soul of every culture across the globe but only a fraction of people admire it. As a result, majority of people have shifted their interest towards science, technology, and business. This essay portrays the rationale behind this perception. Besides, an attempt to find the pragmatic solution for this situation is presented.
First and foremost, parents and teachers educate their children to pursue subjects like science, technology and business in order to have a lucrative career. Furthermore, children are compared with wealthy and successful people from science, technology and business stream. Therefore, their wards grow up thinking that, in order to be a successful person one must only take up science, technology and business subjects. For instance: Since my childhood, people from technical and business streams like Bill Gates, Ambani, etc only have been depicted as exemplar of success. Therefore, this has been engrained in my mind to the extent that I could not think of any other stream but Science or Engineering in my schooling.
In order to motivate people to shift their focus towards art, it should be introduced as a compulsory subject. Because of this, parents and academicians would realize the value of the subject. In the same way, younger ones would realize its value. This foundational impression stays with them for lifetime. For example: I still remember the science exhibition conducted at my school. However, no significance was given to art. I assume, had art also been exhibited like science exhibitions, many would have fascinated the subject. In other words, the stream would be marketed in a better way.
In a nut shell, children should be taught to understand the value of arts by parents and teachers since their young age. Moreover, exhibitions and live events must be promoted from schooling for better reach in order to rake in interest in the field of art as well.
SheebaMemberOctober 4, 2021 at 1:19 PM
Throughout the world art plays a vital role in all cultures. Even though people like art, they shape their career to science, technology and business. Using the art people gained knowledge about their forefather’s lifestyle, occupation, culture and food. Art is also a way of communication. Art explained about the development from the stone age till now. For instance how people make fire, hunting technique, food, shelter and the way they dress. In this essay let us see what is the reason for the people not choosing art as their career and what are the initiatives has to be done to enhance the interest of the people in the arts.
To begin with, there is a decline in the field of art as more people prefer science and technology rather than art. The career has a link with the status and intelligence. If people take art as their career, then the society around them will conclude that these people have no knowledge to learn about the latest technologies. There is a common myth people who learns art is disobedient to their parents. The career in the art makes the society to be judgmental towards the people’s character and intelligence. When compared to other fields the scope of earning money is higher than arts. So people are obsessed to make more money through their career. Also people think the art as a boredom field.
In addition to it, to develop the interest towards the art more awareness about the art has to be spread. Now a days, the department of art is getting vanished so government has to allocate some special funds to reimburse the beauty of the field. Does the art has drawings and paintings? The answer is definitely no, there are different types of art works are available such as resin arts, carvings, collages using papers and creating an art from the waste objects. Many art museums has to be open to induce people’s interest.
In conclusion, some students are interested to choose art as their career but they have a question, what the society will think? In olden days, art was the main reason for the development of the mankind. The more we learn art, the greater the development of the culture will be. None of the studies are high and low each field has their own fame and all the careers are interlinked for the growth of the modern world.