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  • WRITING TASK 2: TWO DIRECT QUESTION ESSAY- HEALTH

    Posted by Anureet on September 27, 2021 at 1:11 PM

    Walking is known to be beneficial for health and yet fewer and fewer people are walking these days.

    What are the reasons for this?

    What can be done to tackle this problem?

    Yanshi replied 9 months, 1 week ago 7 Members · 11 Replies
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  • PRIYA

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    September 27, 2021 at 1:53 PM
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    Walking use to be considered as one of the best exercise for health still now a days very less people follow walking. There are several reasons to it which includes pandemic than emerging trends of gym and also the pollution outside. The awareness programs and more work on suitable infrastructure by government can certainly motivate people for walking.

    These days pandemic is the first reason people do not prefer to go outside for walking rather they prefer to follow home exercises and yoga to meet the fitness goals. Many qualified fitness trainers from gyms they have started online fitness program where they make people do exercise online and they promote their ads on social media very well hence that is another reason people stopped going out for walk.

    The pollution can also be another reason in several cities that people do not feel good as the air is polluted because of a lot of vehicles on road and there is no particular walking paths are constructed in every locality. Lifestyle changes also responsible for this. Going to gym ahs become a status symbol for youngsters and they do not prefer to got for walk whereas some are so busy with jobs work from home than taking care of kids and other family members they do not get time for walking.

    Walking can be promoted since beginning to young kids than they would have more awareness towards its benefits. The government should also take care to develop the suitable space for walking in every locality. The pollutions control measures should also be taken care by authorities in residential areas.

    In conclusion if we will have more awareness and the suitable area in our locality than i am sure people will be motivated for walking and this is every one’s responsibility to encourage kids and adults also the senior citizens to go for walk and they should look at it as a family activity also not only fitness activity.

  • Sheeba

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    September 27, 2021 at 1:53 PM
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    To lead a healthy life walking is essential. Now a days, fewer people show interest in walking. The awareness of walking have been reducing these days. In this essay, let us see the root cause of people who are not going for a walk and also the solution to tackle this problem.

    To begin with, the main reason for people who does not go for a walking is the lack of time management. Every people have 24 hours per day. They have to priorities their work. Some people goes for a walk in the summer and avoids going for a walk in winter due to the climate change. Walking helps to maintain their body fit moreover it is good for respiratory system and circulatory system. These are the benifits of walking in the dawn.

    In addition to it, to tackle this problem people should have determination towards their goal. They should wake early in the morning. If they didn’t go for walking in the dawn, they will not go for a walk in the rest of the day. Because every people will be busy with their own rat race.

    To conclude with, The more they walk, the healthier they will be. First step will be always harder but once they allocate time for walking in the morning they will feel fit for the rest of the life. Once the walking becomes their habit they cannot stop walking.

    • Anureet

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      September 29, 2021 at 8:50 AM
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      Introduction- have been reducing- has reduced

      Paraphrase the question statement without adding extra information and write a clear thesis statement incorporating the main points

      BP1 : does not- do not

      people have- person has

      goes- go

      body fit moreover- body fit. Moreover,

      benifit- benefits

      BP 2: wake early- wake up early

      didn’t- don’t

      every people- each person

      Conclusion- with, The- with, the

      the walking- walking

      Band Score: 2.5/6 Keep Writing!

  • Swati14

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    September 27, 2021 at 2:42 PM
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    Presently, a very less number of people take an interest in walking. Walking is acknowledged for health as the benefit for the health but this time number of people taking interest in that area. This essay will discuss why people do not prefer to work and provide options for what can be done to handle this difficult situation.

    The main reason for this is the increase in the number of vehicles on the road because it is time-saving and easy for people to commute from one place to another, which also provides comfort to the people. For instance, in the past, everyone preferred to walk for grocery shopping and bring children from school but at present, all work is done with the help of vehicles, so because of this walking becomes very less these days.

    The solution to this can be to join a gym or sport which would be a better option for walking and is necessary to stay fit. For example, after joining, a fitness center makes people fit and fine. The more they work out, the more they become healthy. Moreover, it keeps the body healthy and makes the mind refreshed.

    To conclude, walking is beneficial for the health but it is it can be seen that most people do not walk regularly due to their dependency on several vehicles. To solve this problem people should join any gym or sports and they will be staying healthy and fit.

    • Anureet

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      September 29, 2021 at 8:54 AM
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      Introduction- an interest- interest

      the benefit for the health- its us beneficial for health

      Thesis statement should include main points

      BP1: becomes- has become

      Conclusion- the health- health

      it is it can- it can

      be staying- stay

      Band Score: 3/6 Keep Writing!

  • Harvinder

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    September 27, 2021 at 7:51 PM
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    Total words written =289

    time taken 30 minutes

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    • Anureet

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      September 29, 2021 at 8:15 AM
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      Introduction- paraphrase clearly and write a clear thesis statement incorporating main points.

      BP 1: peoples- people

      BP2: vehicles who- vehicles which

      Use passive voice, correct capital letter mistakes and incorporate complex sentence

      Band Score: 3/6 Keep Writing!

  • Akshay Kumar

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    September 28, 2021 at 6:46 PM
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    • Anureet

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      September 29, 2021 at 8:40 AM
      140 Network Points
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      Introduction- benifits- benefits

      remidial- remedial

      BP1: in just- with just

      the people- people

      Conclusion- in the- for the

      Band Score: 3.5/6 Keep Writing!

  • Yanshi

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    October 1, 2021 at 12:06 PM
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    Walking associates a lot of health benefits with it and can prove to be really advantageous to health if done on a regular basis. However, despite the obvious health benefits, very few people resort to walking these days. One could consider a lot of reasons behind the fading popularity of walking, including lack of time and motivation, and this essay will curate some of the possible causes along with the solutions to the same.

    In today’s competitive world, we seem to have arrived in a situation, where the world is advancing at an ever increasing pace, people are busy progressing in their careers and accomplishing their materialistic needs and health has taken a backseat. As a result, people are paying lesser and lesser time to their health than they ideally should. Lack of time, motivation and awareness has led them to drift apart from health beneficial activities such as walking. People find more pleasure in accomplishing their materialistic desires than spending time on their health, and walking seems to be an impossible task for such people.

    Another point worth mentioning is, increasing levels of pollution, which tends to demotivate people to walk, even if they are willing to do so. Walking in a degraded environment with harmful gases around, tends to do more harm than good. As a result, many health conscious people, prefer to resort to indoor exercises. Degrading condition and lack of proper roads, footpaths and parks could also be considered as one of the causes, as it prevents people from walking peacefully in a suitable environment.

    To get more people to walk, one needs to make several amendments, including improvement in pollution and infrastructure. Walking in a polluted environment associates a lot of negative effects with it, therefore it is necessary for the government to ponder over the fact and make some serious changes like reducing the number of vehicles on road, supervising the activities of factories and prohibiting them from dumping their chemical wastes into the environment, etc. Furthermore, people need to be made aware of importance of health and walking. Government needs to come up with health schemes, awaring people about health benefits associated with walking. A considerable amount of time should be given in improving the infrastructure, allowing people to walk, who are willing to walk.

    Moreover, people need to realize the fact that the better their health is, the more pleasurable their lives will be. If everyone starts considering their health on priority basis, they themselves will indulge in fruitful activities like walking.

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