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Year gaps between high school and graduation has become common these days. A host of students often procrastinate their graduation through travel or work. This essay shall discuss whether these year gaps effect students career after their degree.

To begin with, a myriad of students does conjuncture of education and work to financially stabilize their living. Firstly, it would help students to afford their daily needs without burdening their parents. Secondly, an individual might adopt to work pressure and its atmosphere which further succor after their education. Therefore, it is vital to acknowledge the fact that studying and earning parallelly is not an abominable thing to do.

On the other hand, some individuals delay their education by travelling. It is not awful to take break from hectic schedule and have a breath in between by travelling. But taking for too long might eventually affect career when they are not able to justify it when they attend interviews afterwards. For instance, recruiters may be obnoxious about the fact that a year has been put in vain by travelling. Thus, it is important to build a proper profile if at all there are gaps intervening the education.

In conclusion, I do believe that some has to face the music due to gaps if at all they are not in position to justify it. This essay has discussed both brighter and lighter side of gaps illustrating that disadvantages of it might overweigh advantages up to some extent.

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Now a days irrespective of the scale of industries, advertising products play pivotal role in attracting customers.. In some countries, children are persuaded to buy toys , snacks and other good imposing tremendous pressure on their parents in buying these products. This essay shall discuss to what extent does these highly emphasized advertisements affect both children as well as their parents.

To begin with, it is crucial to advertise any product in electronic or print media so that the company would be successful in making profits. Firstly, Many companies advertise their product veritably especially to attract children. Children are inconspicuous about the toys and believes whatever is shown in the advertisement and insists their parents to buy those products. Children are fantasized with these toys so that they can put on airs infront of their friends. Secondly, snacks and other eatable items are emphasized with higher degree in advertisements indulging children to buy and eat them at any cost. For instance, cheese ,mayo and other ingredients are added in higher proportions in the advertisements than in reality making children to crave for these products. Therefore, these advertisements likely disturbs the well being of children and at the end both parents and children are equally affected .

On the other hand, advertisements which are not exaggerated and are relatable to actual product may not indulge children in buying them thus helping parents in providing things that are useful for their children in daily deeds. It has been proven by many researchers that eateries that are high in sugars and fats are advertised rigorously making children to eat them on regular basis putting more burden on parents at same time health of an individual is also obliterated. For these reasons , government should initiate respective directives to these advertising companies so that threshold is not reached.

In conclusion, proper advertisements maintains harmony in children , parents and in the market. I disagree that all advertisements are notorious but obscure about the extent of advertisements that are menace in the market. I agree with the fact that some advertisements are worrisome to the parents. So proper publishing and showcasing of advertisements should be obligatory.

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Now a days irrespective of the scale of industries, advertising products plays pivotal role in attracting customers.. In some countries, children are persuaded to buy toys , snacks and other good imposing tremendous pressure on their parents in buying these products. This essay shall discuss to what extent does these highly emphasized advertisements affect both children as well as their parents.

To begin with, it is crucial to advertise any product in electronic or print media so that the company would be successful in making profits. Firstly, Many companies advertise their product veritably especially to attract children. Children are inconspicuous about the toys and believes whatever is shown in the advertisement and insists their parents to buy those products. Children are fantasized with these toys so that they can put on airs infront of their friends. Secondly, snacks and other eatable items are emphasized with higher degree in advertisements indulging children to buy and eat them at any cost. For instance, cheese ,mayo and other ingredients are added in higher proportions in the advertisements than in reality making children to crave for these products. Therefore, these advertisements likely disturbs the well being of children and at the end both parents and children are equally affected .

On the other hand, advertisements which are not exaggerated and are relatable to actual product may not indulge children in buying them thus helping parents in providing things that are useful for their children in daily deeds. It has been proven by many researchers that eateries that are high in sugars and fats are advertised rigorously making children to eat them on regular basis putting more burden on parents at same time health of an individual is also obliterated. For these reasons , government should initiate respective directives to these advertising companies so that threshold is not reached.

In conclusion, proper advertisements maintains harmony in children , parents and in the market. I disagree that all advertisements are notorious but obscure about the extent of advertisements that are menace in the market. I agree with the fact that some advertisements are worrisome to the parents. So proper publishing and showcasing of advertisements should be obligatory.

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-Avoid informal vocabs

Overall-4.5/6.