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    Ayush

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    December 27, 2021 at 11:21 PM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing -7 (Outdoor Activities)

    Majority individuals believe that outdoor activities and sports do have a positive impact on children’s development than playing games on computer. This essay will illustrate both, the pros of outdoor activities and the impact of playing e-games on the child’s development followed by my personnel opinion.

    Sports and physical activities drive a release of endorphins which helps in alleviating stress thus making an individual feel enchanted all during the day. These activities should be added in a daily schedule from early childhood and the same should be mentored by the teachers and parents so that the kid can cultivate it as a hobby. It has been observed that the students who indulge themselves regularly in sports are much more active and even score better in examinations than the ones who do not impart their time in outdoor activities.

    This modern era of revolution, where technology has played a vital role, has impacted children to engage themselves in playing computer games thus falling in a trap of this addiction. Majority of these games are addictive and children spend most of their leisure time playing these games. This sitting job of playing games gets feed inside the subconscious mind and the child often tends to think the same each time which can further lead to neurological disorders. It has been reported that certain students of asian origin who have spent most of their time playing games have developed conditions like post dramatic stress syndrome, short term memory loss, etc.

    To conclude, I strongly believe that children should engage themselves in outdoor activities where they can physically workout and remain fit and healthy. Moreover, children should spent least time playing games on computers as those games are really addictive and generally students can fall in this trap.

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    Ayush

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    December 13, 2021 at 11:13 PM in reply to: Vocabulary Task

    From birth to death, politics play a vital role in an individual’s life especially in developing nations like India. There are numerous incidents seen in day to day life that corroborates the above statement. For instance, I do remember my classmate, though being honest, was reproached by the head teacher because he ambiguously replied to the son of a local minister, thus he was languished not to attend school for two months. This guy was persecuted because he belong to a middle class family and had taken action against the minister’s son.

    I strongly believe that politics should be removed, especially from the schools and colleges, where students should be grown in anti-diplomatic environment which will eventually bring a new perspective in thinking of a being. Moreover if people contemplate about this perspective they will underscore the overall meaning of life and their responsibility towards serving humanity. However, majority people adept in this skill but rather pretend to be naive and do not take any action.

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    Ayush

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    December 10, 2021 at 8:30 PM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing -9 (Advertising)

    Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives.
    Which viewpoint do you agree with?

    It is often said that advertisements acknowledge us about products that can lead to improvement in our lives, however majority individuals believe that these advertisements are a trap leading to buy things which are not required though. I strongly believe that most of the advertisements lure people to purchase things which are not even needed.

    Initially, the advertisement; whether on hoarding, flex or on social media like YouTube, Facebook or twitter, attracts a person to imagine about possessing that object highlighted. This person in his sub conscious mind forms an image of possessing that specific object, relates it emotionally and finally buys it. These purchases are usually done by most middle class people from their credit cards or some schemes which eventually put them on debt. For example, after viewing a melodramatic advertisement of some luxurious handbag, one feels as if it is made for her and she should owe it. This lady eventually buy this handbag and willingly put herself in an another debt. However, she already had plenty other handbags and has to pay her other mortgages from meagre salary she gets.

    Moreover, major e-commerce companies share their advertisements claiming people to shop on specific days and avail the best discounts and services ever. Seeing these type of promotions, people despite having sufficient, become a prey and buy things which were never needed. For example, In India, Amazon advertises a lot on its big billion days where it offers huge discount and people buy surplus thinking it is the best they can ever get in such a price. However, after buying that stuff they eventually realise that though the product was cheap but they never really wanted it.

    Therefore, this common practice of shopping maximum and purchasing things out of budget by falling in a trap of an advertisement should be ceased.

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