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    hardeep

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    August 6, 2021 at 6:24 AM in reply to: WRITING TASK 2 agree or disagree (too many choices)

    These days, Few people feel that we have plenty of options. I do largely agree with the statement and will justify it in following paragraphs of this essay.

    As a result of globalization, the world world has become one big market wherein anyone can purchase an item from anywhere in the world. This has also led to availability of large varieties of particular item or service that we intend to purchase. For example while buying a particular piece of apparel, one will get listing from many brands from around the world to choose from unlike in earlier times where it was limited to just local market.

    Moreover, evolution of internet has increased the capability to explore more options like undergoing a study online from any university around the world and not limiting to locally accessible one. On the contrary, some people still feel that its repetition of already available choices i.e. just quantitative increase and not qualitative, still the fact remains that we have more hug number of options nowadays which were not present in earlier times.

    In conclusion, Nowadays due to globalization and evolution of internet, the world has become one huge marketplace where buyers have many options to choose from and which were not possible in earlier times.

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    hardeep

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    July 29, 2021 at 7:28 PM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing (problem in many countries)

    In today’s world, in spite of having large number of sports facilities, inactive lifestyle is becoming more common. This essay will discuss major issues being created by sedentary lifestyle and will suggest relevant solutions.

    There are several health problems that are created by sedentary living however obesity and joint pain are most common. Many medical articles reveal that sitting for long hours and not doing any physical activity makes us overweight because body ceases to perform all fat burning activities. Additionally, as our body is handling extra weight, joint paint gets developed over a period of time. For example, it has been published in medical research paper (in USA) that more than 60 percent people performing only sitting jobs were obese out of which 80 percent had developed joint paint at sometime in their lifespan.

    Possible solutions are extremely simple and effective; they are indulging in physical activities and making lifestyle changes. People need to get themselves involved in physical activities like running, playing outdoor games, etc which will not only burn body fat but will also increase metabolism. Moreover few lifestyle changes needs to be adopted while performing office jobs like not sitting for long hours and walking in-between, using stairs and avoiding lift, etc. These life style changes were implemented in Google and after six months it was noticed that there was reduction of 10 percent in obese people.

    In conclusion, living a sedentary life in known to cause many health problems, Obesity and joint paint being most common, however simple changes in lifestyle and getting yourself involved in physical activity is the most effective way forward to avoid such health issues.

    Being overweight is a grave issue in lot of counties, more so in economically sound ones. This essay will suggest few remedial solutions to resolve above problem by working on its root cause.

    It’s a well known fact that sedentary lifestyle is making people obese because due to inactivity, our body is not able of burn sufficient calories, which later gets deposited inside as fat. This phenomenon has been noticed more in richer countries where people mostly own and use gadget to perform day to day activities like automatic lawn mower, vacuum cleaners, dishwashers, etc. Undoubtedly it’s increasing our comfort level but at the same time it’s also making us overweight. Since people living in richer countries are well off to afford such gadgets so, it has been noticed that percentage of obese people is comparatively higher in such countries.

    Talking about possible solutions, it’s obvious that changing lifestyle to increase physical activity is the only way out to deal with this problem whether we motivate and make people perform some exercise like walking, cycling, etc or we make it mandatory for all to indulge in some sports activity. It has been notices that in organizations where people are made to play outdoor game, better fitness levels have been achieved.

    To conclude, its a matter of fact that inactivity has lead to increase of obesity in many countries, majorly in richer counties. Possible solution is to change lifestyle and motivate people to indulge in physical activities.

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    hardeep

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    July 25, 2021 at 7:43 PM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing – 2 (Feeling of competition)

    People always argue between building a sense of competition in children and encouraging them to become more cooperative (helpful). This essay will evaluate pros and cons of both and come up with a decisive conclusion.

    In my opinion, children must be motivated to be cooperative rather than being competitive because helping others will ensure that others will also help them whenever required whereas being competitive will isolate them and others will not come forward for support. I am sure that everyone must have realized this in school, when we used share our study notes or sports equipment with other children they also used to do the same with us other the other hand if we refused to share even then they responded in similar manner by not sharing. The relief after getting much needed help is unmatchable and it makes us extremely happy.

    Additionally, Not everyone in this world is lucky enough to belong to economically rich family as many are still deprived of basic necessities like food, cloths, shelter, basic education, etc so by cooperating we can be helpful to others on the other hand by becoming competitive will be are becoming more selfish and greedy. We all must have heard about people who teach under privileged children for free, this act comes from being cooperating rather than being competitive because competitive people don’t do efforts to make others better.

    In conclusion, l would say that children should be to become cooperative rather than competitive because being cooperative makes us happy, a better human being and ensures getting help is difficult times whereas being competitive isolates us and makes us selfish and greedy.

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    hardeep

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    July 15, 2021 at 7:10 PM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing (using computers)

    Nowadays children are made to invest long hours in learning computers in their tender age, which is both beneficial as well as harmful for them. This essay will compare both sides of the opinion and provide a logical conclusion.

    The biggest disadvantage of doing this is that they are loosing out on their physical development because early age is most critical for all body developmental activities and in order to have good growth they need to play outdoor activities instead of sitting in front of computer screen for mush of their time which is especially harmful for their eyes.

    Second major demerit is behavioral, because they are spending most of the time on computers, they tend to interact less with others and end up becoming more arrogant and short tempered. They ted to avoid persons who lack computer knowledge such as grandparents. On the other hand if they had invested more time in conversing or playing with others they would have developed joyful nature and even made friends.

    Parents wants their children learn computers as early as possible because everything which is happening in today’s world involves computers and it will be better for them to get used to things at the earliest. Technology is also changing at a very fast pace, whatever is happening today becomes outdated within couple of years, by making children learn computers early parents are making sure that their child remain conversant with latest technology because future belongs to computers. Children at the age of five years have started doing coding and making applications.

    In conclusion, in would say that that although computers are must earn for children as they are driving the world today but it is more important to focus on their physical as well as behavioral development early in their life because this critical time will never come back in their life and also because its never too late to learn computers.

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