Faculty Abhinav
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Feedback:
Content us good but structure is not good.
There is only one line in the middle of 2 passages which is not the right way.
2,3 grammar errors, nothing major.
Just for the structure and flow of thoughts you will be losing 1.5 band.
Band Score: 3.5/6.0
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Feedback:
Structure is fine.
There are so many grammatical errors that need to be corrected. You will be losing approximately one band for only the grammatical errors.
Conclusion should be a little more elaborated, not a one liner.
Band Score: 4.0/6.0
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Feedback:
Introduction paragraph does not clarify your opinion explicitly.
To commence with and firstly, should not be used together.
First and second body paragraphs should have been kept together because they are elaborating from one side. Third body paragraph needs a little more explanation.
Band Score: 4.0/6.0
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Feedback:
Less use of cohesive devices,
Could use some more good words
Conclusion could be better
Band Score: 4.5/6.0
