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    siddanth

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    July 7, 2021 at 8:17 PM in reply to: Academic writing part 1 Ipshita 8pm 1

    The graph illustrates detailed information about the proportion of expenditure on the petrol of people from the UK and the USA among the three classes.

    Overall, it is evident that in the UK poor people spent the least amount of money on fuel & the richest spent the highest amount of their income on fuel. However, In the United States poorest section of society spent the huge proportion of their income on fuel, whereas the richest spent the least amount of their income on fuel. Moreover, In both the countries middle class people spent the intermediate amount of their income on fuel.

    In the US, they percentage of income spent on fuel by poor people increase from 4% to 5%. however there was downward trend after that . Furthermore for middle class section there was consistently downward trend observed with respect to money spent on fuel. however ,for the rich and affluent class there was rapid decline from 3.5 % to close to 2%.

    n the UK, there was a rapid increase in proportion of money spent on fuel by poor people. The percentage of income spent on fuel increased from around 0.5% to 2.5%.For the middle class people the trend rose steadily regarding money spent on fuel from around 2% to 4%.Also,for the richest section of the society the proportion of income spent on fuel moved at a steady pace initially, but it showed a drastic decline from around 3.5% to 2%.

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    siddanth

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    June 28, 2021 at 8:46 PM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing -7 (Outdoor Activities)

    For youngster growth, Few people argue that outdoor activities are more favourable than playing computer games. i fully agree with given statement ,and believe that for complete development of children outdoor activities play a pivotal role .

    To begin with, outdoor games are more beneficial to children’s health. They not only instill agility and endurance but also teach children to socialize and make friends. Thus, outdoor games help develop qualities like cooperation, team spirit, patience, and confidence. To illustrate when a child plays outdoors, he comes across a number of different situations like victory, failure, hope, and despair. Thus, the child learns to face such situations with emotional balance.

    Furthermore, outdoor games make children physically stronger. While playing outdoors, children get exposure to fresh air and sunlight. It helps burn the extra calories, boosts metabolism and strengthens their immune system.

    On the other hand, Children playing with the latest computer games have both benefits and drawbacks in playing with them. One of the disadvantages of continuous playing games on laptops or on tablets are it could have adverse effect on eyes due to UV rays generated from these high technology gadgets and there could be chances of other major illnesses like obesity and diabetes. Whereas, there are few positive aspects playing computer games like it can increase analytic thinking and logical reasoning in children when they indulge in puzzle games, mathematics games which are beneficial to children so one can have both learning and have fun while playing games.

    In conclusion, although some computer games can be educational and can have certain positive effects on children’s development, I believe that the negative impacts far outweigh any benefit, and that spending time outdoors is the key to a healthy development for children

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    siddanth

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    June 16, 2021 at 8:49 PM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing – 5 (Overpopulation)

    It is undeniable that overpopulation is a serious concern which can cause many environmental problems. Admitting the situation, I feel the way which an individual choose to live has a greater role in the crisis which environment faces than growing population

    To begin with i would like to state that increase in population directly leads to more natural resources being utilized For example, oil, natural gas and natural resources are being used up in an exponential way these days just to meet the increasing demands of a fast-growing population. Many developing countries are struggling to meet the needs of their exploding population, as evidenced by the exhaustion of these resources there.

    Overpopulation also leads to environmental pollution, as it generates an increasing amount of waste products. This happens in both domestic and industrial sectors. Improper treatment of plastic to irrational dumping of extremely toxic chemical wastes into the nature which are seen at present would worsen with the ever-increasing population. For eg: some big industries directly dump chemical toxic waste directly to the rivers which can really have serious health hazard on people who consume those water without any proper treatment and the suffer from dangerous disease

    However most important thing is attitude of person towards the consumption of natural resource and how he can act responsible <strong style=”font-family: inherit; font-size: inherit;”> by consuming fewer products and services and save the natural resources for the next generation which will reduce the intensity of this issue . <b style=”font-family: inherit; font-size: inherit;”>However, if individual becomes greedy and starts using resource without considering fellow citizens<b style=”font-family: inherit; font-size: inherit;”> and future problem then situation will deteriorate further and will make our future generation have very limited resource at there disposal .

    In summary, it is a fact that overpopulation is a key factor which causes several environmental problems. <strong style=”font-family: inherit; font-size: inherit;”>However, I feel how a person decides to live has a greater role in this crisis.<b style=”font-family: inherit; font-size: inherit;”>

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    siddanth

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    June 14, 2021 at 8:23 PM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing – 4 (Crimes)

    Crime is a serious challenge across the globe and all countries are trying to deal with this pressing issue . The fear among the innocent people has forced the authority to give stronger punishment to those who committed a crime. some people believe that giving longer prison sentence to prisoners is a right solution and others insist alternative ways will be more effective and I lay my thoughts alongside the alternative ways as well.

    To begin with, many people believe that offenders should be punished with long prison sentences because this methodology will create fear among the criminals and will discourage them to commit any crime in future. For example, in the UAE, the rapist and the murderer usually get lifetime prison sentences, resulting in making people think twice before committing any serious crime. Hence, imposing strict punishment deters people from committing heinous atrocities.

    However, I believe that alternative ways such as providing proper education facilities and employment can solve the issues far more effectively Sufficient education and job opportunities keep the masses occupied and away from commiting criminal activities

    In conclusion, longer prison terms certainly instill fear in the minds of potential criminals and discourage them from committing offences. However, eradicating the root cause of crime by providing education and employment opportunities is a far better option.

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