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  • Terej

    August 6, 2022 at 9:55 PM

    The given pie charts illustrate the proportion of expenses done by the Chinese on four different household needs such as food, clothing, medicine, and household goods between 1995 and 2011.

    To start with, in 1995, money spend on food is more than two third (68%), while, their spending on clothing was lesser than one-fifth (19%) in total. However, after 16 years expenses done on food and clothing declined slightly by 58% and 18% respectively.

    On the other hand, In 1995, household goods and tablets expenditure accounted for 9% and 4% independently as the least budget spent by Chinese, however, this trend changed in 2011 like goods expenses increased to 12%, and the drugs budget noticeably jumped to 11%.

    Overall, as pie charts clearly show, the Chinese spent half of the budget on food and clothing in both years, whereas, a small amount was spent on household goods and medicine.

    Mam, Please evaluate my above task.

    • Falak

      August 8, 2022 at 5:41 PM

      Chinese spent half of the budget on food (majority of their budget/ more than of their budget

      slightly by 58% (59%)

      word count should be at least 150 words

      sentence structure could be more effective.

      Keep writing !!


    September 11, 2022 at 12:42 PM

    The provided pie charts compare the percentages of household budget for necessities, namely food, clothing, medicine, and household goods in China during the years,1995 and 2011.

    Overall, it is evident that for both the years, the outlay on food and clothing shown a downward trend and the rest had an upward trend, yet the former remained as the highest of the whole budget share in both the given years. Medicine category, and homely goods, on the other hand, had some considerable increase as well.

    Over the giver 16-year period from 1995, food and clothing expense, though decreased, the most measurable household-expenditure was contributed by food items even after a reduction of 9% budget use from 68% of Chinese total home budget Similarly, the attires used 19% of household income in 1995, which then followed a drop by 1% 2011.

    In contrast to the aforementioned, the budget usage on household goods and medicine categories had spent 9% and 4%, respectively during the year 1995, and which then surged to 11% and 12%, accordingly by 2011.

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