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  • IELTS Essay Writing -9 (Advertising)

     Shilpa updated 1 week, 3 days ago 49 Members · 68 Posts
  • Jyoti

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    August 5, 2021 at 10:03 PM
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    Advertisement has been a part of this society since a long time in one way or the other And it has always managed to get the company its required customers and help the owners make most of their profits. There’s no doubt in the fact that these sparkly advertisement lures people into buying the products that they really do not need.

    Everybody watch these advertisements and they might purchase it without giving it a second thought. If I need some product I will definitely go to the market and will buy it myself. For example, I do not need an advertisement to buy the essentials or the groceries as they are the basic necessity which we really need. Contrary to this buying something like Rocket chair just because I saw the advertisement yesterday is fatuous.

    The biggest reason for getting so absorbed by these advertisement is the fact that most of them features our favourite celebrities or other influential people who deceptively projects the brand and its products in exceptionally gripping ways. The moment we see these elites using that product our neurons starts calculating that it must be useful and one imagines that it will give us the same result that is being claimed without thinking ‘Do I really need it though?’

    I used to be Very concerned about my hair even though I really have fine hair and never faced any major hairfall problems but watching those celebrities flaunt those chemically modified and camera enhanced shiny long hair I started having concerns for mine because I was comparing it to something that wasn’t real. I kept buying a barrage of these expensive well advertised products like oil, serums, shampoo and what not. It was only after spending a fortune that I realised they did nothing but damage my hair.

    Concluding my points I feel that companies should stop these unrealistic advertisements about products whose efficiency might be contentious. The procuring of unnecessary goods empties our pockets, leaves us frustrated, and taking away our chance to amass that money to buy something which would have been helpful. One must be meticulous and vigilant enough to inquire before spending into something that is off limits.

  • Manu

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    August 31, 2021 at 7:54 PM
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    It is argued that advertisements promotes the buying behavior which leads to excessive shopping of unwanted things on the other hand people believe that commercials provide them with necessary information which may lead to good quality of life. This essay agrees with statement that advertisements give us the information of the goods which help us in having better life.

    Commercials acts as a bridge between the company and customer. Companies launch different products to satisfy the need, want and desire of the consumer. Commercials take the message of the new product and deliver to the end user via different mediums. Hence, this helps them to take the wise decision with their money and choose the best product from the market. Especially in the modern time where technology changing in the blink of an eye. It has become an necessity. For example, Apple launches different series of I phone every year and have launch event to educate their customers about the new change and new product.

    Advertisements are also used by different organization to address the current social issues the society is facing. Even though they meticulously connect the message with the product. But the message has a strong impact on our thinking which help us in attaining a better quality of life. For example, there was an advertisement by Whistling Wood International on eve teasing showing different girls at different scenario’s facing the uncomfortable stares from male counter parts in public areas. With a very powerful song of “see yourself, the way you are looking at me”

    In conclusion, commercials provide the details of new products which may lead to a betterment of our lives by acting as a bridge between customer and manufacturer or by addressing a social cause.

  • hari

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    October 2, 2021 at 4:51 PM
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    Write about the following topic.
    Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives.

    Which viewpoint do you agree with?
    Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
    Some consumers opine that advertising entices them to purchase things that they don’t require while remaining convey that procuring new products is indispensable. The essay does convey how advertisements make us know about the products which improve our standard of life but do not mislead us to buy unnecessary things.

    On one hand, considering our busy lifestyle it is inevitable for everyone to rely on advertisements to buy things in order to lead a comfortable life. As a result, we must depend on advertisements so as to choose a particular product from a range of products. Consequently, saving our time and efforts. For instance: In the past, I had had sleepless nights due to mosquitos prevalent in my vicinity. As a consequence, I couldn’t concentrate on my work and personal life. Luckily, I came across an advertisement on Amazon about a retractable mosquito net and instantly ordered it which not only saved me from mosquito bites but was also convenient to use. Had I not known about the mosquito net then, through “Amazon’s advertisement” I wouldn’t have a sound sleep. Therefore, it is evident that advertisements would enhance our quality of life.

    On the other hand, there are a plethora of advertisements that coerce us to buy things that are optional. Generally, we tend to fall into the trap by a barrage of advertisements and end up buying dispensable things. For example: I get disrupted when my insatiable friends frequently replace their undamaged mobile phones owing to deceitful “Big sale” advertisements even if the mobiles have been bought recently. Indeed, it is a wasting of their money and time.

    In conclusion, while advertisements enhance comfort by marketing the reliable products it also has the nature to grip the consumers in buying optional things. Besides, it is the emotional decision that misguides us but not advertisements. Therefore, we need to meticulously choose the right product by taking a rational decision rather than an emotional one.

  • hari

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    October 2, 2021 at 4:55 PM
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    Write about the following topic.
    Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives.

    Which viewpoint do you agree with?
    Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

    Some consumers opine that advertising entices them to purchase things that they don’t require while remaining convey that procuring new products is indispensable. The essay does convey how advertisements reveal about the products which improve our standard of life but do not mislead us to buy unnecessary things.

    On one hand, considering our busy lifestyle it is inevitable for everyone to rely on advertising to buy things in order to live a comfortable life. As a result, we must depend on advertisement in order look for a range of products to save our time and efforts. For instance: In the past, I had had sleepless nights due to mosquitos prevalent in my vicinity. As a consequence, I couldn’t concentrate on my work and personal life. Luckily, I came across an advertisement on Amazon about a retractable mosquito net and instantly ordered it which not only saved me from mosquito bites but was also convenient to use. Had I not known about the mosquito net thanks to “Amazon’s advertisement” I wouldn’t have had sound sleep. Therefore, it is evident that advertisements would enhance our quality of life.

    On the other hand, there are a plethora of advertisements which force us to buy things that are optional. Generally, we tend to fall into the trap of a barrage of advertisements and end up buying dispensable things. For example: I get disrupted when my insatiable friends frequently replace their undamaged mobile phones owing to deceitful “Big sale” advertisements even if the mobiles have been bought recently. Indeed, it is a wasting of their money and time.

    In conclusion, while advertisements enhance comfort by marketing the reliable products it also has the nature to grip the consumers in buying optional things. Besides, it is our emotional decision that misguides us but not advertisements. Therefore, we need to meticulously choose the right product by taking a rational decision rather than an emotional one.

  • siddhu

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    October 2, 2021 at 6:15 PM
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    Evolution in technology has provided a new dimension in the field of online marketing and advertisements. One section of people opine that, this leads to distraction and inclination towards unnecessary shopping. However, other section believe that it creates more awareness over important products. I strongly agree with the former statement. Does online advertisements are really equipped with such important product information’s? This essay will discuss further on this context and will conclude with a concrete opinion.

    To Embark on, Firstly, Online domain has become an imperative platform for marketing. To be specific, majority of the product based industries attract their customers through online networks. Typically, most of the work domain functions on online based platforms, which is used as a tool for employers to accomplish assignments and other work related operations. Owing to this approach, online marketing implement strategies to attract and distract the users towards e-shopping. For instance, people browse for some information on the websites to get some information to modulate the codes and strings for their programming, during this activity, by default there will be a pops up of some products with some arbitrary discounts, this results in the curiosity in individual mind to get these exorbitant products on cheaper rates, which leads to the purchase of the product regardless of its importance.

    On the other hand, online information is not always reliable. The information provided on social platforms is ambiguous and cannot be trusted for many reasons. Although, i do agree some of the details available online has valid references yet, most of the product related information is just created to impress the consumers and moreover it confuses instead. There are many such instances, lets single out one such interesting aspect which would be the information on crypto coins. Most of the people invested on this believing on it statistical inferences and predictions, more over this information confined to online instead, which was very encouraging initially, however it came crashing down within no time leaving many individuals to lose heavily.

    From the aforesaid statements, in my opinion with the evolution of technology, many online platforms are basing this domain as a source to bolster their income which is burning the pockets and peace of mind of present day society, as it is impossible to survive as a technophobic and to surmount this, there is a necessity to place safety nets pertaining to propensity towards online infusion, otherwise this will go oblivion.

  • Janani

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    October 2, 2021 at 6:34 PM
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    Nowadays, ads have become merely a push to make buyers purchase unwanted things. While some argue that adverts are source of information about new products and discounts. I strongly believe that ads are motivating people to buy barrage of products without the necessity. This essay will support my opinion with relevant evidences.

    Admittedly, advertisements are highly useful for companies to promote or launch their products. Therefore, these ads will only emphasis the positive aspects but not the negative sides of it, which is a disadvantage for those who procure it. For example, a very famous fabric conditioner named “comfort” went off-limits after the projection of this product by an well-established actress. Therefore, people are enticed to buy this product without any demur. Earlier days, all the wet clothes are sun dried to enhance freshness, remove odor and to kill the bacteria. Thus, by the advent of such products, people have become accustomed to trivial things and also mislead with the importance of traditional practices.

    In addition to the above point, products with lure offers is also considered as one of the important rationale for buying less useful items. For instance, if a product has been showcased with attractive offers like buy one, get one free or any gift items, then obviously many viewers will prefer to buy them with the absence of contemplation. As a result, consumers will buy this product from market without the actual need for the secondary item.

    Finally, I would conclude, that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need.

  • Ashi

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    October 2, 2021 at 8:02 PM
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    With the advent of technology one industry that has a real impact on our lives is advertisements. Advertisements do encourage us to use effective products but at the same time it does not turns out to be that productive. I agree with the point that we tend to buy unnecessary products which we actually do not need because of these advertising markets.

    Advertising agency in the recent years have experienced a great boon because many people are now dependent on these marketing strategies to buy a product. It is abysmal that because of advertisements , many people now a days do not prefer to go outside and buy the things instead by analyzing the product quality instead they become susceptible to watch the advertisements and later order the product online. For instance , many people working in stores face a huge amount of violence from their customers because something that has been told to people on TVs, or on other mediums do not in real match with the customer’s expectations.

    Considering the fact that people now are swamped with excess work they do not get time to actually go to specific store and inquire about the product as a result of which they sometimes tend to land up in peculiar condition. It is extremely pragmatic for people now that they should not remain in dubious situation in case of buying a certain product by just following advertisements , rather they should further investigate on the quality and value which they have to owe for the particular item by either going to different stores and gathering knowledge about past experience of people having similar kind of product.

    In conclusion we can say that while advertisements do help the people to focus on new trending products but usually it does not in particular satisfy the needs of people in terms of cost effectiveness and unnecessary wastage in buying the products that we actually do not need.Therefore, proper judgement in case of buying any product should do not entirely depends on advertisements.

  • Ashi

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    October 2, 2021 at 8:10 PM
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    With the advent of technology one industry that has a real impact on our lives is advertisement. Advertisements do encourage us to use effective products but at the same time it does not turns out to be that productive. I agree with the point that we tend to buy unnecessary products which we actually do not need because of these advertising markets.

    Advertising agency in the recent years have experienced a great boon because many people are now dependent on these marketing strategies to buy a product. It is abysmal that because of advertisements , many people now a days do not prefer to go outside and buy the things instead by analyzing the product quality instead they become susceptible to watch the advertisements and later order the product online. For instance , many people working in stores face a huge amount of violence from their customers because something that has been told to people on TVs, or on other mediums do not in real match with the customer’s expectations.

    Considering the fact that people now are swamped with excess work they do not get time to actually go to specific store and inquire about the product as a result of which they sometimes tend to land up in peculiar condition. It is extremely pragmatic for people now that they should not remain in dubious situation in case of buying a certain product by just following advertisements , rather they should further investigate on the quality and value which they have to owe for the particular item by either going to different stores and gathering knowledge about past experience of people having similar kind of product.

    In conclusion we can say that while advertisements do help the people to focus on new trending products but usually it does not in particular satisfy the needs of people in terms of cost effectiveness and unnecessary wastage in buying the products that we actually do not need.Therefore, proper judgement in case of buying any product should do not entirely depends on advertisements.

  • Yankita

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    October 5, 2021 at 6:09 PM
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    Advertisements have become an essential part of the social media culture these days. Celebrities to social media influencers, everybody is trying to promote one brand or the other. Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives.

    Sometimes, these advertisements are over the top and encourage people to buy stuff that is not essential. For example, some famous cricketers promote “black water” these days, which they say is healthier. But this is a hoax. As tempting as it may seem, it’s not everybody’s cup of tea to buy such expensive products. And when people are not able to purchase these products, all they have is guilt and remorse.

    I agree that advertisements tend to improve our lives, but somehow, it raises people’s societal expectations. If you tend to follow some advertisements and not purchase the products promoted, you might feel left out or not going well with the trend. Fear of missing out is real in this case. I would also like to point out some misleading advertisements pushing our teenagers towards anxiety and other body image disorders. A good illustration of this is the increased purchase of fairness creams. Plus, the fact that some famous faces endorse them makes it more unfortunate. These fancy-looking items play no role in an ordinary person’s life and tend to make it more miserable.

    Taking everything into consideration, advertisements these days push people to buy unwanted things instead of sorting people’s lives.
    Therefore as luring the advertisements be, we have to be meticulous enough before procuring any kind of products.

  • Sonali

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    November 9, 2021 at 10:01 PM
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    Usefulness of advertising has been questioned by many. Some believe that advertisements are a way to attract people into buying unnecessary products. However, I think advertisements educates a person about the product and it’s functions.

    On one hand, people argue that advertisements are luring people into buying products that are not necessary to them.Nowadays, the sole purpose of advertisements is to gain a person’s attention rather than telling the real facts about the product. A lot of ads are deceiving customers by depicting false information about the product and proving it helpful for the public.
    For example, Many India’s were deceived by advertisements from a company broadcasted on popular news channels which promised to produce inexpensive phones and demanded prebooking.

    On the contrary, I believe that advertising is convenient way to showcase a product’s features and functionalities.Advertisements on various social media platform makes it easier to compare features and prices of similar products. Although, advertisements these days are hard to believe, they are nonetheless necessary.It is a person’s responsibility to purchase a product with careful consideration. For example, nowadays Amazon has an option to compare prices, screen size, battery power etc of smart phones which makes it easier for a potential buyer to make decisions smartly and in less time.

    To conclude, advertisements are necessary for a buyer to know about product features, functionalities and prices. Although, it is a person’s responsibility to be mindful and make a right decision whether or buy the product or not according to his or her needs.

    • Abhinav

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      November 16, 2021 at 8:50 PM
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      Grammatical accuracy is fine, however Range is limited.

      This essay actually contradicts your own opinion. In the introduction you mentioned that you are taking one side however in the second body paragraph you talked about the other opinion. In these kinds of essays stick to one side of the opinion otherwise you will be marked down in coherence.

      Band Score : 4.0/6.0

  • Shadab

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    November 9, 2021 at 10:07 PM
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    A lot of people have the opinion that some people buy new things after they see the advertisement even they do not have any requirement for such product This essay will agree that We encourage by advertisement to buy new products even it is not useful.

    First of all, in today’s world, we are regularly using the internet in our home as well as the office, and we saw so many advertisements on a regular basis. Once you check out any new product they keep sending you the reminder as an advertisement on your social pages till you do not buy it. for instance one of my friend who works with an international company have so many watches and he bought all these after watching the advertisement and he never wear maximum of them.

    On the other hand, people buy a lot of things which is cheap or available in the sale, While visiting the market or malls with the family for any other reason like watching movie or Dinner, Still, they buy some clothes or other products because it is available at a discount, later on, they realise that they actually not have any requirement for the purchased product. for example, whenever I go out with my wife she purchases many things without any planning, last week she bought an LCD because it was available at a 50% discount although it is still packed because we already have two.

    In Conclusion, Advertisement has a big role in our life for buying the things which are not useful or require in our life we buy the things because we saw them everywhere like on TV, Internet and in the market.

    • Abhinav

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      November 16, 2021 at 8:55 PM
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      We are encouraged by advertisement..

      We see so many advertisements…

      One of my friends who works with…

      He never wears most of them…

      People why a lot of things which are cheap..

      Actually do not have any requirement for the purchased product….

      We see them everywhere like on TV…

      Grammatical accuracy needs to be improved. You’re making errors in tenses and verb forms along with that subject verb agreement is also not good.

      You can work with more good vocabulary as well as you need to include a few more different types of sentences to increase the range of your sentences.

      Band Score: 3.0/6.0

  • Mithusha

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    November 9, 2021 at 10:10 PM
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    Certain populations claim that adverts persuade in buying objects which are not essential while the rest of them believe commercials may update and help create a better lifestyle. I strongly incline towards the idea of a better tomorrow with modern products, but this essay will discuss both views in detail.

    First and foremost, it is inevitable to say that advertisements play a vital role in our daily roles, as they bring a wide range of options, however, they have plenty of detrimental effects such as deceptive websites, luring bank loan calls and disruptive mails, one needs to be meticulous. For instance, one of my close friends recently made a huge transaction in exchange for Bitcoins with an online trader which turned out to be a scam and as a consequence, he was bankrupt, and on top of that, he had to face a government lawsuit.

    On the other hand, there are a plethora of examples on the later viewpoint where ads are a source of awareness on new products and their benefits since they have a better path in the community by making life easier. To illustrate, Covid-19 is a worldwide battle and various modes of campaigns are running around the globe in intervals of movies, programs, and network hello tunes, especially to raise awareness in every corner.

    To summarize, as per the above statements, I agree with the latter statement, and it is needless to say that adverts are one of the sources for grooming and polishing our daily routines. It provides the basic information that is needed so that the customer can research more before buying the product. This caters to the need of the buyer as well as a sense of satisfaction in buying good quality goods.

    • Abhinav

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      November 16, 2021 at 8:58 PM
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      Excellent piece of writing Mithusha

      Good use of vocabulary and sufficient complexity in the sentences. Range is also excellent.

      It provides the basic information that is needed…(You earlier mentioned Adverts -in plural….should have used ‘they’)…

      Band Score: 5.0/6.0

  • Ashwani

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    As per certain intellectuals, television and print commercials culminate into mindless splurging in plethora of goods which are not at all required practically while others are vocal about the transformational and positive impact these advertisement leave on the society in general. This essay strongly agrees with the statement that advertisements improve the standard of living of mankind considerably as people are able to take informed decisions.

    Firstly, advertising is the fastest way to communicate the benefits and advantages of various brands and new products to the end consumer. Commercials launched in omnichannel platforms such as television, print, social media platforms like Facebook, Twitter etc. can penetrate humongous population spread across the world in no time with a greater outreach. These fancy advertisements strike a chord with potential customers and leave a footprint on their hearts, thus entice them to experience these products and services at least once. Once these products are accepted well by consumers they further endorse these products to their kith and kin, hence the popularity of such products increase exponentially. For an example, the consumers tend to buy new electronic gadgets such as mobiles and headphones of popular brands which has strong media coverage of their new product launches.

    Additionally, these commercials comes with numerous discounts and offers which utalise economy of scale to pass the benefit to end customers. Since, media coverage give them opportunity to secure bulk orders from the different masses of the world. It enables such big enterprises to harness and leverage such media campaigns and build efficiencies in their entire supply chain which eventually benefits the buyers. For instance, leading mobile phone makers are selling millions of their newly launched mobile phones by portraying their bells and whistles coupled with aggressive campaigning and irresistible offers which are hard to ignore.

    To conclude this essay, it is firmly agreed that the advertisements not only give opportunity to educate and experience varied product and services but also pass the benefit of mass selling to end consumers which is always a financially wise decision and a win-win situation for both consumers and corporate houses.

  • Divya C.

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    November 25, 2021 at 8:39 AM
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    Advertisements are considered as an excellent means of communication between the sellers and buyers considering that companies can project their products and services to the customers off-limits. Not only the companies but also different organizations and even government can make the public well aware of their services to the poeple and most importantly can convey important and essential information’s to a great many people in a short time.

    There are various platforms through which advertisements can be presented which include television, newspapers ,social media pamphlets, banners and even mouth publicity serves the purpose. For example, recently during this global pandemic era of Covid 19 we have seen a large number of advertisements from the Government and pharmaceutical companies regarding the need of mass immunization and they have projected them so well that it has reached eve n the most remote regions of the world. As a result of which a large number of populace have been taking vaccination against Covid 19 till date.<font color=”rgba(0, 0, 0, 0)” face=”inherit”> Since this world has become a hub of online marketing there are great many opportunities for the customers to buy the product online and in addition they can try them and even return if the product did not meet the customers expectations. All thanks to </font>advertisements,<font color=”rgba(0, 0, 0, 0)” face=”inherit”> as it is the primary mode of conveying this </font><font color=”#ba0000″>information</font><font color=”rgba(0, 0, 0, 0)” face=”inherit”> about the products on the online sale.</font>

    On the other hand advertisements can be deceptive too since they can lure millions of people, therefore it has to be presented meticulously. Undoubtedly many have lost their money due to the fraudulent activities during online purchases. Also hundreds and thousands have lost their lives due due huge financial loses since ther were attracted to the gripping advertisements of the gaming companies. Now a days many have been buying unnecessary things too after seeing these ads of the companies.

    To conclude, in my opinion there are pros and cons for advertisements since they influence the minds of people in different ways. Even though they can be useful, obviously they can be harmful too. So we must be vigilant every time when we buy products or call for services.

  • Joseph Timothy

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    November 25, 2021 at 4:06 PM
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    Advertising is basically a type of marketing to market a product. When a new product is introduced to the market advertising is one of the key strategy to improve sales of that product. There are many types of marketing in which advertising is common one. Advertisements where so needed back in old days which needed them to find a way to advertise to everyone. Which resulted in invention of satellite television. Crux of satellite television is to telecast entertainment shows or movies in between advertisements. Later, this got evolved and even online entertainment sites or social media advertise in between videos or while scrolling through their page.

    There are many controversies on advertisements, whereas some say that advertisement encourages people to buy things that they really do not need. For instance, if a person browsed for a sneaker to know its price which he had seen his friend wearing those sneakers on their last meet. Later, when he surfs through the internet amidst of social media and websites. Sneaker or specific product based advertisements is shown over his blue screen. As this advertisement is often projected on to that person obliviously he would tend to purchase the product even though he had no prior idea to buy them. In precise, advertisement as a ability to market a product to people even though its not needed to them by constantly showing them the product and creating interest in it.

    Many new types of product are introduced often in this fast evolving world. In matter of time, due to this pandemic we have evolved from normal life to new normal so called virtual life. Certain collateral transition like this would open a vivid market of new products. At this time, to reach the new products to customers we need a powerful mode of marketing such as advertisement. Each and everyone person will have is own individual favorite taste or style over his product or thing he needs. So advertisements are made in generic way to cover different group or mindsets of people. Advertisements are an essential part in world of marketing and sales.

    Advertisements may or may not encourage one to buy a product. It all depends on oneself to purchase the product. As the world is developing people need to be vigilant and not carried away by business tricks. Hence, people should purchase things which they need or interested in.

  • Rutul Patel

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    In this contemporary world, advertisement has a major effect on buying habits of consumers. It is often considered that enticing advertisement leads to unnecessary purchase of goods, while some believe that advert guide to buying the best product from vast ranges. Before I assert my decision this essay discuss both viewpoints in detail.

    In this digital era, gripping advertisements encourage insatiable people to procure unwanted things. A barrage of an advertisement on various digital platforms often misguides to buy unnecessary things. To illustrate, a recent article from a marketing magazine present a case study, where the sales of product triple-fold after various advertisement campaign at sports events in the Asia region. The company hires a leading researcher to design the advert that impacts the subconscious, thereby hampering purchasing decisions. Various business strategies like discounts, buy 1 get 1 often perplexed one’s decision and turn into the procurement of unwanted things.

    On the other hand, advertisement has a plethora of benefits and provides vital information regarding the product. An enormous amount of products introduces in the market every single day, and it is impossible for one to have relevant information regarding the products, where this advert formed a solid base to promote the product. For example, advertisements of subsidies on solar panels from the government on various advertisement platforms like TV, Radio, and Newspaper alter the purchasing trend, thereby many people get benefitted. Advertisements allow consumers to make informed decisions, hence improving their lifestyle.

    From the above, I strongly agree with the latter statement that advertisement add quality to life by taking meticulous & informed decision.

  • Shilpa

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    November 26, 2021 at 7:01 AM
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    In General , this fast paced modern world gets the attention of consumers through adverts and via that corporates gain the attention through millions worth promotion and profits , mainly all these lead to advertisements, furthermore common men gets lured in by the tactics and in result we purchase a lot of goods we might not be needed or useful for ourselves. These quite unconventional ways of multinational companies make us believe and trust their products ,without analyzing as for the consequences we tend to get to become the proud owners of unwanted products or installment plans .

    Firstly , the products or services which we bought might not be through traditional selling methods nowadays it’s quite risky to do shopping from the market or street shop due to that we depend on the new age modern technique of online shopping or ECommerce, we think we save money and time, apparently that’s not the case, while we go through the products which we need we might stumble upon some other products as well and as a result we buy them due to our insatiable tendencies. For example, while going through the app we might buy a handbag online and after some surfing we realize the same bag and there’s other apparels in combo offer ,and we buy them without realizing the real need.

    Secondly, these promotions and services take a U turn when they are expensive we might get into the trouble of installments or debts, which was avoidable but due to the greed we got lured in and in addition to that ,we lose money and clarity. People tend to take up a lot of credits with credit cards which will only become burdensome for us,For ex: celebrity promotions on apps and services which lure their fan following and by thus we get the products attention and we buy them eventually.

    So in conclusion ,my stand is that we need to analyze and segregate the needs and avail these services or goods, rather jump on the corporate schemes and fall for those advertisements or promotions, by restricting false informations would give the consumers some clarity on what the products are and it’s specifications and whether it is useful or not.

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