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  • PARAPHRASING QUESTION 2:

    Posted by Unknown Member on July 28, 2021 at 11:26 AM

    The growing number of overweight people is putting a strain on the health care system in an effort to deal with the health issues involved. Some people think that the best way to deal with this problem is to introduce more physical education lessons in the school curriculum.

    Unknown Member replied 2 years, 12 months ago 10 Members · 24 Replies
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  • Upneet saini

    Guest
    July 28, 2021 at 1:06 PM

    In an order to manage with the health problems, the health management have a burden due to the increasing count of obesity in people.

    • Unknown Member

      Deleted User
      July 28, 2021 at 3:00 PM

      In an order- In order

      manage with- manage

      management has- management faces

      Some people think that- paraphrase this too

  • Unknown Member

    Deleted User
    July 28, 2021 at 3:34 PM

    The rising number of obese people is making it difficult for the smooth functioning of the health care system due to the increase in health-related problems. Some people believe a great way to reduce these health issues would be to add more physical education classes in the school syllabus.

    • Unknown Member

      Deleted User
      July 29, 2021 at 2:15 PM

      the increase- an increase

      believe- believe that

      syllabus- curriculum- it’s not entirely incorrect but the curriculum is an umbrella term from which syllabus is derived so don’t paraphrase curriculum

  • Unknown Member

    Deleted User
    August 1, 2021 at 2:24 AM

    The increase in the number of obese people, is putting pressure on health care system in an attempt to tackle with the health issues involved. Introducing more physical education in the school curriculum, is believed to be the best possible way to fight with this issue.

    • Unknown Member

      Deleted User
      August 2, 2021 at 4:15 PM

      On health care- on the health care

      education- education classes

      fight- tackle

      Rest is correct. Keep writing!

  • Unknown Member

    Deleted User
    August 3, 2021 at 2:03 PM

    There is a pressure situation in medical field to resolve the health ailments for the people who are obese and are rising in their count on day by day. Several folks believe that the ultimate strategy to overcome this cumbersome issue is to implement the physical exercises in their academic curriculum.

    • Unknown Member

      Deleted User
      August 4, 2021 at 8:09 AM

      in medical field- on the health care system

      resolve- deal

      for- of

      on day by day- daily

      folks- people

      is to implement- is by implementing

      physical exercises- physical and health education

  • Unknown Member

    Deleted User
    August 16, 2021 at 2:15 PM

    1. An increased number of obese people is putting a pressure on the health care system in an effort to handle health related issues. Some people feel that introducing more physical education subjects in the school curriculum is the best approach to address this concern.

    2. An increased number of obese people is putting a pressure on the health care system in an effort to handle health related issues. Introducing more physical education subjects in the school curriculum is considered by some people as the best approach to address this concern.

    • Unknown Member

      Deleted User
      August 16, 2021 at 2:23 PM

      please choose one out of these two and post it

      • Unknown Member

        Deleted User
        August 16, 2021 at 2:35 PM

        Please consider 2nd response for evaluation.

  • Unknown Member

    Deleted User
    August 16, 2021 at 2:49 PM

    An increased number of obese people is putting a pressure on the health care system in an effort to handle health related issues. Introducing more physical education subjects in the school curriculum is considered by some people as the best approach to address this concern.

    • Unknown Member

      Deleted User
      August 17, 2021 at 9:18 AM

      Introducing- Introduction of

      more- not required

  • Unknown Member

    Deleted User
    August 30, 2021 at 8:57 AM

    The increasing number of obese people making health care system tense, to cure there health issues. A section of believe that, physical education in school curriculum may lead to come out of this problem.

    • Unknown Member

      Deleted User
      August 31, 2021 at 9:36 AM

      Rewrite it more clearly.

      • Unknown Member

        Deleted User
        September 1, 2021 at 9:35 AM

        The increasing number of obese people making the health care system tense to cure their health issues. A section of people believes that physical education in the school curriculum may lead to overcome this problem.

        • Unknown Member

          Deleted User
          September 2, 2021 at 8:52 AM

          making- are making

          tense- strained

          Do not paraphrase some to a section of people as both have a different meaning. Correct it in other questions too.

  • Unknown Member

    Deleted User
    September 9, 2021 at 4:07 PM

    Answer #1

    In an effort to deal with the medical issues related to an increasing number of out-sized people, our health care system is under pressure . As per some people, the efficient way to handle this crisis is by broaching more physical education lectures in the school curriculum.

    • Unknown Member

      Deleted User
      September 10, 2021 at 9:41 AM

      outsized- overweight

  • Unknown Member

    Deleted User
    September 9, 2021 at 4:10 PM

    Answer #2



    Our Medical infrastructure is bearing the brunt of ever increasing number of obese people, in order to be on guard for their health issues. A few People suggests introducing a substantial number of physical training lessons in the academic curriculum, to handle this issue.

    • Unknown Member

      Deleted User
      September 10, 2021 at 9:42 AM

      Medical infrastructure: health care system

      People- people

      handle- resolve

  • Unknown Member

    Deleted User
    September 16, 2021 at 11:39 AM

    The obesity issue is continuously increasing and putting pressure on the heath care system to cope up with all the issues related to health involved. A few people believe the physical education should be given more priority in the school’s curriculum.

    • Unknown Member

      Deleted User
      September 21, 2021 at 9:14 AM

      A few- some

  • Unknown Member

    Deleted User
    October 18, 2021 at 12:43 AM

    The rise of obesity in people forces the health care system to face numerous health issues associated with overweight. People believe that introducing physical education in school curriculum will help to solve this problems.

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