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Posted by Anureet on July 28, 2021 at 11:26 AMThe growing number of overweight people is putting a strain on the health care system in an effort to deal with the health issues involved. Some people think that the best way to deal with this problem is to introduce more physical education lessons in the school curriculum.
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Upneet saini
GuestJuly 28, 2021 at 1:06 PMIn an order to manage with the health problems, the health management have a burden due to the increasing count of obesity in people.
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In an order- In order
manage with- manage
management has- management faces
Some people think that- paraphrase this too
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The rising number of obese people is making it difficult for the smooth functioning of the health care system due to the increase in health-related problems. Some people believe a great way to reduce these health issues would be to add more physical education classes in the school syllabus.
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the increase- an increase
believe- believe that
syllabus- curriculum- it’s not entirely incorrect but the curriculum is an umbrella term from which syllabus is derived so don’t paraphrase curriculum
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The increase in the number of obese people, is putting pressure on health care system in an attempt to tackle with the health issues involved. Introducing more physical education in the school curriculum, is believed to be the best possible way to fight with this issue.
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On health care- on the health care
education- education classes
fight- tackle
Rest is correct. Keep writing!
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There is a pressure situation in medical field to resolve the health ailments for the people who are obese and are rising in their count on day by day. Several folks believe that the ultimate strategy to overcome this cumbersome issue is to implement the physical exercises in their academic curriculum.
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in medical field- on the health care system
resolve- deal
for- of
on day by day- daily
folks- people
is to implement- is by implementing
physical exercises- physical and health education
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1. An increased number of obese people is putting a pressure on the health care system in an effort to handle health related issues. Some people feel that introducing more physical education subjects in the school curriculum is the best approach to address this concern.
2. An increased number of obese people is putting a pressure on the health care system in an effort to handle health related issues. Introducing more physical education subjects in the school curriculum is considered by some people as the best approach to address this concern.
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please choose one out of these two and post it
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Please consider 2nd response for evaluation.
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An increased number of obese people is putting a pressure on the health care system in an effort to handle health related issues. Introducing more physical education subjects in the school curriculum is considered by some people as the best approach to address this concern.
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Introducing- Introduction of
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The increasing number of obese people making health care system tense, to cure there health issues. A section of believe that, physical education in school curriculum may lead to come out of this problem.
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Rewrite it more clearly.
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The increasing number of obese people making the health care system tense to cure their health issues. A section of people believes that physical education in the school curriculum may lead to overcome this problem.
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making- are making
tense- strained
Do not paraphrase some to a section of people as both have a different meaning. Correct it in other questions too.
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Answer #1
In an effort to deal with the medical issues related to an increasing number of out-sized people, our health care system is under pressure . As per some people, the efficient way to handle this crisis is by broaching more physical education lectures in the school curriculum.
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outsized- overweight
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Answer #2
Our Medical infrastructure is bearing the brunt of ever increasing number of obese people, in order to be on guard for their health issues. A few People suggests introducing a substantial number of physical training lessons in the academic curriculum, to handle this issue.
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Medical infrastructure: health care system
People- people
handle- resolve
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The obesity issue is continuously increasing and putting pressure on the heath care system to cope up with all the issues related to health involved. A few people believe the physical education should be given more priority in the school’s curriculum.
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The rise of obesity in people forces the health care system to face numerous health issues associated with overweight. People believe that introducing physical education in school curriculum will help to solve this problems.