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  • Task 2 (discuss both views)- Protecting environment

     hari updated 1 week, 1 day ago 6 Members · 10 Posts
  • Falak

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    November 8, 2021 at 12:23 AM
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    Some people say that protecting the environment is the government’s responsibility. Other believe that every individual should be responsible for it.

    Discuss both views and give your opinion.

  • Manju

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    November 8, 2021 at 3:16 PM
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  • Jitendra

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    November 9, 2021 at 12:37 PM
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    It is argued by some that it is the government’s responsibility to save the environment. however, other people say that it is responsible for individuals as well. In my opinion, protecting the environment is the responsibility of both the government and every individual. This essay will discuss both views in the following paragraphs.

    Government should make strict regulations for the industries which produce more harmful gases. The reason is those gases which are released from different factories might be detrimental for human health. For example, one research was conducted in Pakistan clearly showed that people who reside near to the chemical industries 60 percentage more likely to get several diseases. Therefore, the government should make such policy so that such type of factories are established far away from the residential area with new technology which releases less gas.

    Every individual should be responsible for saving the environment and it can be done by using less fossil fuel. That is to say, people should start using public transport more often instead of taking car even for short distances. By this way they can help to release less carbon footprint which is really detrimental for the environment. For instance, In Japan, bicycles are mandatory to use 2 days everyweek for every individual. As a result, pollution is decreased tremendously.

    • Falak

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      November 10, 2021 at 10:58 AM
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      Feedback : Make use of transition words to establish logical sequence throughout the paragraph.

      Try to use punctuations for better understanding

      Topic sentences of each body paragraph could have been more effective

      other people say that it is responsible for individuals as well (individuals are responsible as well)

      Band : 2.5/6

      Keep practicing!!

  • Jitendra

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    November 9, 2021 at 12:49 PM
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    In conclusion, in my opinion, both government and public should work together to save the environment by making stringent policy and using less fossils fuel. This will definitely help to protect the environment.

  • Arka

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    November 9, 2021 at 9:09 PM
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    Human intervention is certainly degrading the enviornment. Some people feel that the government bodies should be responsible to save our enviornment while others feel that people individually must take the responsibility of protecting it. In this essay both sides of the argument will be discussed including my opinion to why it is important for both to protect the enviornment.

    On one hand it is believed that only way to protect our nature is with the help of the government. Untill and unless some strict laws are made by the authority humans are going to destroy the enviornment. First of all, a rule has to be made for the industries to not dump the waste directly into the water bodies and polluting gases in the open air. Secondly travelling by various non polluting vehicle must be encouraged by the government. For example , people must be awared about the various electric vehicles as this would affect the nature way less when compared to traditional vehicles. But will it be enough if the authority makes these laws? Let’s find out in the next passage.

    On the other hand some feel that if people individually do not understand the significance of protecting our enviornment nothing can be done. Humans must realise that throwing various wastes especially plastics hamper our ecosystem immensely. For travelling close by instead of using our cars and bikes walking or cycling must be preffered.For instance, In Canada most of the families have a car or a bike but when they go to work they go by either a cycle or by walking which decreases the pollution caused. Also,people must try to plant as many trees as they can as this will be extremely useful for the ecosystem.

    In conclusion, I feel that neither Government nor people individually alone can protect the enviornment rather together with Strict government laws and self realisation among people will be much more useful to save the ecosystem.

    Hello @falak Ma’am. Please do give your valuable feedback

    • Falak

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      November 11, 2021 at 8:47 AM
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      On one hand(,)

      Untill (Until) and unless some strict laws are made by the authority (,)humans are going to destroy the enviornment (environment)

      Secondly (,) travelling by various non polluting vehicle(s)

      Let’s find out in the next passage.(too casual); rather you can go for (This notion is yet to be considered under certain conditions)

      Use punctuations to make writing more effective.

      Otherwise, well -written and supported with examples. Keep writing!

      Band: 3.5/6

  • Rekha

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    November 11, 2021 at 8:16 AM
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    Many people debate on whether the government bodies or an individual be withholding the responsibility to protect nature. I strongly believe that every individual in society should be respectful and preserve the resources in order to protect the nature as government solely cannot implement the change.

    The administration should be responsible to pass the rules to safeguard the nature habitat. Government leaders should allow citizens to enroll in the schemes to plant 10,000 trees per year. For example, in 2006, in the New Zealand survey, they have implemented a similar program to reduce pollution and protect the ecosystem and within 2 years of continuous effort, they have seen a 10% of reduction of air pollution in their environment. In addition to that, the ministry of environmental sciences and pollution control board by enforcing all the vehicles to pass the pollution control check every year that checks the emission of carbon monoxide gas emission from automobiles.

    Every individual in society owes to mother nature by being responsible for the usage of natural resources. There are various methods to support the government in protecting the atmosphere by not cutting down trees for personal and commercial usages and planting trees in their home and community surroundings. Protection of the environment cannot be implemented solely by the rulers there is also equal responsibility on every person. Everyone has to follow the necessary pollution checks as enforced by the government parties and play their responsible part to the society.

    To conclude, I believe every individual has to support government administration to safeguard nature and also play the responsible citizen role in order to protect their surroundings.

    @falak – Please review

    • Falak

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      November 12, 2021 at 8:51 AM
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      Feedback : Inculcate the usage of cohesive devices. Example in body paragraph 2 , would be appreciated.

      nature habitat (natural habitat)

      Band : 4/6

      Keep writing!!

  • hari

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    November 27, 2021 at 3:39 PM
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    The environment has been deteriorating due to the negligence of mankind. While some argue that the onus lies on government, others believe that it can be only protected when each individual feels it as a moral responsibility. This essay will argue both views in depth and finally share the logical opinion.

    On one hand, Government has the obligation to protect the environment since it has specific departments allocated to safeguard various realms of the environment. A good illustration of this is: Municipal department has the right to demolish buildings if the buildings were to be constructed by encroaching ponds and forestry. However, if the government abandons their moral duty, the common people have a lesser role to play to safeguard the environment. Therefore, the government should ensure strict implementation of guidelines in place.

    On the other hand, even if the government were to take a plethora of measures to protect nature, it cannot be maintained in the long run to the negligence of human activities. For instance, despite having waste garbage bins in the vicinity of restaurants, hardly do people throw refuse in them. As a result, the waste goes into the landfill and has detrimental effects for generations to come. Thus, the prevention of destructive measures by every individual is the first step to saving our mother nature.

    Taking both views into consideration, although it is the governments’ duty to protect mother nature, protecting the environment can only be achieved when each individual can act diligently. Therefore, the initiation from the public would only be a preferred alternative.

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