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    Akhil

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    September 3, 2021 at 12:47 PM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing (how to survive financially)

    Nowadays schools are providing best knowledge for their students. Even though they acknowledge their children with a good education some people say that today’s schools should also include a subject about how to survive financially in this present world, I completely disagree with this statement.

    Though it is difficult to justify whether to teach financial survival for students but schools automatically teaches this topic without any subject knowledge. School is a place where children comes with different background and different mindsets. Subject like mathematics will teach how to be calculative and topic like profit and loss will bring the knowledge to think before spending a money. For Example , if a student after his graduation wants to run a business then he can estimate how much money he needs and how profits and losses will be there with the help of simple mathematics.

    Today’s school have already introduced a subject called Managerial Economics and Financial Analysis which is more than enough for any student. Moreover, it teaches the ethical values of surviving the world and also explains the economical statistics in the world. In addition to it, students will come to know about partnership and managing the relationship between them. Furthermore, this subject covers about the legal and illegal issues that has to be faced if a problem occurs. For example, if a business is run by partners the should follow an agreement which they should stick to and if they break it then they should face the consequences.

    In conclusion, schools already provide enough subject to their students and including an extra teaching about surviving financially in today’s world is completely a waste of money where students will also feel stressed if they introduce any new subject to their academics.

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    Akhil

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    September 1, 2021 at 10:06 AM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing (large number of gyms) Problem & Solution Essay

    Nowadays, sedentary lifestyle is running more and more popular inspite of having some physical activity on a regular basis. This essay will talk about the major problems of this epidemic and addresses some solutions to avoid them.

    The main issues that people are facing due to inactive lifestyle are obesity and multiple spine disorders. Firstly, people are becoming overweight because most of people are habituated to inactive lifestyle thus gains more fat instead of burning calories which leads to obesity. For example, these days people are being unenergetic due to the pandemic of covid-19 made them stay in their houses as it is dangerous to go out and work. On the otherside, number of the people are facing different kinds of spinal problems. As per today’s world nearly 75% of jobs can be done in a sitting posture. If a person sits continously for a longer time then there is a chance of loosing muscle tissue and curves in spines.

    I strongly believe that the best solutions for these issues are walking and playing any kind of sports. In order to keep everyone fit the government built number of parks for the citizens of their country to walk in their free times. Going for a walk on a regular basis helps us to burn some calories which avoids obesity. Furthermore, playing sports will make a person active and helps us to move every part in our body which automatically results us becoming fit.

    In conclusion, living a sedentary lifestyle leads to health problems such as spine disorders and obesity. The most significant solution is to concentrate on various physical activities for atleast one hour in a day.

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    Akhil

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    August 17, 2021 at 8:10 PM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing (social media)

    As we all know that social media fastest way of communicate with people around the world where one can know any information across the globe. In this essay we’ll see how the benefits of social media are more significant than it’s disadvantages.

    The prior advantages of social network are communication and sharing a live news. First of all, communication is more important nowadays because it helps to interact with people over the world and also provides more knowledge about what others are not familiar. For example, any our family members goes out of station where the signal frequency is low, he cannot communicate with us instead he can use social platform connecting to nearest wifi and can contact with us. The next benefit is to share any news in live with the help of social media through instagram, youtube etc, they too plays a major role in spreading a valuable information that happened in another country or area. For example, during covid-19 few people don’t even know how to safeguard themselves from covid where some doctors who took that as a responsibility and shared their service by posting videos in youtube and instagrams. In this way the news can shared throughout the world.

    The main disadvantages are harming and insulting others. Firstly, social media is accessible to everyone and also it is more dangerous if we connect to unknown people. For example, if we approch new contacts in social platform they may blackmail and ask for money. The second disadvantage is insulting, as there are lot groups people insult other group members in order to highlight their own group members in socail network. For example in sports, one country’s people makes comments on another counrty people.

    In conclusion, I believe that the benifits of socail media outwighs the flaws in it by using social network in right way so that there will be no harm. Even though many people insult they can avoid them by unfollowing them.

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    Akhil

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    August 11, 2021 at 9:23 AM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing (Learning a Foreign Language)

    With all the research on schools, few experts suggests that children should start learning foreign language in primary school than in the secondary one’s. This essay will examine the advantages and disadvantages in the view of professionals.

    The main advantages to learn foreign language in private schools are providing a well trained faculties and giving the best resources for easy understanding. Skilled language trainers will educate the students from basic to master’s level. For example, they will teach children how to get familiar with the language so that they can speak fluently. In primary schools there will be many resources provided with books to read and labs for interaction purposes. For example they conduct seminars where every child has to talk and also conducts weekly tests in listening and speaking the language.

    As we have seen the advantages in above paragraph, there are few drawbacks also. the major disadvantages are fees structures and stress in small ages. In corporate schools, they concentrate on studies as well as in extra circular activities so that they charge higher fees. In this case not every family can afford that much money for their children admissions. As every administrative department expects a great recognition through their students ranks, they give lot of assignments to do which automatically leads to stress in children mind. If the student cannot complete the work in time, he needs to manage time from his other schedules where the child gets less time to sleep. When there is no proper sleep there will be a lot stress in people mind.

    Taking everything into consideration, I am convinced that Foreign language is very important and the only platform to get best knowledge is in primary school. Though they are expensive the corporate schools should think about middle class families also. With that the downside of their academies.

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    Akhil

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    August 6, 2021 at 12:08 PM in reply to: WRITING TASK 2- ADVANTAGE DISADVANTAGE ESSAY

    In today’s growing world, people show more interest in tourism in their family trips. So tourism had made English as the common language in many countries and in future this may become the national language for all countries. This essay will discuss about the advantages and disadvantages of English being the prominent language in the world.

    There are two main Benefits if English becomes the common language in every country. First and foremost, it will be very easy to communicate with anyone from one corner of the world to another corner of the world and the Governments of different countries will have huge platform to discuss about the growth in one’s own country. Next comes comforts of people who travel around the globe; the travelers will be very comfortable in talking and sharing their problem when visit another country, this helps them to feel like home.

    As there are some advantages there will be some flaws also in making English as the single language in the world. The main disadvantage is that many of the countries will loose their tradition, nativity and the uniqueness of their country which is brought by their ancestors. The second drawback of this essay is, one can easily find out the major secrets of other countries and this leads to wars between many countries where there are higher chances of taking rule of other countries.

    In conclusion, single language in the world will definitely makes communication simple in every aspect. Though, this beneficial for world growth we needn’t leave our own mother tongue. For instance we can make English as a mandatory language in every country with the help of local governments. With this, communication will be made easy and every one will be free to speak in their own language as well as in English to communicate with different people from different parts of the world.

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