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    Amit

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    September 1, 2021 at 12:52 AM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing – 2 (Keeping pets is good)

    Some People argues that having a pet at home can be beneficial for children while other think that pets can be hazardous and tend to be risky for heath. In my view, keeping pets at home may cause health problem and could be life threating too. This essay will examine both the sides and give appropriate conclusion.

    There are people who believes that pets are kind and have more affection even more than human, they shares their feeling and emotions with us as they grown with kids, they gets same treatments, love and care from the other family members as result children could also learn how to care about others and especially how to behave with them. Moreover, pets can be a great companion to those children who doesn’t have sibling or friends. A study said that children who stay with pets are more courteous and kind hearted.

    Whereas, other think that pets are threating to keep with them which can cause heath difficulties especially to the children and aged family members, obviously when keeping pets must require proper hygiene, cleaning and good care of their health too. They needs to be strolled even require more precautions when family travels to distant place in short it requires good amount of time for care. In addition, they prone higher health risk for instance viral infection related to pet could transmit to children.

    In conclusion, I would brief that love and affection with pets are always good as that impact children behavior however, potential risk seems more to keeping them inside home with children that could be dangerous if they left unattended.

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    Amit

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    August 31, 2021 at 11:38 PM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing – 2 (Keeping pets is good)

    Some People argues that having a pet at home can be beneficial for children while other think that pets can be hazardous and tend to be risky for heath. In my view, keeping pets at home may cause health problem and could be life threating too. This essay will examine both the sides and give appropriate conclusion.

    There are people who believes that pets are kind and have more affection even more than human, they shares their feeling and emotions with us as they grown with kids, they gets same treatments, love and care from the other family members as result children could also learn how to care about others and especially how to behave with them. Moreover, pets can be a great companion to those children who doesn’t have sibling or friends. A study said that children who stay with pets are more courteous and kind hearted.

    Whereas, other think that pets are threating to keep with them which can cause heath difficulties especially to the children and aged family members, obviously when keeping pets must require proper hygiene, cleaning and good care of their health too. They needs to be strolled even require more precautions when family travels to distant place in short it requires good amount of time for care. In addition, they prone higher health risk for instance viral infection related to pet could transmit to children.

    In conclusion, I would brief that love and affection with pets are always good as that impact children behavior however, potential risk seems more to keeping them inside home with children that could be dangerous if they left unattended.

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    Amit

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    August 18, 2021 at 1:45 AM in reply to: IELTS Letter Writing – (Birthday present)

    Hi John,

    Hope you are doing well and I trust that you enjoyed my birthday party on last Sunday.

    I’m penning down to say thank you for such a wonderful smart watch gift which is one of the best present I have received in last few years. Actually you presence on my celebration was meant a lot more than gift for me. However I really appreciate your selection about watch, the color, designing belt and stylist dialer has mesmerized me when we show it. Ever since I have been wearing all the day.

    By the way, I’ve received more than twelve various overwhelmed gifts on that day, out of those, A book on Greek incent found more exciting gift as I Just walk through the few pages and seems going to be more interesting further.

    Although the It was so busy day, I enjoyed a lot by spending quality time with family in the morning and followed by lunch in the hotel and evening was amazing with friends and family, before you joined we played games but we enjoyed dance together after cake cutting.

    Well, catch you on next weekend and thanks again for an adorable present surprise.

    Best wishes,

    ZZ

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    Amit

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    July 30, 2021 at 6:20 PM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing (large number of gyms) Problem & Solution Essay

    In the modern world, a sedentary lifestyle is achieving vast acceptance even though a huge number of gyms are accessible. The major concern is an obesity caused by inactive lifestyle and perhaps solution is promoting involvement of exercise in daily life.

    The major problem occurs due to sedentary lifestyle is an obesity and related disease i.e hypertension, diabetes, Spine disorder etc. A long time idle sitting at place and less doing physical activities can increase the risk of becoming overweight which eventually lead to other illness as people less burn calories and gain fat gradually. Moreover, the researchers concluded that 75% cases of backbone problem is a consequence of consent sitting or a sedentary lifestyle which invite other relevant physical problems as well.

    In my view, the best solution to these problems is promoting awareness about fitness, exercise or yoga kind of activities which assist them to reduce obesity and make them more physically active or by educating people regarding the potential risk for avoiding this and benefit for the . Most of the people prefer to use vehicles instead of walking to reduce the time consumption or for their convenience. Hence promoting them to go by walk or using a cycle as safe and alternative of transportation would be an effective solution. Also, study suggest many people who are going gyms are not regular in their schedule. Thus, promoting gyms, yoga or other sports activities would increase the level of activeness. A YYC NGO organize a mini marathon running campaign in Mumbai every year to increase the awareness about obesity concerns.

    In conclusion, a sedentary lifestyle causes a so many health issues, including obesity and spinal diseases. The most effective solution is to increase the level of fitness among society by advertising physical activity.

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    Amit

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    July 20, 2021 at 11:54 PM in reply to: WRITING TASK 2- ADVANTAGE DISADVANTAGE ESSAY

    English has become the most adopted language in the world despite the fact that it is not spoken by the majority of the countries. The growth in the tourism sector has made English a widely accepted language in the many part of the world. Hence, many people are believe that it will be contributing to English become the single language to be spoken in the world. This essay will discuss the pros and cons of having one common language on the earth.

    Definitely, having a sole language will have enormous advantage to the countries it will benefit to make hassle free trade between nations, additionally, a noneconomic transections such as education or technology exchange also can be performed seamlessly between nations. for instance, Chinese and Russian can establish trade effortlessly as understanding would be so easy for both. Another main advantage is countries can standardize their study or education system thereby the skills and manpower facilities could be exchanged which potentially help to create more job opportunities.

    However, there are the downsides of one global language also. Countries may lose their ancient language which has linked with own values, culture and tradition and those represents their origin and sense of belonging therefore there is risk of losing own identity. Another major drawback is setting a single language is tedious task for any countries and obviously it’s not an overnight job. It may lead to dispute or outbreak among the countries or even within the countries especially like the India which is most diversified nation.

    Finally I would say adopting a sole language will stronger the relationship and economy of countries as powerful advantage considering other side fact that drawbacks has not to be overlooked.

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    Amit

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    July 19, 2021 at 11:00 PM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing – 2 (Technology )

    Now, It has been trending discussion that few people believe that they are being more social with use of technologies than they were before. Indeed, the technology has made his footprint to human’s social aspect too and in its fascinating way. Moreover, it has ensuring the advancement of people’s social life not just left behind with development of industries, education, and healthcare system Etc.

    Technology has changed the perception of social engagement through the social networking sites, video conferencing platform or other messenger applications and therefore, there are lots of sites and applications are being floated around us which are a just one click away and you can reach out to thousands of people. The prime motive of these technologies is to make us socially connected, share our achievements, our feelings, memories with society, friends and colleagues. However, it seems that people have not been using the purpose for which it has been setup and losing their precious time on just roaming over the different platforms, following and chatting with aimless groups.

    Although, we have experienced a lots example of humanity which just came across through help of these social networking sites for instance, A family based out in Gujarat was able to raise a whopping amount of 100 Million public fund for his son’s medical treatment and which was arranged in just unbelievable one month time which couldn’t funded via other sources.

    Another example of prudently used of these online platform by public is that during the 2<sup>nd</sup> wave of COVID in India, youngster had created many voluntaries groups on social media platform to facilitate common public by sharing the availability details of bed, Medicine, oxygen concentrator ]availability

    To summing up, I am completely agreed that people are being more engaged socially with the help of technologies.

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    Amit

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    July 15, 2021 at 12:05 AM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing -9 (Advertising)

    Advertising encourages us to but new things that we really do not need. Other say that advertisement tell about new product that improves our lives

    Advertisement is a greatest tool of conveying massage, information, awareness and so on. It is dynamic and having various mode of telecast for example, It can be reached to the large audience, a specific groups of people, at certain time through various channel like Radio, Print media, social media, massages ,E-mail, outdoor media.

    It has been proven a most powerful source in today’s era hence many companies are spending huge amount of their budget on advertisement activities for instance Pepsi, Unilever to grab the market share or to boost the festival sales and make sure that customer always stay connected.

    Furthermore, Government also using to a great extend to spread the awareness. Now a days we can see a vaccine drive related many ads on television or social media which is critical requirement to educate human about the benefits and also assist how to register for it.

    However, Advertisement has a negative side as well. Many time public has face issue of getting trap in fictitious advertisement or promotion scheme and sometime it misleads to audience by appealing product or service which is not essential to survive but public end up with procuring it.

    We get irritate and sometime anxious when we show some ads constantly on screen and especially when we are watching something interestingly online then it destruct over mind therefore, many of us would prefer to pay for Ads free subscription.

    So as covered different views of Advertisements its difficult to conclude here, although, my thought says that its benefits outweigh the negative. It can be more effective and wrathful if government would come up to policy or amendment which serve purpose for both.

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    Amit

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    August 24, 2021 at 11:32 PM in reply to: IELTS Letter Writing – (Birthday present)

    Thank for your detailed review 😀, I will definitely work on highlighted points.

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