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    Ashi

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    October 2, 2021 at 8:10 PM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing -9 (Advertising)

    With the advent of technology one industry that has a real impact on our lives is advertisement. Advertisements do encourage us to use effective products but at the same time it does not turns out to be that productive. I agree with the point that we tend to buy unnecessary products which we actually do not need because of these advertising markets.

    Advertising agency in the recent years have experienced a great boon because many people are now dependent on these marketing strategies to buy a product. It is abysmal that because of advertisements , many people now a days do not prefer to go outside and buy the things instead by analyzing the product quality instead they become susceptible to watch the advertisements and later order the product online. For instance , many people working in stores face a huge amount of violence from their customers because something that has been told to people on TVs, or on other mediums do not in real match with the customer’s expectations.

    Considering the fact that people now are swamped with excess work they do not get time to actually go to specific store and inquire about the product as a result of which they sometimes tend to land up in peculiar condition. It is extremely pragmatic for people now that they should not remain in dubious situation in case of buying a certain product by just following advertisements , rather they should further investigate on the quality and value which they have to owe for the particular item by either going to different stores and gathering knowledge about past experience of people having similar kind of product.

    In conclusion we can say that while advertisements do help the people to focus on new trending products but usually it does not in particular satisfy the needs of people in terms of cost effectiveness and unnecessary wastage in buying the products that we actually do not need.Therefore, proper judgement in case of buying any product should do not entirely depends on advertisements.

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    Ashi

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    October 2, 2021 at 8:02 PM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing -9 (Advertising)

    With the advent of technology one industry that has a real impact on our lives is advertisements. Advertisements do encourage us to use effective products but at the same time it does not turns out to be that productive. I agree with the point that we tend to buy unnecessary products which we actually do not need because of these advertising markets.

    Advertising agency in the recent years have experienced a great boon because many people are now dependent on these marketing strategies to buy a product. It is abysmal that because of advertisements , many people now a days do not prefer to go outside and buy the things instead by analyzing the product quality instead they become susceptible to watch the advertisements and later order the product online. For instance , many people working in stores face a huge amount of violence from their customers because something that has been told to people on TVs, or on other mediums do not in real match with the customer’s expectations.

    Considering the fact that people now are swamped with excess work they do not get time to actually go to specific store and inquire about the product as a result of which they sometimes tend to land up in peculiar condition. It is extremely pragmatic for people now that they should not remain in dubious situation in case of buying a certain product by just following advertisements , rather they should further investigate on the quality and value which they have to owe for the particular item by either going to different stores and gathering knowledge about past experience of people having similar kind of product.

    In conclusion we can say that while advertisements do help the people to focus on new trending products but usually it does not in particular satisfy the needs of people in terms of cost effectiveness and unnecessary wastage in buying the products that we actually do not need.Therefore, proper judgement in case of buying any product should do not entirely depends on advertisements.

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    Ashi

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    September 1, 2021 at 8:58 PM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing (large number of gyms) Problem & Solution Essay

    Nowadays, sedentary lifestyle is becoming more popular despite the availability of huge number of sports facilities. This essay will focus on the main cause behind this problem and propose the possible solutions in order to combat the bad effects .

    The main problems caused by inactive lifestyle are obesity and weak health.It has been shown in a number of research that people who tend to avoid any sort of physical activity in their day to day life raise a risk of becoming overweight.This is mainly caused because people nowadays avoid any kind of physical activity such as walking, cycling .Moreover, a lot of experts also analyzed a risk of heart and other diseases.Due to improper diet intake ,person grows up with health problems including blood pressure, diabetes, thyroid etc.For instance , it has been shown recently that people who used to exercise less would eventually be weak as compared to people who exercises everyday.

    In my opinion, the best possible solution to all these problems is implementing active lifestyle.Firstly , people nowadays gain a lot of weight due to lack of physical movement. This can be easily be overcome by a healthy lifestyle. People can make themselves healthy by walking , exercising, cycling etc. These physical activities will not only maintain the proper body weight but will also boost the metabolism of body. Moreover, people now suffers more often by heart and other diseases. Because of the improper diet and inactive lifestyle they tend to suffer more. These situations can be avoided by promoting the use gyms , yoga and other physical activities.

    In conclusion, leading a sedentary lifestyle causes a lot of health problems such as obesity and other health disorders.The most effective solution to all these problem is promoting a healthy lifestyle by exercising everyday.

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    Ashi

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    August 25, 2021 at 7:52 PM in reply to: General writing group 8pm Ipshita5

    Dear Landlord,

    I am writing this letter to bring your attention towards the problem of water at your rented flat.There has been no water supply since past week.It is getting quite troublesome now as we are facing lot of issues due to this.

    Since I am a student here, so as a result of these problems I am not able to concentrate on my studies.Firstly , there is no proper timing for getting hot water supply. Sometimes it also happens that there is no hot water at all . We also tend to get late for our classes because of inaccurate supply of hot water . Even I had missed some my classes because of this. Especially in winters, it become quite difficult for all of us to live here.

    Previous week two workmen visited our flat on your recommendations but they were not able to fix it up . It was quite painful for us also since we had to miss our work in order to get the problem fixed on that day. But eventually it proved to be waste.

    To my understanding , we can call the actual team which is responsible for its maintenance. Since you are already a registered member of their company ,they will provide the services at the earliest.Kindly let us know if it looks fine to you as it would solve most of our day to day problems else if it would remain in the same manner we might have to look for other accommodations.

    Thanking you for your assistance in advance,I look forward to hearing from you.

    Yours faithfully

    Ashi

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    Ashi

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    August 17, 2021 at 7:53 PM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing (social media)

    Nowadays it is quite often seen that people prefer to use social media as a means to communicate with each other or be informed about any news rather than using letters or newspapers etc for the same. This essay will examine the advantages and disadvantages of using social media and provide a logical conclusion.

    The two main advantages of using social media are easy way to keep touch with people and benefits in terms of grabbing job opportunity.Firstly, it has become convenient for people to remain in touch with people who may have been out of touch for a long time. For instance, social networking sites such as facebook ,whatsapp provide variety of ways through which people can communicate either through text, call or video call to one another present in any country . Secondly , people tend to find new jobs opportunities now in most effective manner . For instance , sites such as LinkedIn, Naukri.com, Monster provides an efficient way for people to look out for jobs and apply in most effective manner .

    However ,social media has some major disadvantages like inclination in the criminal activities and also lack of physical activity especially in young generation . Many people tend to engage in crimes through social media . For instance , drugs supply is one of the major issues that has impacted many lives. Also nowadays , young people totally depend on their phones such as browsing over to different social media sites just for the fun part. For instance, it is seen that younger people hardly exercise or does any kind of physical activity because of huge impact caused by social media.

    To conclude, although social media can have certain negative effects like no physical exercise/movement in today’s generation and increase in criminal activities, it has extremely positive influence on country’s economic growth by providing job opportunities and fastest medium for communication.I believe that these benefits of social media outweigh its drawbacks.

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    Ashi

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    August 10, 2021 at 7:40 PM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing (Learning a Foreign Language)

    Nowadays foreign language became (has become) significant for individuals growth. It is a key factor for the upliftment of an individual’s growth. This essay will examine the pros and cons of learning a foreign language in primary or secondary schools.

    The two main advantages of learning non-native language in primary schools are grass root level growth of child growth and also strong foundation built from the very beginning . Firstly, when the child pursue (pursues) any non-native language from primary school onwards it would enhance the capability to adopt more concepts as children of smaller age are able to persist more things which they learn at initial level. Secondly , it is comparatively easy for smaller kids to build strong foundation on any non-native language which is provided in primary school .

    On the contrary secondary schools provides (provide) advance level learning of non-native languages. But on the other side it has some major disadvantages like unable to provide the basic foundation level and also lack of focus and concentration on foreign language. For instance, when the child learn (learns) from secondary school there are high level of chances that the basic in depth knowledge is not provided. Also on the focus perspective it is tedious for students to tackle because of their main syllabi pressure .

    To conclude, secondary schools can facilitate high level knowledge in foreign language understanding but it has some disadvantages like grass root level understanding not provided and also from the focus perspective of child in secondary schools it is not efficient enough. I believe that learning foreign language in primary school is extremely fruitful as it outweigh the same in secondary schools.

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