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    Haritha

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    August 11, 2021 at 5:12 AM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing – 4 (Crimes)

    Crime is a serious issue across the globe. In addition to this, the crime rate is increasing day by day. A section of society believes that long imprisonment is the feasible solution to bring down crimes. Whilst other people consider that crime reduction is possible with other alternative ways. This essay will look into both opinions with viable examples. Such as crime reduction with severe punishments and with other alternatives like education and employment.

    To commence with, the Longer period of imprisonment is susceptible to change in offenders. This phenomenon can invoke fear among other criminals. If a person is already aware of the intensity of punishment before committing an abysmal act it will deterrent him from becoming a criminal. For example, for the crimes of murder or rape, the punishment is death to a sentence or life imprisonment. so that, masses are really scared to commit these kinds of crimes. Resulting in making people think twice before committing any serious crime. Imposing strict punishment discourages people from committing atrocities.

    on the other hands, An alternative ways such as educating people and providing employment can also control the crime rate. Moreover, The majority of humans who are performing cruel acts are uneducated and unemployes (unemployed). If they get sufficient guidance towards education and job opportunities keep the masses busy and away from the crimes. For example, If we consider a city with 100 % education resulting in more employment and fewer crimes.

    In conclusion, Severe punishment for a crime having a great impact on the people who are going to commit a mistake. However, there are many ways to bring down crimes such as education, which can eradicate the ferocity in society.

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    August 5, 2021 at 9:01 PM in reply to: WRITING TASK 2 agree or disagree (too many choices)

    These days people are fortunate enough to have endowed resources for their survival in the best possible way.

    However, there are sections of society that even struggling to afford their daily basic needs. I partially agree with the statement.

    This essay will discuss the possible points of view towards choices in society and justify them with viable examples.

    To commence with, In the present era, Human beings have exponentially increased the number of options available in different fields such as food, clothes, electronic gadgets, living comforts due to many reasons.

    Firstly, the creativity in mankind is increasing gradually towards self-comfort. In addition, The Human population is also enhancing day by day, and to generate enough needs for the people, Innovation is the only source.

    For example, Sometimes lack of rains humans face many problems. Just to revoke the issue, artificial rains were created in some places. Likewise, everything is generated for some adequate reason.

    Furthermore, the advancement in education and development has endowed people with the availability of an enormous number of professional fields to succeed in their lives.

    on other hand, There are few sections of people still striving for their basic needs. Throughout the globe, some have many choices. However, all this hangs on with their economical status.

    The unequal distribution of positive aspects of technology. Many underdeveloped countries are lacking the basic necessities to survive like food, health, and financial resources.

    Instead of having choices, they do not have an option to avail the of fundamental human rights. For example, In daily editions, there is a plethora of articles are publishing.

    To conclude this, The people around the globe in this generation are fortunate enough to have all the amenities with plenty of choices. However, people should be cautious while using technology and it would have been equal for everyone.

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    July 29, 2021 at 7:14 PM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing (problem in many countries)

    Undoubtedly, Obesity is a major issue experiencing by a myriad number of people throughout the globe. Unfortunately, wealthy countries are pre-eminent. This essay will certainly analyze and the issue and figure out viable solutions.

    To commence with, The main considerable reason for obesity is having unhealthy food habits and unsurprisingly fast food is incredibly popular in developed countries. Moreover, the consumers are always hands-on in making money and they are not fascinated with healthy food. In addition to this, a sedentary lifestyle is a massive cause behind this issue and those immeasurable passive working hours make people inactive and leads to overweight. Indeed, Obesity surges many health issues such as spine correction, Diabetes, thyroid, and hypertension. Essentially, If someone is oversized and shapeless can be deprived of self-confidence, which tends to mental health issues.

    There are many possible ways to overcome this problem, predominantly developed countries people could combat it more effectively. Firstly, public awareness is a significant factor and uncountable gyms are available with required amenities though need to advertise properly. Mankind should make few amendments in one’s daily routine, for example, eliminating junk food, taking small walks instead of car to nearby places, and working out and making fitness goals are the foremost practices to overcome this obstacle.

    To conclude, although obesity is a serious issue in developed countries. However, It is not an irresolvable problem, taking relevant measures can solve this issue.

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    July 15, 2021 at 7:10 PM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing (using computers)

    These days children are more into computers and their whole day runs with it. This essay will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of the previous sentence with suitable instances.

    Firstly, due to computer usage, there are some major disadvantages like children may become weak and should have to encounter health issues. In addition to this there is a chance to addict to computers and as a result, studies will get neglected. By using computers continuously adolescent’s eyesight may get weaker moreover it should affect their immune system. For instance, At present most of the youngsters are having spectacles at a very early age even doctors are advising parents to keep their adolescents away from computers. Especially, youngsters are addicted to the games on the computer and they are passing their most of the time on it. As a result, studies will get distracted therefore the level of concentration automatically decreases.

    Secondly, there are few advantages as well like, In the computer can find everything including knowledge development programs. It boosts problem-solving skills and increases self-esteem. Children are love to spend their time on the computer more than spending time in the classroom so that they will enjoy learning with the system, automatically their grasping power improves. For instance, Even schools are upgrading from traditional classrooms to smart classes just to attract students. Comparatively practical live classes are more intensive than theoretical classes. Therefore, youngsters remember the concept and they will apply it in real time. Moreover, In a computer network, millions of queries are there according to their level of thinking.

    To summarise, Proper guidance and support from the parents and teachers can eliminate these disadvantages and with proper use of a computer, children can reach to heights.

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    July 13, 2021 at 4:11 AM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing – 2 (Technology )

    Technology is a digital resource, which makes men develop communication skills. Few individuals strongly on this point and I completely agree with this. This essay will look into the positive aspects with suitable instances.

    To begin with, Social networking sites are paramount on the internet. Moreover, these are very useful and helps people to communicate in a distant way. Mankind can socialize with each other from different cities or even different countries. They can spend hours on phone. It can be made people communicate no matter under any circumstances. Although there are multiple social networking sites that are in trend. One can find their old friends and can make new friends without any hesitation. For instance, This will helps to boost self-esteem for the individuals who are feeling low to communicate with others directly. It usually aids people to mitigate their insecurity and anxiety.

    on the one hand, people are dependent on their smartphones and they do not even start their day without opening their networks. This addiction usually causes dire consequences for mental illness because it is very tiring and people become procrastinators. This addiction will lead to anxiety, stress, depression. Furthermore, men do not face human beings always prefer to be on phone. If one should use the internet with certain limits and control on it definitely overcome all these problems.

    In conclusion, Social networking sites are most popular to improve profiles and aids to overcome fear in making contact. However, this all should happen when men reign technology.

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    July 7, 2021 at 7:27 PM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing – 2 (Keeping pets is good)

    Pet parenting is common these days. We can able to see a pet like a cat or a dog in most of the houses. While some individuals believe that pets have a positive impact on their adolescents. Others argue that is unhealthy and spread diseases. This essay will look into both points of view with some instances and agree with the point of having a pet is beneficial for younger ones.

    To begin with, the primary reason for individuals to consider animals as a threat to there is their aggressive behavior towards children. While having a pet for the first time children below 5 years may not know how to deal with the animal, They may chew the ears and beat them as a result animal may become wild. However, leaving children with pets without parent supervision is always dangerous. To avoid these kinds of situations parents should be attentive and guide their adolescents in the beginning and should be careful in terms of medications and food so that can avoid diseases.

    On the other hand, Pets are friendly, innocent, loyal moreover we can have faith in them. We can find all these similar qualities in the children as well so that they both connect to each other within no time. Growing with pets will boost the immune system of children they can be kind from the beginning and friendly towards people as well. For instance, reported that children below one year who grew up with dogs and cats have a healthy immune system and had no allergy issues or asthma, even though their family has the history of allergies and asthma.

    In conclusion, owning a pet has a few negative impacts on children. However, those are avoidable by taking small measures. I think there are huge benefits to growing children with pets. Definitely gives a good positive vibe to the entire family.

  • Hosting global events such as the world cup, Olympics are the best platforms to showcase the country’s pride and uplift the economy as well. However, some people think that spending money on this kind of event is completely undefinable. I totally disagree with this point and this will look at the positives of this event with suitable examples.

    To begin with, hosting a sport in a country becomes competitive these days. A country wins the chance, to host an event after a bid along with a plethora of fights. They consider it is a massive chance to promote sports participation, create sporting role models, encourage a sense of national identity, and an opportunity to showcase their culture, city, and country to the global audience. For instance, in 2020, Tokyo won the Olympics bid and conducted sports events. which gains a lot more attention to the country and the investment which they made in the event was $50 billion. Did they use this total amount for the hosting? No, they have also used for health promotion, the country’s healthcare system, grassroots sports promotion.

    Secondly, By conducting sports events encourage people widely to become more active, this could be disputed. We will get a chance to meet another country’s people and other skill sets have been shared with each other. Moreover, winners are exposed to the media got attention from companies for the sponsorship. Therefore, they will receive prosperity and put their contribution on the sports than ever before. for example, Indian cricketer Virat Kohli had many endorsement deals and 66th highest-paid athlete in the world.

    To conclude, the impact of hosting an event in a country is significant. Developed and developing countries are also in competition to grab this opportunity.


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    June 22, 2021 at 7:02 PM in reply to: Letter Writing -4 (Lost Item)

    Dear Sir/Madam,

    I am writing this letter to inform you that I have lost my new iPhone12, during my recent holiday trip to Pondicherry and would like to claim insurance for the lost item. I have availed of your insurance service recently and my insurance number is 23564780.

    It was an Apple iPhone 12 with 128 GB, blue coloured, latest version and limited edition, dual 12 mp camera system with ultra-wide and wide angles. It costs me around 85000.

    The incident occurred in the airport when I was travelling from Chennai to Pondicherry last week. I went to the cafe named Chennai specials near the boarding point to have coffee. While having coffee I kept my phone on the table I got the announcement of boarding and left the cafe. Then after I boarded the plane there I got realised that I forgot my phone on the coffee table. It was one hour journey from Chennai to Pondicherry, therefore I returned immediately to Chennai. However, I haven’t got my mobile. I have filed an FIR in the nearest police station to the airport and the FIR registration number is 3456768.

    I would be grateful If you consider this request and initiate the process of claiming at the earliest convinience. Hoping to get released the full amount of my mobile phone as mentioned in the policy.

    I look forward to getting a positive reply from you.

    Yours faithfully,

    Haritha Kolapalli

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    June 17, 2021 at 7:13 PM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing -9 (Advertising)

    It is considered by some people to say that advertising encourages us to buy things we really do not need. While there are others who say that advertising tells us about new products that may improve our lives. I believe that people will attract to the advertisements and motivate to buy things which are not necessary that’s completely a waste of money. While knowing about the latest products in the market is also essential so that we can up-to-date with the trend and can use products wisely.

    On the one hand, advertisements actually do a lot to attract people and impress with their advertisements and ultimately they wanted to sell that product. However, there is no such thing as 100% genuine products. They bluff sometimes to sell products. They will provide a live demonstration to cheer up people. We have to think before buying the product whether that product is really important to us or not? Is it really useful? If we used to question before buying then there is no such thing as advertisements encourages us to buy.

    On the other hand, Advertisements really provide significant information regarding the latest products launched in the market. In addition to that advertisements includes information like product capability, warranty details, usage of the product. Therefore, people can actually know about that product and can make decisions. We can compare various advertisements and get the best product. Sometimes will get to know the discounts on the products with advertisements so that we can save money as well. As a result, we can purchase a product with advertisements blissfully.

    Finally, In my opinion, Whether advertisements encourage us to buy or tell us about new products depending on the product we purchased. Sometimes we buy few products with a plethora of expectations by just watching advertisements. As a result, that product may not up to the mark. However, will get to know about new products with advertisements only. If that product meets the expectations that will give us a great feeling and comfort.

    In conclusion, getting a good product must need an advertisement so that we can get to know the features and usage and can upgrade in day to day life. However, we should be cautious while buying products through advertisements. Therefore, We surely can purchase worthy and quality products without wasting money.

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