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    December 23, 2021 at 10:30 AM in reply to: Task 2 (Is it a positive or negative development): Shopping

    Shopping in essential for everyone living in this world. Some people do it for their basic needs, while others in several developed countries consume it for their comfort and entertainment. This essay will argue about the detrimental effect of unnecessary shopping on the human bodies as well as on their financial savings.

    Firstly, shopping is a fulfilling experience as it provides satisfaction and entertain to our mind wether its for essential house hold items or unnecessary things.Some people are shopaholic ,they are used to buy certain unnecessary item as they are influenced from advertisements. Moreover they have enough savings so they spent their money on branded unwanted things to show off or for their comfort and lavish lifestyle. For example a normal branded car have almost all necessary features for comfort and safety however, many prefer high segment cars like Mercedes and BMW.

    Secondly , shopping unwanted items gives a huge impact on person funds In addition to that , people who cant afford luxuries items commit crime to copy them. Moreover such person gets depressed.Person addapting shopping as hobby is not beneficial at all as It dose not develop person physically or intellectually, if we compare it with activities like sports or reading.

    In conclusion, people should only shop for necessary items not for worth less products. Moreover people should always be aware of advertisements as they change persons mind totally and pushes them towards buying unwanted products. People should follow more constructive ways to spend their free time.

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    December 21, 2021 at 10:07 AM in reply to: Task 2 (advantages and disadvantages) : Parents send their children abroad

    Giving good education is a dream of every parent to their children. Some prefer to send them to abroad in one of the best universities of the world for getting better knowledge and experience. Although it have a huge impact on parent’s pocket. There are several of advantages and dis advantages of this which i will discuss in upcoming paragraphs.

    Firstly , sending children to abroad makes them independent. When children goes to abroad they cant be lenient towards their duties. For example going to university and completing their work. So they become more punctual in life. Moreover, children gets to their own and have to work for their expansions and better living. They learn how to earn money and its value. If they are earning them self they avoid doing unnecessary expensive. They gain better education, confidence and essential life skills which will helps them when they come back to their home town and run there own business.

    There are some disadvantages of this as well , sometime while studying in abroad and doing jobs children adopt foreign culture and avoid coming back to their home town as it is very difficult for the single child parents in old age. In addition to that , some children gets more indulge with their friends as compared to parents and give preference to friends instead of family. Even parents cant keep a look on their children and they can be a part of a bad company. Moreover its very expensive and its not able for all parents to afford.

    To sum up this essay, there are several advantages and disadvantages of sending children to abroad as i discussed. It depends on the family situation as some wants their children to settle down in abroad and others want them to gain advanced knowledge, studies,confidence and use it in their family business for further development.

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    December 17, 2021 at 9:24 AM in reply to: Letter Task;1 (Advertisement in Australian magazine)

    Dear sir/madam,

    I am writing this letter in regarding with the advertisement you have published in today’s news paper, regarding a person required for living with a family and taking care of your six year child.

    My self is john, I am from London , I came to Australia in 2018 for child and day care course from University of Australia.As this is final year of my studies , I have time period for around six months before my degree completed.

    I found that your advertisement suits me in each way,as i need to place for living and have good skills of handling a child. Moreover i can gain some income as well as some practical experience while doing this job. I am very comfortable with kids, In addition to that, soon i am going to open a day care home in Australia after my studies completed.

    I will wait for your prompt reply regarding this letter in a positive way.

    Thanking you in advance.

    Yours Faithfully

    John.

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    December 13, 2021 at 10:06 AM in reply to: Task 2 (discuss both views)- Newspaper

    Majority of people believe newspaper as a better way to gain knowledge. While other consider that there are several ways to keeping them selves up to date with latest news and inventions related to nation. In my opinion, I agree with the latter part of the statement.

    Newspaper is one of the most traditional way of reading news. Moreover , several of old age people are habitat of reading news paper in the morning while having a cup of a tea. According to them they can not start there day without reading newspaper , without any doubt they are stick towards the news paper and prefer it the most. In addition to that , newspaper is the cheapest way for getting information. However it gives limited information about the news.

    Moving towards the second argument of this debate , the first point of that as technology is increasing day by day human should also update them selves. There are several ways to gather latest news in very convienent ways, as social media, we can read any news related to any stream on social media without any restrictions. Moreover social media has a variety of information about products and new launches. In addition to that, we can access any old or any latest news on devices. Person do not need to keep the prints and proofs with them as all the news on social media is saved on it. As an result, digital media is replacing the old technology with new ones. Moreover ,Its handy and can be used anywhere at any time with the access of internet.

    In conclusion , according to my perspective,I prefer digital media as it have ample of benefits and more over its very convienent to use as it have various platforms and wide range of knowledge.

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    December 11, 2021 at 9:28 AM in reply to: Task-1 (Letter writing) : Semi-formal letter to landlord

    Dear smith,

    I am writing this letter to inform about the damage happened to the roof of your house, which is rented by me.

    I am john , living at 42 gohnson road , tw59lj, honslow. Yesterday when it was very windy before rain , suddenly a window opened in our loft due to strong wind and flip towards opposite side. When i reached in the loft i saw that it was raining on the heating system, so I covered it quickly with a big polythene sheet which was kept their and switch off the heating system power supply.

    So , I would request you to ask some one who can fix this ,because our heating system is exactly under that window ,if it rains again that it can spoil it totally. moreover it is very risky as anybody can enter the house through the loft. In addition to that another window in the loft is also unable to lock properly as I checked all of them after this incident happened.

    I hope you will consider my request and solve this problem as soon as possible. As it is completely opened on the top and birds can access into loft for shelter as well.

    I await for your prompt service.

    Yours sincerely,

    john.

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    December 7, 2021 at 11:24 AM in reply to: Agree/Disagree (Reward or Punishment)

    Nowadays , when students perform well in schools they are rewarded. This is a better way than punishment when they do wrong things in school.I completely agree with this opinion and think that giving rewards is far better than punishment as it motivates to children.

    There are many reasons that i agree that rewarded is a greater than punished.First of all , punishing any children is very wrong as it can leads a child to lack of confidence. A child can loose all of his power of doing things. Moreover, due to punishment it can effect a child mentally which is very incorrect in growing age. Even punishing can hurt physical health of kids, due to which families and kids have to face several difficulties. In addition to it, student who have punished in school they try to avoid going back again as they fell afraid and embarrassed.

    Another reason is also that In smaller age children are always in need of love and pamper, when they have rewarded for completing there home work it motivates them more. Finally, they can get higher grades which cause them more confident. Furthermore, adults can also encourage students how they can impress teacher with work and good attitude and inform them about many advantages they have in school.For instance child gets more intreasted in their work and try to copy good things for getting more rewards.

    In conclusion, i finally believe that rewards are more beneficial than punishing. as every likes to get a reward which always pushes them towards happiness and they become feel proud of them selves in childhood.

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