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    Khyathi

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    June 26, 2023 at 12:25 PM in reply to: Essay -Negative impacts of Social Media

    Few people are convinced that social media services have adverse effects on either individual or public. I completely agree with the statement, because social browsing has more cons than pros. This essay will enlighten the negative sides of the media on the person as well as the civilization and also the reasons for my view.

    The unhealthy impacts of social platform on an individual are mainly, increase of peer pressure, addiction, and risk of being conned by the false information that is spread on the sites. Let’s see how peer pressure is developed in an individual. If a person in browsing over the media and watching all the things shared about others lifestyle, he/she will gradually compare himself with others who barely know him which in turn will lead to depression and also foster to engage in either self-harm or criminal thoughts, just to be acknowledged and respected in the community.

    Another important outcome of its usage is addiction. These days many of the teenagers are interested in getting more likes, subscribers, comments etc., than others which is leading to” win at all costs attitude” weather by uploading inappropriate content or by posting wrong information. Because of this misleads society is being robbed in away or other. Every now and the, we are coming across an article on news regarding cyber trafficking and online frauds just because of blind trusts on what-ever information that is posted on the internet.

    Despite of all this negativity, there are few positive impacts of social media such as study related contents are provided, can obtain up to the minute news. So, by limiting the browsing time, and sharing what is relevant online and trusting only the entrusted channels can reduce the ill impacts on this society.

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    Khyathi

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    June 4, 2023 at 7:14 PM in reply to: IELTS Task 1: Influencers Bar Chart

    The bar diagram depicts the popularity of the famous Instagram influencers in 2011 and 2021. In the chart given, we can observe the change in the number of followers of the well-known Instagram influencers in 2011 and 2021. The followers for all the users are increased in 2021 compared to 2018.

    The influencer with highest number of followers in 2018 is Selena Gomez, whereas the least is for The Rock with nearly 130 million and 90million followers respectively. Cristiana Ronaldo and Ariana Grande have approximately 110million while Kylie Jenner is near to the 100 million followers.

    In 2021, influencers with highest and least followers are Cristiana Ronaldo and Selena Gomez with 320 million and 240 million respectively. Whereas, The Rock, Ariana Grande, and Kylie Jenner have around 250 million followers.

    Finally, we can see a major hike i.e., 3 times in Cristiano Ronaldo’s followers in 2021 and a major fall i.e., less than twice in Selena Gomez followers. The remaining has nearly double the followers in 2021.

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    Khyathi

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    June 4, 2023 at 5:51 PM in reply to: Advantages/Disadvantages Essay

    Installation of Electronic gadgets are reducing the employment compared to past. There are ups and downs because of technology, it might be affecting the community in terms of employment, but it is also providing new opportunities to the upcoming generations. In this essay, I will discuss about the pros and cons of the given statement.

    Firstly, I can say that without technology there is no development. These advancements in the technical field are paving way to the new interventions and to a whole new world. For example, at first when the mobiles were invented, people working in postal department went on strike in fear of losing their jobs while the actual situation is vise-versa i.e., rise of new postings has taken place in departments such as mechanical, sales, electrical, advertising department and many more, which in turn also helped in rising the country’s economy. The same goes with the medical field, advanced machineries helped in accurate diagnosis of the disease and in curing them within short period of time.

    Although digitalization has many upsides, it also has few downsides. For instance, if a person is uneducated and solely dependent on traditional method of business, will face a problem in acquiring new skills which may lead to financial crisis over his family. due to this, the future generation might not know the traditional methods and customs as we are slowly moving into the technical world.

    In my opinion, although machinery advancements may mask few jobs, but in contrast it is also creating new chances for next generations, in order to go with the flow, one has to develop new skills and has to increase their knowledge.

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    Khyathi

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    June 1, 2023 at 12:43 PM in reply to: Essay on neighbors

    In recent times, people are less socializing. Few reasons for this are, having busy schedule or spending more time on gadgets rather with people. Spending some time and making small conversations with people around will help in knowing them better. This essay will describe the reasons and solutions for this situation.

    To meet the required living standards, people are working round the clock, so they are unable to spend few minutes to the people around them. This is the one main reason for not knowing their neighborhood. Also, usage of electronic gadgets has distanced people so much that even in their leisure time, they are prioritizing mobiles and computers over a group chat or an outdoor walk. Not only adults but also children are more interested in playing mobile games than outdoor games which paves way to develop lack of interest in socializing.

    In old times, people used to sit under a tree or in an open place, discuss their thoughts and laugh a bit which helped in knowing people better. But in present, we just forgot spending time with people, helping one another, which distanced each-other in such a way that, even their presence doesn’t matter. This can be avoided by spending less time on gadgets, interacting with people in free times, encouraging the kids to play with the community children rather with devices.

    Thus, I conclude that, talking and mingling in with locality members will not only helps in knowing things but also works as a great stress buster and people are the ones we need in tough times.

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    Khyathi

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    May 31, 2023 at 7:28 PM in reply to: IELTS ESSAY on learning a language

    Few assume that children should be educated a language before head in school while, some say learning these in higher classes is better. This essay discusses, for and against on the above statement.

    Toddlers tend to grasp things easily, they mimic everything they see as they memorize way faster than adults i.e., as people age, the time taken to learn or understand gradually increases, teaching new languages to kids at tender age is beneficial rather in older age. Also, teaching them new languages early will save them time in the future to learn extra subjects. Educating them new skill will increase curiosity in them to learn more.

    Up skilling them early may create a stressful environment leading to mental disabilities and also, they may develop ignorance and lack of interest in learning new things which indirectly effects their academic performance. Leaving the young minds stress free, allowing them to grow in play full and cheer full conditions will help them bloom in the future.

    In my view, teaching children at lower classes is help full in building a strong and confident career. Moreover, new subjects should only be taught until he/she opens their minds freely without feeling stress. One should not force them to learn, instead creating a joy full surroundings will level up their mental capacity making it less hard to seize knowledge, which also results in long term memory. Finally, I conclude that pressurized education beats stress free education either it may be youngers or elders. Tuning younger minds is way easy than the adult minds so, teaching new subjects prior is better than later.

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    Khyathi

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    May 31, 2023 at 1:37 PM in reply to: Academic Task 1Map

    The pictures depict the changes occurred in Felixstone in the time period of 1967 and 2001. Major changes are commercialization of the farmland and beach site.

    In 1967, there was a golf course towards the west, which has not undergone any changes till 2001. To the east there used to be a farmland that has been developed into hotel, tennis courts and a swimming pool in 2001. In between golf course and the farmland there’s a high street connecting the main road with shops on its either sides in 1967, shops on the right side of the high street were replaced with apartments in 2001.

    To the south of the Felixstone major swap can be seen. Partition of the beach into public and private, removal of fish market, marina and pier has been done in 2001. Wind turbines under the dunes and car park near hotel were also installed at that time. However, the café in the southwest has remained untouched.

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    Khyathi

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    May 30, 2023 at 5:43 PM in reply to: Double Question Essay

    These days, parents are not backing off from fulfilling their young one’s desires and also not restricting any of their doings. They are allowing the kids to do whatever they want in the name of freedom. I don’t think this is the right way of parenting and this leads to the inability of the child to be independent. This essay talks about the right way of upbringing children and the outcome of pampering in the near future.

    Firstly, rising children doesn’t mean to accept their every wish. Saying no, is very crucial in letting the kid realize what is good and what is not and also correcting them will teach them how to behave. For instance, if the young one is stealing a pen or a toy from his mate, correcting him there and then will stop him from repeating it and also becoming a thief in the coming days.

    If, parents say yes, to each and every request he/she makes and puts a blind eye in their wrong doings/behavior will surely cause intense effects in his/her adult age. When they become adults, they might lack the sense of right and wrong, struggles in making decisions not only this but also to stand as an independent individual in the society. Petting them might look like loving them but it actually spoils the young ones.

    Finally, I conclude that pampering way of upbringing may look good to the society, but it will have a huge negative impact on the children in facing the cruel world. To rise a responsible and autonomous person, the type of upbringing which has denying and rectifying is important.

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