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    Prabh

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    June 4, 2021 at 1:34 PM in reply to: IELTS Letter Writing -2

    Hi Rapal,

    Hope you are doing well.

    I would like to invite you in 50th anniversary of my parents which is held on 20th of next month. As you know, this is a golden jubilee so I’m planning to organize a grand party on this occasion. moreover, inviting all the specials ones to make this moment more memorizing and stunning, therefore, your presence is most significant.

    Also, I have booked the destination “Hills Farm House” in Himachal where party to be held and to make this trip more convenient I have arranged both side transport for everyone. So, you have to come directly at my home Janakpuri, Delhi and try to reach atleast two days before so that we can spend more quality time together.

    In addition, you don’t need to worry about your accommodation because we have sufficient space in our house so, you may stay here as long as you wish and apart of, after reaching at party’s destination, I have already arranged hotel’s room for everyone to stay conveniently.

    I would like you to join this event and thank you in advance!

    Best wishes

    Prabh

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    Prabh

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    June 4, 2021 at 1:26 PM in reply to: IELTS Letter Writing -2

    Hi Rapal,

    Hope you are doing well.

    I would like to invite you in 50th anniversary of my parents which is held on 20th of next month. As you know, this is a golden jubilee so I’m planning to organize a grand party on this occasion. moreover, inviting all the specials ones to make this moment more memorizing and stunning, therefore, your presence is most significant.

    Also, I have booked the destination “Hills Farm House” in Himachal where party to be held and to make this trip more convenient I have arranged both side transport for everyone. So, you have to come directly at my home Janakpuri, Delhi and try to reach atleast two days before so that we can spend more quality time together.

    In addition, you don’t need to worry about your accommodation because we have sufficient space in our house so, you may stay here as long as you wish and apart of, after reaching at party’s destination, I have already arranged hotel’s room for everyone to stay conveniently.

    Thank you in advance!

    Best wishes

    Prabh

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    Prabh

    Member
    June 3, 2021 at 10:30 AM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing – 6 (Wasting money on the arts)

    In the world many of the countries government is facing problems like rising unemployment and growing threats of crime. Poverty is still a major problem in many of the countries, out of I will discuss about my country India. In such a scenario, the government should avoid wasting money on the arts which make sense. However, in my opinion, arts also exist in the society but I do not think that the government should waste a lot of money on it.

    Although we can not ignore, arts are not a waste of time and money. In fact, they are also part of generating the money to the country. For instance, if I discuss about India’s most famous art places such as heritage, museums and many other dancing and musing concerts where people come from around the world and really enjoy them. India government always target traditional arts form to promote tourism in the country. India’s traditional concert like classical dance, Punjabi bhangra & gidda and many other traditional singing concert where audience are invited to enjoy the moment from all over the world and attract thousands of international tourist to the nation which play a major role to crates jobs and helps the local economy.

    Moreover, heritage and sculptures also have big commercial value. Thousands of people visit to these places and know about the history in depth. Apart there are several reasons why the government should spend money on arts. One of the predominant reasons is that art reflects the culture of a country and promotes people’s understanding of their culture and architecture.

    To conclude, I believe that the government should divide the funds equally to all sectors including arts because every sector has its own contribution towards the development of a country.

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    Prabh

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    June 1, 2021 at 12:54 PM in reply to: IELTS Letter Writing -1

    Dear Sir or Madam,

    I am writing to express interest in your recent part-time job offer for the position computer operator, I believe it will be a really great opportunity for me to start my career with such a reputed restaurant with 100% client satisfaction.

    In addition, I have six months of experience with the same scope of work , moreover, my major job key areas are manage accounts, orders, bills, discount & promotional activity and along with I was providing customer support over the phone and email. Even, I was awarded with best performance and 100% attendance.

    Recently, I have left my previous job due to continue my further study and improving the skills therefore, I stay occupied till noon and after I have spare time till night. Hence, I would be grateful if you would give me this opportunity to work in your restaurant for the above post in the evening shift for the regular days.

    I look forward to receiving your response.

    Yours faithfully

    Zack

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    Prabh

    Member
    June 2, 2021 at 8:44 PM in reply to: IELTS Letter Writing -1

    Thanks for giving your valuable feedback, further, I would request you to please highlight those areas/lines where need to correct the sentence formation. It will be very helpful.

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