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    rahul

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    July 29, 2021 at 7:18 PM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing (problem in many countries)

    Obesity is a growing concern in many countries, especially in nations with the established economies. This essay is going to put light on this same problem and provide a logical solution to it.

    In recent times countries with an economic boom have started seeing common health concerns, which include obesity as well. The main reason for that is the quick availability of fast food and a sedentary lifestyle. For Instance, nowadays, companies like dominos/MacDonald’s can be easily found within a 500-meter radius of every city, promoting its consumption in youth. As we know, these pre-prepared foods contain a high amount of sodium and excessive fat, which promotes obesity in the body. The other aspect would be a sedentary lifestyle due to a high workload; hence, one does not burn enough calories compared to the calories he consumes.

    The practical solution to such problems is always promoting awareness in youth rather than enforcing any solution to them . The government should promote healthy living by organizing health events and opening more food centers that provide quality organic food. In contrast, MNC’s should also adapt their work culture to provide multiple breaks so that employees can avoid sitting for long hours and increases their activity level.

    In conclusion, Fighting obesity is not a one-day task but can be achieved over a period of time with some constant lifestyle changes, and hence we can avoid diseases such as diabetes and high blood pressure, which comes along with it.

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    July 25, 2021 at 7:58 PM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing – 2 (Feeling of competition)

    It is a debatable topic nowadays to inculcate competitive behavior in kids or to nourish them with cooperative manners. I completely agree that building competitive behavior at an early age is a must in this fast-paced world. This essay will discuss the same viewpoint and provide a logical conclusion to it.

    as we know , kid’s brains are more susceptible to grasp new things and behavior than adults. So infusing competitiveness in their behavior becomes effortless, which creates a challenging brain that works in a more optimized manner hence they become much thoughtful when doing any task.for example, in recent studies, it was found that most of the successful people were those who had a childhood where they used to question the ongoing process and find different ways to approach a problem. The same behavior develops when a child has been put in a competitive situation where it challenges its own method to develop better solutions.

    Secondly, in recent times, the population is booming at its peak where every child is a prodigy in itself. So every parent wants their kids to learn from the other excellent performing mates and be at the same pace as them however they need to be watchful that they don’t pressurize the kids with too much expectation.For example, a recent survey has shown that kids in competitive schools are faster to react to a stressful situation than those grown in cooperative childhood.

    In conclusion, adding competitive behavior in a child is a plus. It reflects in their social skills to learn from others and develops mental strength to fight a challenging situation. At the same time, parents have to keep their expectations low so kids don’t feel pressured.

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    July 15, 2021 at 7:11 PM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing (using computers)

    In recent times the computer has revolutionized the education system and thereby it becomes mandatory for children to be exposed to it at an early age for a faster learning curve though excessive use of it can give birth to certain disadvantages too. This essay will put light on the advantages and disadvantages caused by laptop/computer usage in children’s life.

    The two main advantages of early age computer exposure to children will be exposing their brain to modern day technology and accelerate their learning curve by online education.Firstly, children’s brains are most agile during the early age to new thing hence manifesting computer usage growing up will be more facile when compared to an adult thereby keeps the children updated with modern-day technology. Secondly, now computer it’s the most common gateway to explore to learn things more practically by video\audio lectures hence provides a better dimension to learning curve .

    Like every other invention, it also comes with a couple of disadvantages such as rise to introverted behavior due to addiction caused by games and certain health issues due to heavy screen usage.If the usage in not done in a controlled fashion then child can be cut-off from social world which leads to an isolated brain with insignificant social skills whereas it also adds to health issues such as myopia caused in eye if not used from proper distance .However , if the usage is monitored by adults and the exposure is done in a controlled fashion then It can really add up to a faster brain development.

    To conclude, although usage of computer comes with serious disadvantages on physical health as well as social skills nevertheless can be suppressed by slight micromanagement and controlling the screen time thus adds a different dimension to learning at an early age hence I believe that disadvantages can be suppressed by some effort and can create more meaningful childhood

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    July 14, 2021 at 5:44 PM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing – 2 (Technology )

    It is often an arguable topic that technology has made people more social or it is suppressing the human behavior of interacting face to face. I completely agree with the fact that technology has made people’s life much easier in a way by connecting them seamlessly.This essay will focus on the same that how technology in the 21st century has opened the barrier of socialization irrespective of the geographical location.

    first of all, due to the development of many social platforms such as Facebook, Instagram and Snapchat etc, connecting with dear once is one flick a finger away .

    In this fast-paced 21st century ,imagining socialization without technology is next to impossible due to hectic professional life socializing become more strenuous and give’s birth to an introverted behavior

    for example, in a recent study, It was found that people working in MNCs and other pressurizing work cultures have lesser work-life balance and this directly affects their social life and leads to a more introverted lifestyle hence without online social platforms however technology has transformed the way we socialize and gave an altogether new direction to the social behavior of humans.

    secondly, technology has not just given an easier way to connect people but also helped socialize for good deeds as seen in this pandemic time where platforms like instagram and facebook played a key role to spread awareness.

    for example , it was almost impossible for our government to spread awareness from procuring medicine to finding a suitable hospital for covid-19 however it has to be used carefully as a lot of misinformation gets spread through these platforms.

    in conclusion, with more and more people joining these social platforms technology has entered in every human’s life-style and completed depreciated the geographical barrier of socialization and leads to a more connected lifestyle across the world.

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    July 7, 2021 at 7:15 PM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing – 2 (Keeping pets is good)

    It is often argued that the presence of pets in houses with children below the age of 15 is treacherous due to numerous reasons which include security, hygiene, and safety of kids hence completely agree with the statement that keeping animals with kids might not be the wise decision and this essay will discuss on the same viewpoint about how animal presence in the house can create muddles for parents.

    first of all, having pets is considered a wise decision because they bring security and liveliness to the house, on the other hand, they also need an equal amount of care and training which takes a certain amount of effort and for a house with teenagers or below of that age might result in chaos as parenting might take a toll on it.

    for example, it was found in a study that children below the age of 15 are more susceptible to many diseases because of a vulnerable immune system however, it is also a known fact that many animals contain hazardous germs and bacterias so it becomes a risky amalgamation on health point of view.

    secondly, keeping a pet requires the same or more amount of effort when compared to parenting for kids as the pets also need training and care.

    In this modern society with working parents leaving kids with pets will be dangerous no matter how much we isolate them.

    for example, recently it was all over the news how a dog broke the leg of a toddler though it was intentional or not that was a separate debate however it was always expected as the child does not know the risk attached to playing with pets.

    in conclusion, keeping pets is not harmful considering it is not an arena with kids and as we discussed the efforts gets divided for a parent when both of them comes under the same roof hence it does not just open up the door for many infectious diseases but also increases probability many risky injuries.

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    June 30, 2021 at 7:33 PM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing -7 (Outdoor Activities)

    In this era of the digital world it is often argued that doing physical and outdoor activities are more impactful rather than being in front of monitor even if kids find it less attractive . I strongly agree with the thought that the lesser time a kid utilizes on screen the more they can be active and lesser susceptible to illness.

    Outdoor activities will always take precedence to the computer games when it to comes to the amount of physical and mental effort required and as we know the brain malleability is maximum as a kid hence spending more time on computer games affects the kid’s interaction with real world which in turn reflects in his social skills . For example ,most of the people who excelled in their field today had a very open childhood which encompasses lot of adventures such as school picnic/cricket matches / other sports activities.

    It has Been seen that playing excessive video games not just affects the eyesight but it also gives rise to an obsessive behavior to finish those games resulting in a more introverted and complacent childhood and with time it results in abysmal performance in school causing bad grades. for instance, steve job the inventor of the computer himself has kept their children away from any digital entertainment as he understands having outdoor activities gives us more challenges and develops the brain to deal with them

    In conclusion, outdoor activities during childhood create a base for a healthy as well as a well-devolved brain meanwhile it is also equally important for a parent to keep track of his kid that they don’t get too attached to video games since later once it becomes a behavior it is laborious to come out of that zone.

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    June 22, 2021 at 6:42 PM in reply to: Letter Writing -4 (Lost Item)

    Dear sir/madam,

    I am writing this letter to inform you that I lost my Samsung galaxy phone during a family trip to new jersey which is black in color with the specification of 256gb ram / 2.5 processor / 5.5 inches screen which is also covered by the extended insurance amenity given by company.

    While travelling back to the airport I stopped mid-way to get a coffee and I did the payment with the same phone but when I reached to the airport I realized phone was not there with me it seems I lost it either in cab or in the coffee shop .

    I enquired with the coffee shop and the cab service company but didn’t get any lead about it since it’s a 6 month old phone so it comes under the extended insurance which covers the full value of the phone in case of accidental loss of the item .

    The insurance agreement’s clause-6B states that the full value of the phone will be reimbursed in case of loss of item within one year of purchase henceforth please do the needful to expedite the procedure for recovering the amount of the phone.

    Yours faithfully,

    Rahul

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    June 17, 2021 at 6:51 PM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing -9 (Advertising)

    In this era of digital revolution advertising is something which is part of a every human’s life who consumes any sort of digital media . It is no longer a conventional sign board or tv commercials instead it has been done all over the internet through brand integration in stories, youtube series , musical albums and websites.

    Talking about the effect of advertisements I believe all the adds are customized according to the person’s search history as well its searching patterns so sometimes it do help the consumers to find the right thing directly on the other hand it also invades one’s privacy by storing their data which is contentious.

    In hindsight I believe it always depends on an individual how they respond to an advertisement for example some people do overspend to procure the lavish thing which might not be useful for them on daily bases in that cases the search engine will keep on advertising those things to them but for others they might selectively choose the items based on their needs irrespective of the amount of advertising done for it .

    In conclusion , yes in some cases advertisement does cause some sort of subconscious effect on brain to by showing same add on different platform so that user can purchase irrespective of the need but it also shows one’s thought process or how deeply we think before spending our money .since it’s the job of the advertiser to promote the product similarly it’s our job to be meticulous that we buy only those things which are essential not luxury and keep a conscious eye on deceptive advertisement .

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