Shubhum
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Shubhum
MemberSeptember 30, 2022 at 11:24 AM in reply to: Task 2: (Agree/disagree) : Money managementIt is often argued that considering money management as a new subject is beneficial for senior secondary school students for how to used the money on right or wrong stuffs. I am totally agree with this statement. This essay will suggest having a talent is mandatory to make a successful career in future. To begin with, finance or money management classes are really helpful for us to secure our future from financial losses. We should have to understand the importance of money which is earned by our parents through their hard work in offices. If we spend our money buying study instruments etc. that is worth it. Furthermore, if we spend our money in purchasing unnecessary stuffs like junk cuisines, video games etc. which is wastage of money as well as time. At certain time, it will play the role of diversion to accomplish our future plans. However, having a subject like finance management it would help us to protect from scamster and spread awareness among the people. If everyone gain knowledge about money management and will apply to their daily life , eventually this will decrease both poverty ad illiteracy rate. For an example i have seen many of people in the present time which is battling with their financial crisis due to the lack of knowledge. At last not least, providing better education facilities to everyone it leads our career up to the mark. To conclude, all teenagers should be provided money management lessons in every school. This can help them in future as well as in decision making .
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<div>Hello Piyush, I hope you are fine and i am really sorry that i did not get oppurtunity to attend your birthday party due to some hectic schedules. It was delighted to hear from your younger brother that the party is held in a grand way and it is over the top. I have a surprise for you that i won two lottery tickets for holidaying the trip to Hawaii and planning to travel and explore new things with you. Last week i had done shopping from GV Mall on the occasion of Navaratri in the Smart bazaar, there was some coupons distributed where i heard about the many luck draw going for filling the form with details which was on lottery based. Unfortunately, i had not any huge expectations for winning this lottery contest but after the announcement of the winner i am in shocked and cannot believe that my dreams come true in front of my eyes. When i received the lottery tickets through the anchor it was a memorable moment for me and it made my day. I got Hawaii tickets for 5 days and i have an extra ticket but it depends on you would u like to join me in this amazing vacation? Hawaii is one of the fascinating place to visit in the US. It is famous for their beautiful beaches and delicious cuisines. Tourists are the major attraction of the Hawaii who came across all over the world to explore and experience the rich heritage culture and historical places. Tourism is a great source of income to boost the economy. The weather and climate of Hawaii is cool and great to do some activities like scuba diving, snorkelling etc. I am waiting for your decision if u are ready to enjoy this vacation with me, please call me. Your loving friend Shubhum
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Shubhum
MemberSeptember 28, 2022 at 12:11 AM in reply to: Writing Task 2: Problem -solution (life expectancy)In this modern era, the life span of human being and the birth control rate of a child is growing in a large scale. Furthermore, there are few challenges to control and manage the population. This essay will analyse about to how to decrease the impact of ageing people. To begin with, if people live a longer life span then the population will rise older and it’s not a good sign for any country. One of the first issue, country will suffer from a high budget problem because of getting the pensioned to the retired people were increasing. It is a huge burden of tax payers. In today’s life the proportion of young people is fewer as compared to the olders and it is not a great stuff because the responsbility to run the nation is on the youth shoulder. On the other hand, it is to significant to solve the issue of birth control rate. First of all, the govt have to make and implement some strict laws like we two ours two. The second issue is to migrate the older people to european countries for a better quality of life. The main reason behind immigration of older people is the decline population of european countries like denmark, belgium, netherlands etc. If the older people shifted to european countries for living then they get the oppurtunity to explore the historical places to visit as a last wish. In conclusion, the increase in life expectancy in the world may occur several issues just like unemployment etc. for the nation. Moreover, it can controlled by spreading awareness and implementing some strict laws by government to followed by audiences.
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Dear Sir/Madam,
I am one of the student who attended your cooker courses in recent ties that was conducted for most one month. As you have requesting me to share the feedback after finishing the course. I am writing this ltter to share my feedback.
Overall, i throughly enjoyed the course session after learning various types of cuisines that was i unaware from it including de classes before the starting f session classes. The memorable moment of this course is the interaction of teacher with their students by providing a better guidance how to make new dishes with the several food items and to serve it in a well mannered way. After learning this course, i have a bright future to make my career in cookery field. Now i feel like that i am living a life of independent person who can make different types of delicious cuisines in any place of the world.
I would strongly recommended you to make your career in hotel management field. There are lot of scopes in hotel management and it is a most demand able job as compared to a cookery teacher. You can get lot of oppurtunities to work on international platform by representing your own country dishes and learning various types of cuisines.
At last not least, i would like to suggest the whole youth pursuing your career in cookery field is one of te best choice to enjoy and live a better quality of life.
your sincerely
Samar anand
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Dear Sir/Madam,
I am one of the students who attended the classes of cookery course and learnt lot of things from your guidance. After finishing the cookery course , i have to provide the feedback of the course to the management team of cookery
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In nowadays, a large number of officials such as doctors and teachers are migrated to other countries due to the lack of resources and poor salary. This essay will portray about the biggest problems caused by leaving your homeland are effects on economy, lack of better education and healthcare facilities. To begin with, developing countries like south asian countries and african countries most of the migrants are unwilingy to leave their motherland for a better quality of life. In India, it seems like people are shifted to other countries due to the lack of resources as well as for better salary especially in doctors and teachers. The system of India is creaked due to the large amount of scams etc. It is believed that a large number of scams affect the economoy and increase the inflation rate. Due to inflation rate, the medical equipments who are purchased by other countries are become too costly to buy as well as in educational institution, teachers have to suffer to maintain thei budget to run his family. To tackle this condition, the indian govt have to point out the mistakes which are made by them. They have to work more on cyber security system to catch scamsters like Lalit modi, Vijay malayya etc. I think each and every indian does not forget their culture and moral values which is an identifiation for their. However, Indian govt has to make a better plan or strategy to secure the life of people. To conclude, it is cleared that system of India is a major defect which affects the growth rate in development. Hence, the doctors and teachers are in undercompulsion to leave their motherland.
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All over the world, criminal activities become a major issue for each and every citizen to live a safe life in the community. It is often argued among some people that capital punishment is significant to manage violation in the community but in my point of view, I totally disagree with the term of death penalty. This essay will portray us about how can we reduce criminal activities without implementing death penalty. To embark upon, capital punishment is carried out against convicted criminals who has been found guilty of commiting heinous crimes should be given life imprisonment. To exemplify, in gulf countries death penalty is a common stuff among their people but if any tourist who came across the world to take a tour of gulf countries it become so difficult to follow the rules and regulation of that country. Although,it seems like a threat for the tourist because of lack of freedom. I would like to suggest that gulf countries have to make some changes in their judiciary system or law. On the other side, most of the people believe that implementing capital punishment should increase crime rate in higher level. They think that capital punishment is not a solution to make a crime free nation. Therefore, the children have to follow their parent’s principles or values to developed and build a strong country. Furthermore, govt. have to also worked on their advanced technology to stop the criminal activities for an example, cctv camera is beneficial to catch the culprit etc. To conclude, it is cleared that there is no need of capital punishment in any nation. Hence, we have to change our mindset to think about how can we grow our nation.
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In this modern world, wasting of money is becoming a major issue for the common people, especially in birthday parties and weddings. It is believed that in these days excessive money were wasted on weddings as well as in birthday parties. This essay will portray about impact of budget by wasting of excessive money in an event or functions.
to embark upon, wasting excessive money on weddings and birthday parties have become common for several people. They consider this occasion as a chance to show of their luxury lifestyle. however in a reports said that 15-20 percent rich families waste their money like water. In addition, if we think about middle class families they have to carry their budget them. Hence, these days spending on celebration is a current trend.
To tackle this condition, we have to make a proper budget to deal with our expenses. Although, if we spend our money in necessities in the place of waste material, then we can control our budget as well as it may help on savings for our child. In other words, common people who came froe middle class family they have to spend their money wisely.
In conclusion, it is clear that several people invest their lot of money on weddings and birthday parties for their child happiness that if in future they should not be regret for nothing should be missing.
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