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    Rozmiin

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    January 31, 2022 at 11:27 PM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing -9 (Advertising)

    Technology is flourishing these days, we can see all kind of advertisement everywhere. To promote product or service of a category Companies do advertisements Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need, others say that advertisement tells us about new products that may improve our lives. According to me, these arguments need proper scrutinization before forming an opinion.

    Advertisement is a way to reach the target audience. Advertising has a positive role to play in modern society, helping us choose between a variety of products. Many adverts try to draw our attention by projecting products with new features. For instance, Food with vitamins, mobiles with multiple cameras, etc. other adverts try to attract customers by cutting corners on prices helping us to seek out the cheapest and best value products. In this case advertising is helpful because both buyers and sellers have benefits.

    On the other hand there are many harmful and dubious products which are projected in such a manner that people are lured to buy them . for example, soft drinks and packaged food which are actually unhealthy. Human needs are insatiable. Advertisements are created in such a way that some people buy the product instantly, hence few may not think about product benefits and features and may buy the product without giving it a second thought .

    In conclusion, there are both advantages and disadvantages of advertisements . by looking at both the sides it can be said that it is the peoples responsibility to buy the products after checking its authenticity and according to their needs.

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    Rozmiin

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    January 28, 2022 at 8:22 PM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing -7 (Outdoor Activities)

    Outdoor activity is an important part of children’s health and success, both physically and mentally. Some people think that outdoor activities are more beneficial for children’s development than playing computer games. I strongly believe that Outdoor activities provide a conducive environment for maintaining overall good health

    Children who constantly sit at one place playing computer games for hours can face several dangerous health issues. It can increase the chances of obesity, weaken the joints and muscles and make hands and fingers numb due to over exertion. Various studies suggest that it can also make the eyesight weak. Computer games are moreover addictive they may even skip their homework and assignment which can result in poor performance and also affect their emotional intelligence. Such children prefer being alone and interact digitally, this can limit their inter-personal skills in real life. The ferocity of modern games can negatively impact the moral development of the child.

    On the other hand, outdoor play keeps the child active and boost their physical stamina and fitness. Exposure to outdoor play can also shape their personality and helps them develop essential social skills. They develop a problem solving attitude, get to explore nature, and acquire new information. Being in the fresh air and sunshine can naturally provide them with vitamin D. Also, outdoor play provides a great opportunity to channelize their energy in a meaningful way.

    In conclusion, Physical outdoor activities helps children build strength, focus, self esteem and endurance. Children who play outdoors tend to develop a positive attitude towards life and have a calmer and happier disposition.

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    Rozmiin

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    January 27, 2022 at 5:20 PM in reply to: WRITING TASK 2- OPINION ESSAY (BUSINESS)

    Globalization has brought vast changes in consumer market. Supermarket chains are now appearing everywhere, in all the major cities as well as small towns. I believe supermarkets have managed to surmount the local shops leading to their closure which in turn may bring about death of local communities.

    Supermarkets are big stores which provide a wide range of products under one roof. Supermarkets are adept to marketing and consumer psychology. Moreover to attract customers the stores run multiple benefits such as discount, home delivery, different payment modes, points on purchase which customer can later redeem and several more which makes it difficult for local businesses to compete with.

    However, on other hand local stores have a long history of existence and they are part of the lives of people residing there. Even though super markets provides more varieties they lack the warmth and friendliness offered by local businesses. Due to huge discounts offered at super market people don’t contemplate before buying and end up ruining their monthly budget. Whereas at local shops people spend according to their needs. These days even local shops are trying to catch up with super markets by offering home delivery, monthly bill payment options and sometimes even agree to exchange or refund for food items purchased which a supermarket would not do.

    Local businesses are less susceptible to national down turn and more likely to work harder to stay open. Local businesses often sell local products which helps preserve the community distinction. Finally, I feel that expansion of supermarkets would not certainly take over local community.

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