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    Sakshi

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    August 12, 2021 at 7:32 PM in reply to: ACADEMIC TASK 1: BAR CHART

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    Sakshi

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    August 6, 2021 at 10:40 AM in reply to: WRITING TASK 2

    A few individuals opine that, it is pivotal that one should keep their working area and the house spic and span, with getting everything managed and in the right corner. Sorting out things in the correct site reflects one personality. I strongly agree with the above stated argument and this essay will discuss the same with some relevant examples.

    To begin with, keeping things well-presented is taught to us in childhood. It reflects the mannerism inculcated in an individual to showcase its inner self. Further, putting the objects in right position makes it easy to find them and saves a lot of time when they are needed again. For instance, if things are not arranged systematically and cluttered everywhere will present a negative image of the house owner to a person coming from outside. Evidently, if the apartment is not tidy it give back a wrong presentation of the person and can pave the way for more infections.

    To elucidate further, the offices should be kept organized and files should be handled in sorted way. So that, if a client is coming to meet you always take a positive image for a well-organized workplace. And one should always maintain their office to flourish and to attract more clients.

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    conclusion, there are many benefits on maintain our homes and offices in immaculate conditions. I believe any
    citizen that adopts the habit of being organized will increase their likelihood
    of accomplishing tasks and their chances of being better evaluated by their employers.

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    Sakshi

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    July 30, 2021 at 9:35 AM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing (problem in many countries)

    Obesity is a one of the utmost cause of concern in today’s world .This leading tendency is caused by several factors such as ingestion of huge proportion of fast foods, and people are enjoying sedentary life style. This essay will discuss the causes of obesity and offer some solutions.

    First and foremost cause of obesity is junk foods. It is often seen that people are fond of burgers, pizzas, noodles and coca as these types of foods are easily available to them. Moreover, in this modern era, Moreover, people in the developed countries are more emphasized on work than others. They sit and work the whole day with the computer and take the much junk food for time saving. And, this calorie-rich diet makes them obese. The other aspect would be sedentary life style as they like to spend more time in front of computers. For instance, its been proven that a huge number of population is facing obesity across the world because of inactive lifestyle. This technological advancement has reduced the level of physical activity in the specific age group.

    To overcome and release this health problem, the best way is the taking the regular physical exercise and having the diet foods. Taking exercise such as walking, running and physical exercise is the fittest economy activity for healthy. Everybody should take it about 15 munities for a day especially in the morning. Another way for healthy life is to have the diet food.

    To sum up, it is clear that main causes of obesity are unhealthy eating and not enough physical activities. This ailment can be prevented and treated by healthy eating habits and physical exercises..

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    Sakshi

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    July 16, 2021 at 9:47 AM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing (using computers)

    Computer is one of the largest inventions of mankind and its heavily used in almost all the fields like industries, education, medicines. Use of computers has a positive impact on children. Learning from an early age is an initiative step to use computers but, like any other technology, computers have their own demerits if overused or negatively used. Its time should not proceed so longer. This essay will discuss the benefits and drawbacks of using computers and provide logical conclusion.

    To begin with, Technology is a basic necessity in fast paced life and it is far better to train children from an early age of handling it, familiar with all terms and operating it. The main advantage of using it is that it enhanced the logical skills of a child, through internet they will be able to get access to unlimited information. A According to a research , children who uses(use) computers gain more learning as compared to children who don’t. Secondly, a child can get acquaintance about the advance technology and innovations in every field of life. Moreover, children can also buy books from online sites.

    Despite of having a countless of positive points, there are some disadvantages which can be controlled by the parents. Like excess using computers for long hours is not good for a child as it effects vision and posture. And also children gets (get) addicted of playing games on laptops ,gadgets rather than outdoor physical activity which makes them socially inactive. So, in spite of sedentary lifestyle, parents should encourage children to have some outdoor exercise in free time and time of using a computer should be fixed so that a child can manage to get information in the free time.

    To conclude, computers are used in schools and homes has become mandatory in order to get success. As assignments and presentations can be done only in computers. Therefore, the long hours can be reduced to limited time.

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    Sakshi

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    July 9, 2021 at 9:50 PM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing -9 (Advertising)

    In this modern era, different types of commercials play an important role in marketing. Many people believe that advertisement encourages us to buy unnecessary things while others think that advertising new products helps us in making our life easy. In this essay I would like to discuss both the aspect of the advertisements in our day to day life and give conclusion.

    To begin with, companies generally propagate only its the brighter side, thus providing an incomplete picture of the product. When only positive aspects are known, there is an inclination to buy that product ; thus, we end up purchasing something which is not required. One such example is herbal products and weight loss supplements. The use of herbal products to reduce weight has seen significant increase in the recent years, whereas health experts are of the opinion that weight can only be controlled through proper diet and exercise. Moreover, many a times, advertising is very useful tool for introducing new products. For instance, cellphone manufacturers cater information about their new products with unique features and knowing the information, consumers decide which products suit best for their need.

    Secondly, many people would blindly believe the products and its benefits as advertised. For example, many people buy all sorts of cosmetic creams, face scrub, hair oil and shampoos. Even without doing a proper study about the products ingredients and reviews. This is primarily because of the attitude as well as the mind set to get rid of pimples and hair fall and belief in the advertisement .Furthermore, normally in advertising, manufactures focus the best feature of their product which influences other manufactures to have better product in order to compete. In that case, competitors tend to offer a quality product in a comparatively reasonable price. Thus, consumers can get the best product with a cheaper price which ultimately develops their overall lifestyle.

    To wrap up, advertising has both positive and negative sides as every other thing has. So, it is the responsibility of the consumers not to be induced by the attractive ads and they should be sensible while taking buying decision that which one is appropriate for them and which one is not.

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