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    Shoaib

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    July 6, 2021 at 11:44 PM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing -7 (Outdoor Activities)

    Nowadays, some people believe that physical activities are more beneficial for children’s development as compared to playing computer games. I strongly agree with the statement that outdoor games playing an important role in the physical growth and development of our children than playing computers games.

    Outdoor activities are very beneficial for the development and growth of our children. it has been observed that physical activities make our children physically and mentally strong as compared to those children that spend most of their time on computers games. Outdoor games make them healthy and active in their life due to which they perform very well in all other activities like education, decision making, and other extracurricular activities. Giving an example of my friend kid’s who is always stood first in his class and also, he is a very good player of food ball.

    The current era is known as the era of sophisticated technology with a very sharp growth in artificial intelligence and data management. However, with this development in IT, there are so many computer games has been invented and our younger generation especially children are spending a lot of time playing these games. This is affecting their mental health and poor performance in their routine life while giving examples of PUBG games and almost millions of users daily playing these games throughout of the world.

    In conclusion, outdoor activities are necessary for the development of our children, and they should participate in these kinds of activities on daily basis, as result, it will make them healthy and strong. Also, parents should play their role to encourage their children to more participate in outdoor activities rather than waste their time on computer gaming.

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    Shoaib

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    June 8, 2021 at 10:52 PM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing -9 (Advertising)

    Advertising is an old concept that companies used to promote their products and services to the public, but nowadays, due to IT revolutions, we see so many ads, banners on social media, and televisions where companies are advertising their products and services. Emerging social media apps like Facebook, YouTube, twitters, Instagram’s cutting the huge cost of the companies. Usually, companies advertise those products that enforce the public to procure like beauty products, clothes, food and beverages, and luxuries items, etc. sometimes, these products are insatiable and consumer lose their money and trust in these kinds of companies but sometimes it really fulfilled the need of the customers and they refer these products to other families members and friends

    Nowadays, there is very tough competition among the companies which sometimes becomes very disruptive especially for entities that want to launch new products and services in the market. The companies should be meticulous when they are launching campaigns for new products and services, their offer should not be deceptive and should be gripping and entice that customer will drive to procure. The companies before launching the campaign should make sure that products should not be off-limits and make them easy for the customers to procure.

    According to my views, I am agreed with both statements because advertising is playing a very important role to boost the sales of companies for the products that are not customer needs but they procure because of knowledge that gains from advertisement and also advertising support a lot to those companies to create the awareness of new products among the people that will definitely add value to their lives by saving money and reducing procurement cost

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    Shoaib

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    June 4, 2021 at 11:07 PM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing -7 (Outdoor Activities)

    Firstly, I would like to define that outdoor activities are including different types of physical games like cricket, football, badminton, hockey, etc., and as we know that current period is known as IT revolutionary and they are so many developments in apps and computer gaming. As concern the topic, I am strongly agreed that physical games are more beneficial as compared to computer gaming. I am enlightened about the conducive benefits of outdoor activities and the disadvantages of computer gaming in the below paragraph.

    As we know that outdoor activities playing a very crucial role in the development of our children. It keeps our children healthy and they saved from so many diseases including heartbeat problems, issues related to back muscle pains, diabetes, eyesight, etc. when children play outdoor games its makes them strong and healthy. Our children make physical interactions with other similar age fellows and make new friends. Through this association, they learned that how to behave, react and adopt norms & values of society. Apart from, if children are playing different games, then its help them to do the exercise of all their bodies parts and their muscles become very strong and active. If children are playing outdoor games daily then they feel more healthy, vulnerable, and fresh as compared to others. It has been observed that these children are more intelligent and execute physical task swiftly as compared to other children those are spending most of the time at computer games.

    Nowadays, we are mostly dependent on advanced technology. Our children are spending most of their time playing computer games. It’s really affecting their mental health as well creating a lot of health issues at a very younger age. There are two main diseases found in our children including lower back pains and depression. However, it also affects their education and learning activities because most of the time they are spending at computer games.

    In conclusion, it has been observed that outdoor games are very beneficial for our children to develop as a concern to health issues and adopt the norms and values of the society for their future life. We agreed that advancement in technology brings a lot of innovation and learning activities for our children but excessive used of these brings a lot of issues related to mental health and as well physical health.

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    Shoaib

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    June 1, 2021 at 11:33 PM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing – 5 (Overpopulation)

    The concept of overpopulation is that when the growth in countries population are extraordinary and beyond the forecast in the specific time period. I strongly believe that overpopulation is a serious environmental issue especially in emerging countries where resources to facilitate the population are limited. My observations related to my statement are mentioned below

    It has been observed that overpopulation increase inflation in different countries and ultimately creates an impact on the global economy. Generally, we have seen developing countries are suffering more due to inflation where population growth rate is very high and countries economy is facing a lot of problems. As we have seen that Per capita income in these countries is very low as compared to developed countries. The people have less resources of income and jobs in the market. Ultimately it creates hypertension among the people and increases poverty. Giving an example of countries like India, Pakistan, and Bangladesh, where so many people are living under the line of poverty and so many, left their countries for better resources of job and earning opportunities

    Also, we have seen that overpopulation creates pollution that causes so many health issues and spreads a lot of diseases. Giving an example of many Asian countries where municipality system is not performing very well, which result in poor waste management and lack of the availability of clean water to drink.

    In conclusion, overpopulation is a global issue and there should be strong initiatives and strategic plans to control the population of countries. Governments should create awareness among the people that how to control the population, especially among those people who have less resources of earning. However, Governments also should support poor people who are suffering in poverty

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