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    Arsh

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    July 6, 2021 at 11:19 PM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing -7 (Outdoor Activities)

    Undoubtedly, playing out has more benefits when compared to playing games on computers but some people believe that when a child uses desktops , there ability to think grows immensely. I agree that spending time outside would be helpful for the overall development of a child but there are some advantages associated with spending time on computers that can not be ignored completely that we would discuss in the paragraphs given below.

    To commence with , firstly ,the primary reason why playing out is of great importance is because of its health benefits which includes both mental and physical health. For instance , when a kid is more into games such as basket ball or cricket , various health problems such as obesity or depression can be avoided. Thus it is apparent , a child who is more into sports has an ability to reach the level of fitness and can keep away variety of health issues.

    Asserting further , another vital aspect of outdoor games is that the child can be more socially active. For example , when a kid goes to some playground or park , the chances of making friends are way more than playing inside. Thus , it is clear that spending time out can make a child more friendly.

    However , there are a number of pros of video games and one of them is increased analytical ability or mental ability. While using a system to play video game , a child needs to be aware about every bit and detail , thus enhancing the thinking ability.

    To conclude , in my opinion , both these activities have their own advantages that can not be ignored but playing out has an upper hand. Parents should be vigilant enough to divide time in such a way that a kid devote more time to sports and less yet some time to computer games.

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    June 23, 2021 at 11:11 PM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing – International Sports Events

    Hosting international sports event can be of great significant value to the countries but there are some of the negative aspects associated with it as well. In my opinion , organizing an international sport event in a country would have more benefits which overshadows its disadvantages.

    To commence with , firstly , the primary advantage would be improved relationships between countries .For instance , when a country invites candidates from different places they get a chance to showcase their cultural values as well as unity their country holds. Thus , it is apparent that it would fortify the bond between countries.

    Asserting further, another main reason would be providing entertainment to the local people. Some of these events are basically treated as festival in few countries where everyone enjoys them either by watching them on television or seeing them live. For instance , in my country cricket is treated as a festival and is enjoyed by mostly every citizen. Though these events are fugacious , but provides happiness to viewers that can never go wrong.

    However , there are many drawbacks associated with it as well and one of them being that these events are extremely costly for some developing countries. In countries where economical conditions are not that great , where the residents are suffering from unemployment issues or hunger, spending money on these events can be demurring.

    To conclude , I would like to say that organizing international events are quite beneficial for the country but should always be conducted if the country can handle the financial loss they are going to face afterwards. If yes , then these events can be quite lucrative for many reasons.

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    June 22, 2021 at 11:24 PM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing (Teenagers and Crime)

    Over the last few decades , crime rate among teenagers has risen drastically and there are various possible reasons associated with it , which we will discuss in the paragraphs given below along with the measures that can be taken to avoid such crimes.

    To commence with , firstly , the primary reason of why the crime rate has went up is peer pressure and the urge to get accepted in certain group among children. This can be clearly seen by the number of cases that happen every year where teenagers get arrested for crimes such as drug selling and steeling things to afford products or things that their parents can not buy just to be able to show that to their friends.

    Asserting further , one of the other main reasons can be media showing gangsters as heroes , which would impact the mindset of a child in a negative way. There are various cases of eve teasing seen nowadays by teenagers because they believe if their movie character can do it , it would be some sort of appropriate thing to do.

    Although , it would be nearly impossible to decrease the crime rate completely , but there are numerous solutions that can be adapted to avoid it to some extend , one of them being good parenting. Parents should always be vigilant enough and should provide guidance to the child to follow right path and direction. Another very significant method that can help is involving teenagers into various extra curricular activities that the child is most interested in such as camping , singing , dancing etc. ,thus distracting them from any other inappropriate activity. To conclude , I would like to say that though crime rate among teenager has hiked immensely but if taken proper course of action can be avoided to a great extend.

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    June 22, 2021 at 11:18 PM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing (Teenagers and Crime)

    Over the last few decades , crime rate among teenagers has risen drastically and there are various possible reasons associated with it , which we will discuss in the paragraphs given below along with the measures that can be taken to avoid such crimes.

    To commence with , firstly , the primary reason of why the crime rate has went up is peer pressure and the urge to get accepted in certain group among children. This can be clearly seen by the number of cases that happen every year where teenagers get arrested for crimes such as drug selling and steeling things to afford products or things that their parents can not buy just to be able to show that to their friends.

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    June 22, 2021 at 12:27 AM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing – 1

    Tourism has increased rapidly over the last few decades because of the travel companies providing packages at a much cheaper cost , that would be easily accessible to everyone irrespective of their financial status. In my opinion , there are equal pros and cons when it comes to tourism which we would discuss in the below paragraphs.

    It is apparent that by visiting different places one could learn a lot about the culture and values that the local people over their follow which would further boost the economy. For example , every year thousands of tourists visit Taj Mahal because of the historic values that it has , that would further add value to the economy of the country as the price international tourists pay are more then what the local pays.

    However , their are many negative points that can not be ignored and one of them is disturbance to the environment. Although, some of the places has great significant value which attracts tourists but results in over crowdedness and could easily hamper the work of local people. Pollution being one of the other concerns as when the number of tourists increase , the requirement of vehicles and hotels would also rise. Unfortunately , this results in cutting down of forests to make new hotels , thus disturbing the environment.

    To summarize , I would like to say that tourism when it happens in a controlled way such that it does not effect the regular life of local population can be of no harm. This can happen only when it is monitored by the authorities that at particular time only a certain amount of travelers can visit.

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    June 8, 2021 at 11:20 PM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing -9 (Advertising)

    Advertisements can help us gain knowledge of a number of new things that we would require in our day to day life but can also lead us to buy products that would have no significant value. According to my opinion , both these viewpoints are correct at some level and we would be discussing these in the paragraphs given below.

    Undoubtedly , advertisements have become a vital aspect of our life as there are many new products in market which we come to know after seeing a banner or promotion of that thing on TV. For example , when I was buying a new straightener ,I was unaware that a new category known as brush straightener would press hair within a time span of 5 minutes. Hence would save our time and energy to a great extend. I came to know about this new straightener while I was scrolling my social media account.

    On the other hand there are various examples of how these advertisements can be disruptive as they would lure costumer to buy products that are fake. There are numerous companies in market available that would project their products are genuine. One of my friend was attracted towards a sunscreen lotion , claimed by the company as a star product but that cream resulted my friend with various skin allergies.

    To summarise , I would like to say that I agree with both statements that advertisements can help consumers to be aware about many new products but can also result in breaking trust of consumers as they would buy things that are not upto their expectation.

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