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    Dipti

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    July 30, 2021 at 10:11 AM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing (problem in many countries)

    Now a days, the countries which are technology driven generally suffer from the problem of obesity. This essay will draw your attention to the problems associated with this notion and suggest some solutions to curb this situation.

    The substantial reason of obesity is elevation of artificial intelligence & robotics technologies in the developed countries around the globe. These technologies have been developed to decline the significant amount of manual work at the workplace, as most of the repetitive & subtle work which was performed by the humans earlier, now performed by robots or automation. It’s been noticed recently, that the people suffering from obesity problems has been increased in the developed countries rather than developing countries due to rise of colossus technologies.

    In my opinion, the rational solution to this problem is to increase the numbers of jobs which should be human driven & curtail more physical strength rather than obsoleting manual jobs & replacing it by machines. After observing the increase of sedentary lifestyle, most of the organizations in the developed countries have changed their working culture and mindset and stopped automating their all processes & start promoting physical work and activities at their workplace to make employees more active, mobile & free from diseases.

    In the conclusion, due to the increase of technologies, people become more vulnerable to the disease of obesity. However, in order to overcome this problem, the most effective solution is to stop vanishing manual jobs in the market which are physically demanding.

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    Dipti

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    July 20, 2021 at 10:06 AM in reply to: WRITING TASK 2- ADVANTAGE DISADVANTAGE ESSAY

    Most of the cosmopolitan city has adapted English as it’s a prevalent worldwide as an international language therefore all sectors often follow this language & tourism sector is not untouchable. Definitely, the expansion of tourism has been possible due the extensive efforts that’s been made by the government to fetch the foreign tourists by making them opportune in terms of communication, in that case English plays a vital role but few scenarios are being overlooked with the widely acceptance of this language.

    I’m absolutely convinced with the fact that English has emerged as a compelling language in the market but tourism has made English a coercive language as that’s helped in the growth of the sector and eventually generating the revenue for the development of the country. Not only the tourists which get lure but also foreign investors who are looking forward for the places across the world where exploration would happen without hindrance of language has been finding comfortable.

    Subsequently, the most relevant question always pops up in my mind, would tourism be constricting to specific language? As per my conscience, the answer should be “NO” because there has been a significant amount of people who are not very well versed with the English language,for those tourism seems to be a nightmare & do not entail them in the development of tourism.

    To conclude, it’s undeniable that tourism has made English as imperative language across the globe because of this exemplary acceptance internationally but Tourism should not be confined to specific language otherwise the spectrum of originality will be thwarted.

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    Dipti

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    July 16, 2021 at 9:40 AM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing (using computers)

    Early age exposure of computers to kids are significantly beneficial as it’s being used in every sector in the world so it has been advantageous for them to start gripping the concept since the beginning therefore that would be easily conquered for later stages of life.

    Although there are ample of advantages of acquiring the knowledge of computers at early stage in the life but it too has plenty of disadvantages of the same scenario.

    I must admit that the scope of the technologies has been sprawling their wings in all sectors of the universe therefore this is the necessity of the time to come out from the confinements & refrain adopting conventional methods & start acquiring new skills. Taking this into considerations schools & institutions started prepping their children since the initial phase of their life for stepping-in in the new world of advanced technologies which would help them in grasping the knowledge of computers at early stage & get ready for the future. Unilaterally, the same approach has been imposed worldwide to make computer education imperative because at this age children are more volatile & creative to learn new things emerging around them & it’s opportune for them therefore advantages of acquiring computer knowledge is undeniable.

    On the contrary, there have been lot of cases witnessed where spending long hours in front of the screen are adversely affecting the mental & physical health of the children. They’re more prone & exhilarated towards the learning of new things that they don’t notice the negative impact on the same. Eye-sight weakness & migraine are the common diseases which we’d be encountering now a days. Parents should be vigilant & meticulously keeping a tab on the kids by restricting their time for using computers.

    Apparently, Technologies has always been important for the growth of the any generation therefore extensive learning of new skill at early stage of life for children would be effortless & smoother but it becomes subtle when availability of too much of anything is increased.

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    July 15, 2021 at 11:49 PM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing -9 (Advertising)

    Advertisement has always been a exhilarating phase of marketing which promotes the people to procure goods & services if required or not but also keep the customers updated with the new products rambling in the market. Both the aspects are hugely escalated by the boom of the Advertising by the different means in the market therefore I agree to the both scenarios.

    Earlier, there were the times when we had to rely on the conventional advertising options like Newspaper & TV commercials for making us aware about the new products, goods & services that were frequently emerging & making a gripping in the market. But now there are several other contemporary options of advertising like Email Marketing, WhatsUp marketing, Social Media Marketing etc which are more effective ways in spreading the new product news like a burning fire for boosting the purchase & increasing the sales as compared to previous years.

    Today, in this competitive world, technologies are updating every seconds apparently things are changing & improving accordingly which would make the lives of the insatiable people easier & comfortable.

    Subsequently, the recent mode of advertising has been an eye-catcher & repleted for the people who gets lure by the manner of presentations & information about the products driven by latest technologies therefore they make up their mind to purchase even if that’s not necessary. This is the adverse effect of the modern advertising therefore we should take a decision meticulously while going out for shopping otherwise you would end up by spending huge amount of money on the less important things.

    Although, the era of advertising would excel more in coming years with advancement of skills & technologies as marketing strategies are evolving day by day which lead to fetch more money in flow in the market by increasing sales but one should be extra cautious while picking anything to procure without getting perplexed.

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    Dipti

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    July 15, 2021 at 10:10 PM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing – 2 (Technology )

    It’s a hot burning topic of today’s world where we’ve numerous of gadgets & technologies emerging in the market that’s going to help the people to socialize easily with friends, colleagues & relatives.

    I agree to this notion up to certain extent that social media platforms are playing crucial role in creation of social groups over the virtual environment but there’s always another side of a coin where the people who are older & not techno savvy, those are filtered out from the world of advancement of technologies.

    I’d like to put light on the both aspects where new generation are crazy in adapting the addictive sophisticated modern technologies as those are turning out to be the advantageous options for the people living far from their places & on the contrary old generations are struggling to match the pace by trying hard to learn those subtle technologies.

    Obviously, the students & professionals who have been living abroad away from their families could connect freely & easily with their families with no geographical barriers that’s generates the feeling of proximity & closeness in them which prevent to feel out of the loop & definitely boost the confidence in them. This is the vital reason why popularity of the social media sites will continue to flourish day by day.On the contrary, Youth of our country has been so busy now a days that they’re hardly finding time for their own families therefore taking out time to meet personally with anyone would become overburden in that case these technologies are like a blessing in disguise.

    Subsequently, Old generation has a rational issue in adaption of new technologies therefore they are feeling like a quaint or left over in the society. Although, they have a will to admit it but the learning process is hindrance to them. This scenario doesn’t applicable for all old people, as most of their children are working or studying abroad therefore, if they wouldn’t have acquired the new competencies then it would be difficult for them to chat or connect with them therefore, they’ve learnt to use the social media quickly.

    Of course, I advocate the fact that the transformation of the world would only be possible once every generation of our society start accepting inevitable technologies which makes the life easy & comfortable in a long run.

    With the increasing publicity of social sites, it has been noticed that the behavior of the humans has been changing drastically as they are likely to live in a shell,less likely to enjoy with their families & utmost started felling irritated on tiny things,where no one could ever sense the intrinsic condition of their inner self. They want to be happy in their virtual environment & start taking their real relationships into granted.

    There are the platforms where you can make virtual friends around the world to whom you are not familiar with. People start considering them their real buddies but that’s not the case. They are being paid for their jobs & don’t have any emotions or sympathy for your friendships. Eventually, People get trapped into these scam & devastated themselves. Moreover, these situations can lead to mental illness where people couldn’t able to accept the reality of the scam & last you in depressing.Instead of finding friends around the world over the sites, we should rely our family & friends & open our heart to them,they would definitely understand & support you if you would be in trouble emotionally.

    Importantly, from the above facts it has been explicitly noticed that it’s overwhelming to have advancement in technologies to facilitates our lives by breaking several barriers in terms of virtual meetings, discussions, educations, ideas & many other useful resources with a single click whereas we have to be extra conscious while using it,as it would have adverse effect in your life if you had mishandled it.

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    Dipti

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    July 15, 2021 at 9:47 PM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing – 1

    A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income. Unfortunately, tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not managed correctly. Describe the advantages and disadvantages of tourism in the modern world. Do you think that benefits of tourism outweigh its drawbacks?

    Tourism has been a backbone for the economic development of any country therefore government’s prime responsibility is always to take cogent & significant steps to make this sector strong but shortcomings along with this boom is undeniable. Today, I would like to exhibit some advantages & disadvantages of the subtle aspects of tourism & help you to reach to the conclusion.

    Importantly, there’re three major advantages of excursion which are helping the government in generation of revenue; Portrait the positive image of the country worldwide & creations of opportunities.

    Firstly, Government has allocated significant percent of budget in the development of the tourism in last few years by foreseen the escalation of revenue generation in coming years which would going to be turn out to be the helping hand for the country’s economic condition. Presently, the contribution of tourism is 7-8% in total GDP growth which is massively higher from last year.

    Secondly, the country is known for its history & different cultures & traditions and that would make that country best place for tourists’. Tourists are always willing to cling on to the places which fascinate them in order of explore breathless beauty, historical places with interesting stories, hidden monuments, interested in studying & performing any research etc.

    Thirdly, there’re lot of opportunities that ramble with the growth of excursions which help the development of area & provide earning options for the localities. The huge amount of job opportunities will arise which progressively fulfill the dreams of the people who don’t want to relocate for the sake of earning bread & butter.

    However, there are ample of scenarios where we’ve witnessed the shortcomings of the tourism like devastation of tourist attractions & increase in the commercialization over the period of time.

    The enormous crowd at the tourist place led to the destruction of actual essence of that place. Some tourists start exploiting the environment like they wouldn’t be visiting again which should be strictly refrained by the government by imposing some rules. Moreover, that’s help in maintaining & curbing splendid environment.

    Also, wherever the crowd is increased, the commercialized activities would be increased accordingly, apparently all the commodities will become expensive & overvalued which gives the negative impression among the foreign tourist’s hence foreign tourists traffic gets restricted that’s result in the tremendous fall off revenue. Imperative measures should be taken by the government to keep a tab on the growth of unwanted commercialization.

    In order to wrap up the
    essay, although few disadvantages of tourism for which government is vigilant
    to head off the scenarios, there are multiple advantages of tourism for its
    exemplary stake in the development of the country.

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    July 6, 2021 at 10:17 AM in reply to: Letter Writing -4 (Lost Item)

    Dear Sir,

    I’m writing to bring to your attention that I’ve lost my Jet black color iPhone 7plus placed in a floral print iPhone case cover at the IGI airport, Delhi in the morning at 7:00am which was insured by your company under travel insurance policy whose policy number is #xyz123.

    I had recently purchased this phone from Khan market, Delhi for 1000$ whose configurations are 256 GB memory, processor Quad core & camera pixels 17 megapixel.

    I still remember that I’ve taken out my phone from the purse at the time of check-in & it was there in my hand till the security check. While boarding the flight I found that my phone was missing & searched in nearby places but couldn’t able to find it. There is high probability that it might have slipped from my hands at the time of boarding.

    I would be grateful if you would consider my request for the reimbursement the amount of the lost property under the captioned policy number.

    Your quick response would be highly appreciable.

    Your faithfully,

    Dipti Shikha

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