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    kunsoth

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    July 28, 2022 at 10:34 PM in reply to: Task 2 ( discuss both the views) : economic progress

    For many lands, Authorities claim that economic progress is the most crucial way for having wealth in countries while some claim that there are various sections that are equally vital. Personally, although they are equally important, a priority investment plan should be considered in different ways following the country’s level of development.

    On the one hand, Economic growth should be prioritized in undeveloped nations before developing in other progress in order to generate a bunch of income, which allow authorities to fulfil the population’s primary needs such as food, security and accommodations. In addition, the government could utilise this money on developing facilities’ life and bring prosperity to their region. For instance, individuals in some poor countries, which firstly improved their economy, gained better welfare compared with somewhere the government invested in other sections.

    On the other hand, Although economic growth is vital, Education’s curriculum and system in both school and university are also important, especially in developed and developing nations since the primary demands are not the most crucial for them anymore. Thus, nations can achieve their purpose easily due to an incline of effectively educated people. For instance, New Zealand, which mostly pays attention to the Education system, has many wise people and incredible innovations.

    In conclusion, I personally believe that undeveloped land should be prioritised on Economic growth instead of second needs in order to improve populations’ welfare and fulfil their primary need while Education system should be mostly improved in developed countries.

    Thank you madam…

  • Nowadays, educations is one of the most essential figures in peoples’ lives, therefore, many students were approved to pursue their education outside the boundary for a better opportunity a d life skills.

    On the other hand, some people believe there are also some drawbacks to studying abroad. In this essay, I will explain the benefits and drawbacks of studying in international countries.

    To begin with, some parents believe that their kids will thrive in a wider range of skills because they are in a multi-national environment, so they may have more connections and learn to cope with the diversity by themselves. Therefore, living in different countries allows them to enhance their living skill. For instance, I had a chance to attend a cultural Exchanged program in the United states, I experienced a culture shock during my stay, thus I need to learn the differences and put more attempts to understand the diversity.

    On the country, pupils are capable to experience some disadvantages from staying a different country as well because they are from diverse backgrounds and sometimes they may lack cultural knowledge so it could lead to a culture shock issue. One of the most obvious examples in the racism issue in Americans just because of their external appearance, which , actions which resulted in aggressive actions occured. Therefore, students need to handle the risks by themselves and difficult to get assisted.

    In conclusion, children will reap the benefits of studying abroad by getting wider ranges of their skill -set such as the ability to cope with the differences. Whereas, there also a vivid negative live in a different country as they may face some culture shock issue.

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    kunsoth

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    May 17, 2022 at 1:49 PM in reply to: Task 2 (Problem/solution essay) : Traffic congestion

    In metropolitan cities, Traffic jam is the underlying vital issue that is experienced all the time. However, I believe that the increasing number of motor vehicles are highly responsible for these jams while the public transit is going through the worst conditions to tackle this situation. This essay will elucidate the root cause of increasing transportation block and the ways to mitigate these worsening conditions.

    The most significant source of Traffic bottleneck is the increment in the population of motor wagon owners. In other words, The car drivers find it convention to travel by car, rather than worrying to follow the strict public transport time table despite the fact that they still have to wait in long automobile queue during rush hours. For Instance, back from work I do not have to plan my ride on public transport and can leave at a sometimes since the frequency of traffic at certain times are extremely high. Thus , the comfortable feature of a car is a boon for its owner but a curse for the hams in urbans areas.

    The most prominent solution to tackle this challenge is pack and -ride-scheme. In this, people have to park their vehicle at the city outskirt while travelling to the remaining destination in the city via public transit which is quite affordable. In a survey, It had been recorded that this plan has been implemented in the north of Essex city which bolstered the drop in traffic by 10% will decrease while imposed on the south of the city. Therefore, this scheme proves to be an efficient remedy available to relieve the continuously increasing traffic.

    In conclusion, the park of the car at the city fringes while using city amenities to reach the remaining destination seems a viable strategy to lessen the automobile drivers within the city. Ultimately, these steps can not only mitigate the out of hold situation but will also provide decrement in polluting bodies.

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    kunsoth

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    May 7, 2022 at 11:25 AM in reply to: Task 2 ( discuss both the views) : University or Job

    Some people who graduate from high school often have to face the dilemma of whether to join the academy or college to pursue higher study or to find a profession they accomplished for. This essay will discuss both views.

    On the one hand, it is fairly easy to understand the advantages of studying at university or college. First, the educational institution guides them to have a good foundation for their future life because it helps them to learn what they didn’t learn from the faculty, which cannot be achieved if they choose to work right after they graduate from academy. Second, they believe a higher-level study improves their qualification and the door to a better places. Also, helps to get good remuneration. professors who are able to give a recommendation letter to land in a good office could be a good example here.

    On the other hand, the idea of working straight after high institution is justifiable in some ways. It is common knowledge that working straight after high institute instead of pursuing higher teaching can help youngsters collect practical working experiences. If they do not want to go for another learning process, they can being to seek an activity as early as possible. As a result, they are likely to start their professional career sooner than their fellows. Moreover, young people can live independently on their own income without asking for financial support from their parents for the reason that they are able to earn money by themselves to meet their basic needs.

    In conclusion, it seems evident that both going for higher study at academy or college and working right after school are advantageous in their own ways.

  • At present days, study in abroad has become a trend. Because, parents are highly encouraged to send their children to higher study to any reputed institute by which they gain international exposure and confidence. But the disadvantage of this fact is that such trips are very expensive and also can cause of a security threat.

    Going abroad for educational purpose has lots of advantages. By doing this the young generation can meet with new peoples and new culture. they can learn to survive in such kind of difficult situation where things are not available now and then. It enhances their confidence. Meeting new people, they can get more friends and know new people as well as it grows their communication skills. when someone is about to fall in any danger or any critical situation they learn to handle this. This makes them to become an innovator. Also student who has a degree from any reputed international university can get a good job easily. That is the main reason that encourage students along with their parents to pursue higher study in foreign countries.

    on the other hand , study in abroad sometimes is very expensive to bear for any parents. many parents forced to take a loan for going their children to any university in overseas. In other word, some student cannot handle the foreign issues.

    Sometimes an overseas school trip for children is often causing a security threat. The student often got engaged with the crime. The important thing is, many students are highly encouraged to stay over there forever and never come back to their homeland. For example, in Bangladesh , every year there are many university’s students who go to abroad for higher study and never come back. This is a global lose for any country.

    To conclude, I will say that there are lost of advantages to study abroad, but after completing study students should have to come back to their own country and apply all methodologies these they learn from abroad to grow their own country’s status.

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    kunsoth

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    March 29, 2022 at 9:43 AM in reply to: Writing Task 1 (Academic) : Pie chart, work/study

    The pie chart compare the difference in the means of transport for people who the means of travel to a specific university for the purpose of study and work in 2004 and 2009.

    Overall, it is evident from the given charts that the significant changes were seen at three out of five modes of transport, namely: bus, bicycle, and car. Furthermore, while car was by far the most favorable mean in the first year examined, after 5 years, people tended to select bus as their main mode to reach this destination.

    In 2004, just above a half of staff and students who travelled to this university chose to go by car, followed by bus, which made up 33 per cent of total methods of transportation. Conversely, people were not keen on travelling by bicycle, walking, and train, as evidenced by their relatively smaller figures.

    After a half decade, the proportion of people decide to commute by bus increased sharply to 46 per cent seeing that the new bus stop was erected at this university in 2006. The similar trend could also be observed in the rate of bicycle users train passengers, and pedestrians . In contrast, due to the changes of car parking in 2008, the percentage of people enjoying travelling by car to this university witnessed a spectatular drop to 28 per cent.

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    kunsoth

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    March 25, 2022 at 12:35 PM in reply to: Task 2: (Agree/disagree) : Money management

    All children who are in high school should be trained in money management. This essay agrees with the argument that teaching youngsters about money is essential as it is a crucial skill for success in their future life.

    During teenage, all expenses of a student are met by their patents and hence they do not gain any experience in money management. Shortly after their teenage, these little ones will have to face real life where effective spending of money becomes a significant aspect of living. So, if proper training is provided for handling money at an early age, it can be beneficial for their future as well. For instance , a recent study conducted by the university of Delhi found that students who did not attend money management courses at school level were struggling to manage their income in future as well.

    After the school years, most of the students start earing by themselves. Contrary to the stage where they had to depend on elders for all needs, they reach a period where they have income of their own. If young people lack financial skills/ knowledge of how to use their money without saving any. So , If proper guidance on expense handling in included in school curriculum, this situation can be avoided. For example, the Time recently reported that most of the students who received training in income and savings paid on their own for their graduation.

    To conclude, all teenagers should be provided money management lessons in school. This can help them inn future and will also aid them in handling their income effectively.

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    kunsoth

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    March 24, 2022 at 7:26 PM in reply to: Task2 (Essay writing) : Office design

    Nowadays, there are more and more office are adopting an open-space design for employees. While it is not accepted by all the companies currently, I still view such a design style will definetely have a brightp future. In the following paragraphs, I will elaborate on my views from the perspective of the staff and the enterprises.

    Firstly, an opening design for the working environment is beneficial for employees’ working satisfaction. For one thing, people who are working in an open place it easier to build up a close rapport with each other, because it is much easier to interact and communicate o a regular basis. Thus it boosts a cooperative atmosphere, and it is constructive for forming a teamwork spirit around. With a friendly working environment, staffs are more likely to be productive, and therefore their job satisfaction more likely to be fulfilled.

    In addition, enterprises can benefit a lot by providing an opening design for their staff. For example, well-known companies like Google and Apple are all providing their designers with a more flexible working time and environment. In another word, instead of assigning them to work in a particular chamber from nine a. m. to five p. m., these global enterprises realize that how important it is for them to offer a rather free working condition in order to ensure their staffs’ productivity thus benefiting the company as a whole. Therefore, working in an open areas assists employees’ creativity and will evntually bring a huge profit to the company.

    In conclusion, working in an open-space environment bring benefits both from a personal level and a company level. Therefore, rather than thinking about how to regulate employees behaviours, maybe it is better for enterpreneurs to employ a new style of design inn our office envirnoment.

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    kunsoth

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    March 24, 2022 at 7:01 PM in reply to: Task2 (Essay writing) : Office design

    Nowadays,

  • The population statistics of three diffent sea mammals in the Gormez straits between 2006 to 2018 is portrayed in the given bar graph.

    Overall, it is clear that the population of all these aquatic animals increased between the years, despite some mild fluctuations in between.

    As seen in the chart, in 2006, the most populated sea animal in the Straits was seals. From this peak number of 43, its population fell surprisingly to almost 25 in 2010. However, between these two year, the population of whales and dolphins saw a slight climb. when the formr’s number grew from 23 to 26, the latter’s number increased from 17 to 22.

    When both the seal and dolphin population swelled consistently from 2010 to 2018, the growth of the whale population was erratic between the years. During this eight-year period, the number of seals went up from 25 to 44; the volume of dolphins grew more sharply to around 52. In2018, the total number of whales in the Gormez Straits was 28, which were just 6 more than in 2014.

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    kunsoth

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    March 15, 2022 at 12:51 PM in reply to: Task 1 (Letter writing) : Cookery school

    Dear sir/madam,

    I am writing this letter to express my pleasure in the culinary class in which I enrolled at your institute a month ago, and for your considerations for my feedback about it.

    Although the course was only a month-long, I learned many skills of cooking some exquisite Mexican dishes. The instructor- Jocelyn, taught the class with great passion whilst making the learning process fun, which made the whole experience very enjoyable. Furthermore, with this course, I learned some new delicious recipes that I have never tried before, which was wonderful.

    Inspired by the course and the instructor, I made my favourite dish I learnt from the classes for a small party I hosted, in addition to cooking a few other recipes for my family every weekend since the end of the class. Everyone was very amazed at how savoury and palatable the food was.

    It would be great if the institute provided baking classes, specifically done with chocolate and people will enroll in this course if you include it.

    I am thankful to you providing me with some great culinary skills.

    Yours faithfully,

    shirisha ketavath

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    kunsoth

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    April 1, 2022 at 10:18 AM in reply to: Writing Task 1 (Academic) : Pie chart, work/study

    Ok mam thank you

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