[Monika]

In some nations, few people get exorbitant wages. Some people feel it is fine for a country to pay high whereas others believe that the authorities ought to place some guidelines for controlling salaries of citizens.

[Monika]

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am Kelly Jonas residing at 41 Mill Road, London. I am a regular reader of your international travel magazine “Travel City”. I am writing this letter to express my concern over one of the incorrect articles published last week in your magazine about Kite Festival in Selly Oak, London.

Let me explain you the issue in detail. Your magazine states that the Kite Festival in Selly Oak is from 15th to 20th September which is incorrect, as it is from 14th to 19th September. Also it says that on last day of festival people can try various cuisines available on different food stalls absolutely free, however the food is not 100% free, but yes, there will be some discounts available. Request you to correct this information at the earliest as this kite festival attracts many tourists from all over the world. And this incorrect information would not only impact the reputation of the festival organizers but would also hamper people travel plans.

Would you kindly consider releasing one more edition of this magazine with correct information, so that people can accordingly do their bookings and also add a foot note mentioning that the details shared in previous edition are incorrect and should be ignored.

Looking forward to your immediate action on this problem.

Yours faithfully,

Kelly Jonas

[Monika]

An increased number of obese people is putting a pressure on the health care system in an effort to handle health related issues. Introducing more physical education subjects in the school curriculum is considered by some people as the best approach to address this concern.

[Monika]

1. An increased number of obese people is putting a pressure on the health care system in an effort to handle health related issues. Some people feel that introducing more physical education subjects in the school curriculum is the best approach to address this concern.

2. An increased number of obese people is putting a pressure on the health care system in an effort to handle health related issues. Introducing more physical education subjects in the school curriculum is considered by some people as the best approach to address this concern.

[Monika]

Many people think that both individuals as well as society are getting adversely impacted by the use of social networking platforms like Facebook, WhatsApp, etc.

[Monika]

Many people think that social networking platforms (such as Facebook) adversely impacts both individuals as well as society.

[Monika]

Many people think that enhanced usage of social networking platforms (such as Facebook) adversely impacts both individuals as well as society.

[Monika]

Many people think that both individuals as well as society are negatively impacted by the enhanced use of social networking platforms(such as Facebook, WhatsApp).

[Monika]

Please consider 2nd response for evaluation.

[Monika]

Please consider the last one for evaluation.