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    Praneeth

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    June 16, 2022 at 9:00 PM in reply to: IELTS Task 1: Crime in the City Center Line Chart

    This graph details the number of crimes that were reported over the course of nine years, from 2003 to 2012.

    In general, it is clear that the trends for auto theft and robberies have remained consistent within a certain range, while there has been a decline in the number of cases that involve burglary.

    To start, the number of car theft events decreased somewhat between 2005 and 2006, settling at 2000 incidents. At the end of the timeframe that was 2003 to 2012, there was a rising trend that reached the greatest number of events recorded, which was 2700. While the number of robberies has fluctuated between 500 and 1000 cases since the beginning of the timeline, when it was around 600 in 2003, it finally settled at around 700.

    The highest number of burglary incidents registered, reaching almost 3700, occurred in 2004. Between 2004 and 2008, there was a sharp dip, reaching about 1200. Subsequently, it rose and stayed steady between 1000 and 1500 from 2008 to 2012.

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    Praneeth

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    June 9, 2022 at 5:49 PM in reply to: Task 2 IELTS Essay: Information Technology

    Digital information has become so vital in everyone’s life in recent years that it now exists everywhere. While there are a few substantial disadvantages, I believe the advantages are superior to disadvantages.

    People may become addicted to a sedentary lifestyle as a result of information technology. Because everything is available through a digital screen. Another disadvantage is that persons who use social media are more likely to suffer from mental health problems like depression and anxiety. It’s because social influencers publish everything about their lives on social media, and people compare it to their own lives and strive to emulate them. It may or may not be achievable, and as a result, people may get troubled by what they lack, which can lead to mental illness.

    On the other hand, the advantages include that individuals will be able to gather a lot of knowledge if they utilise it precisely, and people from all over the world will be able to access any type of data that is valuable. Information digitization has benefited in job creation and globalisation. People in rural locations, for example, can acquire good education thanks to the availability of digital material on the internet. Another example is that several government apps are available for anyone who detects danger nearby and can alert the nearest police station with a single click. As a result, it is able to assist and save numerous lives all across the world.

    Finally, the advantages are more important than the disadvantages. Despite the fact that people may be affected by excessive use of social media and are fully reliant on digital information, they will get a great deal of knowledge if they use it correctly, which will aid in evolution and lifesaving. As a result, it is evident that the benifits outweigh the downsides, and that any problem can be manages with proper use of knowledge.

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    Praneeth

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    June 3, 2022 at 4:49 PM in reply to: Task 2 ( Crime )

    As per recent studies, it is observed that almost all lawbreakers tend to show violent traits and commit additional crimes upon being discharged from the confinements. This essay will explain the causes and potential solutions to reduce it.

    There are several reasons why offenders continue to commit crimes upon being released. It is their lack of ability to socialize and evolve to survive in and from the hatred of the world. To be more precise, society refuses to look at the good part or does not try to understand whether they changed or not, instead criticizes them and this leads them to think that they better be the person as before. Another reason is due to the treatments they get in the prisons. For example, the brutal punishments and environment filled with negative thoughts will not help them to change into a better person and leads them to commit crimes.

    To tackle such cases, it is important to analyze and create new approaches to mold their thought process. So for this, the form of punishment should depend upon what type of criminal activity was done by the offender. For example, the rehabilitation centers should work on their mental abilities to ensure they have changed and are emotionally stable to face the outside world. One more solution can be to provide them with financial means to cope with the fast-growing world and as they would be all by themselves and these may help them in getting back to their normal life.

    In conclusion, to avoid or reduce the wrongdoing by the lawbreakers, these solutions to recheck and provide them with an effective rehabilitation center will increase the chances of turning them into stable beings. It also depends on individuals’ attitudes whether to get influenced by others or to remain unchanged in committing the crimes.

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    June 3, 2022 at 4:10 PM in reply to: (Table Chart)

    The table provides the information regarding the number of international students who choose to study in Canada and the USA in the periods 2002 and 2003. Along with the upstream and downstream in both counties.

    Overall, there has been a huge rise in the number of students selecting Canada for their studies. Although there has not been a significant increase in students opting to study in the United States, the number of graduates aspiring to study in the United States is enormous when compared to Canada.

    In 2002, in Canada, there were 5400 students from China, but it rose to 7,850 with a spike of 45% in 2003. In the USA students coming from china just rose 6% to 116600 which is quite less compared to Canada. The students from India were more in USA, in both the years mounting to 200,000 and 182,000 with a -9% surge, while in Canada, even with a 35% increase the count was low(2100-2835).

    In Canada, the number of American students rose by 9% from 5,00 to 5,450 and in the USA, the number of Canadian students grew by a considerable amount of 7% to 33,170. In the end, the total number of international students choosing Canada has increased by 17%, from 59.870 to 70.004. whereas in the USA this figure has climbed just 2%, summing to 592,320.

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    May 27, 2022 at 5:34 PM in reply to: Essay -Advertising & Paying Attention

    Nowadays it is believed that the commercials often influence consumers’ decision to buy a product. On the other hand, few speculate that marketing disrupts one’s way to choose and holds off the decision to buy the products. This essay will discuss the pros and cons of the commercials.

    The ones who feel that the commercials play an important role in our lives, tend to explore the nature of human emotions. Singing to this nature commercial experts try to convince people by how a particular product will help in bringing a change in their day-to-day work, therefore leading consumers to buy their products. Overall marketing executives manipulate humans’ emotions to sell their products. For instance, the Samsung phone company persuades many customers by comparing the specification of the product with other ordinary products of the same class. This kind of approach is considered to be successful in increasing sales growth in many sectors such as cosmetics.

    However, few segments of society including myself, believe that there are too many options available in the market due to the advancement in technology in business sectors. People from these sections do not consider the commercials to hold any value in it. For example, if there is a need for a product people nowadays have all the information available on the web, so many ignore the promotions of any products and one more reason is due to the pop-ads which come onto the screen while working, enrages people with busy schedules, Therefore people overlook these promotions.

    In conclusion, both viewpoints were explained with suitable examples. In my opinion, we only consider the commercials only when we are very keen on purchasing a product with certain specifications.

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    May 25, 2022 at 11:39 AM in reply to: Academic Task-1 ( pie chart)

    The pie charts depict the average household budget for purchasing the basic necessities for different categories in china. These are calculated in the two years 1995 and 2011.

    Overall, the food section holds the largest consumer of the budget in both charts, over the period of time, after food, clothing is followed as the major necessity, while the remaining categories, household goods, and medicine consume much less.

    First of all, the percentage of food has drastically decreased over the period of 1995 to 2011 from 68% to 58% which was significantly a high loss. Whereas the second most consumer does not show any rapid changes, instead maintained the consumption rate with a minimal drop of 1 percent.

    Inversely, the expenditure on medicine has elevated from 4% in 1995 to a notable percent 11% in 2011, While the household goods showed a balanced change from 9% to 12% over the period of time.

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